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pr0 · 06-13-2002, 07:46 PM

Its not very often i ask someone to to rate my work, usually im making fun of other peoples work. But now i see just how much of a pain in the ass designing custom logo's is. Im used to just doing photo minipulation for content etc. Today i took my first swing at designing a logo. Heres what i got so far, suggestions & comments would help a great deal thanks

Besides the obvious flaws in my ability to make it transparent

SetTheWorldonFire · 06-13-2002, 07:49 PM

Not bad, For starters.

Text needs to be bigger or the bubble smaller.
It's too scatered, try overlapping objects.

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 07:50 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SetTheWorldonFire
Not bad, For starters.

Text needs to be bigger or the bubble smaller.
It's too scatered, try overlapping objects.

Overlapping objects, thats news to me, i'll have to look that one up.

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 08:05 PM

Hmmm smaller seem to look a little better, what do you think

or

SetTheWorldonFire · 06-13-2002, 08:10 PM

Try putting the camera between the words. Overlap the camera with the text or vice versa.

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SetTheWorldonFire
Try putting the camera between the words. Overlap the camera with the text or vice versa.

ahah! good idea...thanx

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 08:37 PM

starting to look betta?

alias · 06-13-2002, 08:38 PM

foe · 06-13-2002, 08:39 PM

how bout putting the camera in the backround and making the words a little transparent will not make it look as plain.

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 08:41 PM

Ok now the next question i have is about centering things in photoshop. For instance i make a 300x150 banner & want to center the text in the rectangle banner. How would i go about doing this perfectly?

If you can't tell im totally new to this shit.

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 08:43 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by foe
how bout putting the camera in the backround and making the words a little transparent will not make it look as plain.

Transparent so that you can actually see the camera coming through from behind the words?

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 08:50 PM

is this kinda what you meant by making the words transparent

SetTheWorldonFire · 06-13-2002, 08:56 PM

Comming along

pr0 · 06-13-2002, 09:02 PM

Oh well i'm done for tonight, i've learned quite a bit about photoshop tonight, thanks for the help guys.

06-13-2002, 07:46 PM	#1
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	Graphics Designers, please critique Its not very often i ask someone to to rate my work, usually im making fun of other peoples work. But now i see just how much of a pain in the ass designing custom logo's is. Im used to just doing photo minipulation for content etc. Today i took my first swing at designing a logo. Heres what i got so far, suggestions & comments would help a great deal thanks Besides the obvious flaws in my ability to make it transparent

06-13-2002, 07:49 PM	#2
SetTheWorldonFire Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: California Posts: 7,444	Not bad, For starters. Text needs to be bigger or the bubble smaller. It's too scatered, try overlapping objects. __________________ www.STWOFDesign.com hit me up on icq 154206276 or Skype: JaimeGizzle

06-13-2002, 08:10 PM	#5
SetTheWorldonFire Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: California Posts: 7,444	Try putting the camera between the words. Overlap the camera with the text or vice versa. __________________ www.STWOFDesign.com hit me up on icq 154206276 or Skype: JaimeGizzle

06-13-2002, 08:38 PM	#8
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06-13-2002, 08:56 PM	#13
SetTheWorldonFire Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: California Posts: 7,444	Comming along __________________ www.STWOFDesign.com hit me up on icq 154206276 or Skype: JaimeGizzle

06-13-2002, 08:05 PM	#4
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	Hmmm smaller seem to look a little better, what do you think or

06-13-2002, 08:37 PM	#7
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	starting to look betta?

06-13-2002, 08:39 PM	#9
foe Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: CT Posts: 5,246	how bout putting the camera in the backround and making the words a little transparent will not make it look as plain.

06-13-2002, 08:41 PM	#10
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	Ok now the next question i have is about centering things in photoshop. For instance i make a 300x150 banner & want to center the text in the rectangle banner. How would i go about doing this perfectly? If you can't tell im totally new to this shit.

06-13-2002, 08:50 PM	#12
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	is this kinda what you meant by making the words transparent

06-13-2002, 09:02 PM	#14
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	Oh well i'm done for tonight, i've learned quite a bit about photoshop tonight, thanks for the help guys.