Mainstream Website Design - Please critique

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  • czarina
    Webmaster Extraordinaire
    • Jul 2002
    • 10752

    #1

    Mainstream Website Design - Please critique

    Hi guys!
    I just designed this for a friend in Tijuana, and I thought I'd run it by you to see what you think. It's just the index page for now:
    http://www.fotografiaroyal.com/

    Input appreciated. Thanx!
  • BlueWire
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2004
    • 4628

    #2
    I feel like you have a really nice start. Its a little awkward how it fits together. Just that it doesn't exactly gel all together. But i'm sure you can make it happen

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    • teg0
      Confirmed User
      • Jan 2006
      • 4204

      #3
      It seems that the logo is a little crooked at both the top of the page and in the flash slideshow. Overall its a good start. The only other suggestions that I have is you might want to consider making the text in the white areas a little darker.

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      • CaptainHowdy
        Too lazy to set a custom title
        • Dec 2004
        • 94733

        #4
        Looks nice and classy, czarina !

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        • gimo33
          Confirmed User
          • Mar 2006
          • 5599

          #5
          Looks nice
          cant understand the language though...
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          • gimo33
            Confirmed User
            • Mar 2006
            • 5599

            #6
            Waaa... dunno what happened... sorry..
            Last edited by gimo33; 06-28-2006, 12:30 PM.
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            • czarina
              Webmaster Extraordinaire
              • Jul 2002
              • 10752

              #7
              thank you guys.
              the logo was provided by the client like that, and yes, I agree that it is crooked, but I didn't want to do anything with it until I talked to him.
              I do intend on fixing it, also I want to increase the jpeg quality on the flash file.

              I'll post here once it is more finished. thanx again!

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              • czarina
                Webmaster Extraordinaire
                • Jul 2002
                • 10752

                #8
                Originally posted by BlueWire
                I feel like you have a really nice start. Its a little awkward how it fits together. Just that it doesn't exactly gel all together. But i'm sure you can make it happen
                I know what you mean. The original idea that I offered himwas the go with all straight lines, no curves. But when he saw the site, he asked me to add a curve on top. I would've preferred to do it like my original design, but... it's his site

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                • BlueWire
                  Confirmed User
                  • Nov 2004
                  • 4628

                  #9
                  Originally posted by czarina
                  I know what you mean. The original idea that I offered himwas the go with all straight lines, no curves. But when he saw the site, he asked me to add a curve on top. I would've preferred to do it like my original design, but... it's his site

                  What I was more kind of talking about was just how everything is separated. Kind of like a TV dinner how none of the food touches...

                  Sometime a little cobbler hitting your chicken fried steak doesn't hurt though

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