mate more work is needed..!

My toughts exactly... Overall, it's a creepy header.

I'd just use a close up of a girl chocking on a dick and get rid of all of the other pics on there. the "ultimate kiss" text looks like pretty cheesy too

keep practicing and experimenting, it will help more. goodluck :)

Wow, a helpful business thread! Who knew?

I find banners to be very tricky too, Deb. I always pass them through a few of my loyal members for feedback before deciding which one to go with.

here's my thoughts..for what they're worth.

Make some eye contact. People want to see what they're buying, and if you're amateur, you're selling you. Not only your body, and sex acts, but your personality too and so much of that can come through the eyes. At the very least, they'd show that you're enjoying what you're doing (or gagging so hard your eyes water) and that goes a LONG way ;)

Not to be insulting, but the pic on the left looks like cousin IT. Unless you're working the long hair niche, I'd pic a shot that shows your face, or at least your best features.

Also..it's pretty sparse. This is an ad right? You're paying for every KB of data you load (assuming you're not freehosted) so why would you load a KB that isn't promoting you? Magazine ads don't have dead space, neither do smart retail stores, your headers and banners shouldn't either. Get as much of your "product" in front of the surfer as you can ;)

As far as picture quality, I'd start hitting up a board like amateur masters and look for other amateurs in your area that you could do content swaps with in return for photo services. It's a low cost way of increasing your exposure and getting higher quality content shot.

i think its great!

I think it needs a new deep throat picture.
That one looks half horse or something.

Lots of good ideas here Deb. When I say more sticky, I'm really just talking about the color scheme/or flow if you will. You want an add (or Banner) that is going to catch an eye when it's displayed. I'm just not getting the POP that I like to see in banners from this one. (No disrespect by any means).
I'm so really hating the image with you taking one all the way in and so close. Pan the camera back more so that you can really see what's your greatest profession. And like was stated before, I really hate, even visiting the site how you use that image covering half of your face, you need to close the deal with (like stated), your face, eyes, body, etc,etc.....

same here

that guy has to shave and a better pic - zoom out more

nasty nasty

colors look un apetizing!

Very bad colors, bad font choice and effects on them, bad pic focus..

The second attempts are better

If your doing 2 pics try 1 at the tip of his cock, then the other showing your skills.

turns me off for some reason

It's gritty. Give it a try on a few galleries.

GFY can be full of surprises... :winkwink:

because there is no apostrophe in the URL maybe?

wrong colors...

what's that being licked?

The new ones are better but still look like 80's VHS covers

K guys thanks again for all the input....the pic on the left in the second set is me all the way down licking his balls, i thought that i should show actual deepthroat and figured everyone would know what it is...
I have a couple people offering to help me so i think I will let them take over since I am not a designer....Thank you all Very much
Debs

Looks scary to me, if I visited that site I'd hit the power off on my computer within seconds and call my mommy.

Now wait a sec....
With the site converting less than 1:200 off tgps the design cant be that bad...I was asking about better ways to present myself, your thinking i need a redesign of the site also?
Seriously? lay it on me