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  • czarina
    Webmaster Extraordinaire
    • Jul 2002
    • 10752
    #1

    Mainstream Website Design - Please critique

    Hi guys!
    I just designed this for a friend in Tijuana, and I thought I'd run it by you to see what you think. It's just the index page for now:
    http://www.fotografiaroyal.com/

    Input appreciated. Thanx!
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    • BlueWire
      Confirmed User
      • Nov 2004
      • 4628
      #2
      I feel like you have a really nice start. Its a little awkward how it fits together. Just that it doesn't exactly gel all together. But i'm sure you can make it happen

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        • teg0
          Confirmed User
          • Jan 2006
          • 4204
          #3
          It seems that the logo is a little crooked at both the top of the page and in the flash slideshow. Overall its a good start. The only other suggestions that I have is you might want to consider making the text in the white areas a little darker.

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            • CaptainHowdy
              Too lazy to set a custom title
              • Dec 2004
              • 94733
              #4
              Looks nice and classy, czarina !

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                • gimo33
                  Confirmed User
                  • Mar 2006
                  • 5599
                  #5
                  Looks nice
                  cant understand the language though...
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                    • gimo33
                      Confirmed User
                      • Mar 2006
                      • 5599
                      #6
                      Waaa... dunno what happened... sorry..
                      Last edited by gimo33; 06-28-2006, 12:30 PM.
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                        • czarina
                          Webmaster Extraordinaire
                          • Jul 2002
                          • 10752
                          #7
                          thank you guys.
                          the logo was provided by the client like that, and yes, I agree that it is crooked, but I didn't want to do anything with it until I talked to him.
                          I do intend on fixing it, also I want to increase the jpeg quality on the flash file.

                          I'll post here once it is more finished. thanx again!

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                            • czarina
                              Webmaster Extraordinaire
                              • Jul 2002
                              • 10752
                              #8
                              Originally posted by BlueWire
                              I feel like you have a really nice start. Its a little awkward how it fits together. Just that it doesn't exactly gel all together. But i'm sure you can make it happen
                              I know what you mean. The original idea that I offered himwas the go with all straight lines, no curves. But when he saw the site, he asked me to add a curve on top. I would've preferred to do it like my original design, but... it's his site

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                                • BlueWire
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Nov 2004
                                  • 4628
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by czarina
                                  I know what you mean. The original idea that I offered himwas the go with all straight lines, no curves. But when he saw the site, he asked me to add a curve on top. I would've preferred to do it like my original design, but... it's his site

                                  What I was more kind of talking about was just how everything is separated. Kind of like a TV dinner how none of the food touches...

                                  Sometime a little cobbler hitting your chicken fried steak doesn't hurt though

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