Please critique my new design! - GoFuckYourself.com

rowan · 06-27-2006, 01:48 PM

Dear fellow webmasters,

I have been tweaking this new design for the past couple of weeks and I think it's at the point where I am ready to start throwing some real traffic at it. I'm really looking forward to seeing the fruits of my labour, so I would appreciate any comments you have before I make it 100% live. Thank you in advance!

http://www.digteens.com/newsite.html

PS: Please be constructive rather than nasty, it's too easy to hurt people's feelings when you're a keyboard warrior.

gimo33 · 06-27-2006, 01:51 PM

too many colors dude... try to limit the # of color combinations

Fucksakes · 06-27-2006, 01:52 PM

too much color, blurry pictures, some don't load, red bg hard on eyes, images need to be huge, need more galleries, toplists are nice for trades, a good looking header.

Fucksakes · 06-27-2006, 01:53 PM

nice galleries thou.

XPays · 06-27-2006, 01:54 PM

this is a joke right

nobody could randomly have each of every mistake so perfectly

Doctor Dre · 06-27-2006, 01:56 PM

You gotta crop the thumbs proprely... and I think you need to redo everything from A to Z. It just hurts my eyes.

BoyAlley · 06-27-2006, 02:04 PM

My eyes my eyes my eyes!!!!!!

candyflip · 06-27-2006, 02:06 PM

I think the line of text at the bottom just about says it all.

BusterBunny · 06-27-2006, 02:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doctor Dre

You gotta crop the thumbs proprely...

at the very least

BAKO · 06-27-2006, 02:11 PM

My eyes .......

I'm a sig whore · 06-27-2006, 02:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fucksakes

too much color, blurry pictures, some don't load, red bg hard on eyes, images need to be huge, need more galleries, toplists are nice for trades, a good looking header.

what he said.

rowan · 06-27-2006, 02:20 PM

Thank you GFY! I will do some work on the design later. The prod is already up to 59%, I will be buying 100k of feeder soon!

Tanker · 06-27-2006, 02:21 PM

LOL great troll

AmateurFlix · 06-27-2006, 02:30 PM

Holy Rubik's cube batman!

ContentSHOOTER · 06-27-2006, 02:32 PM

The colors are a bit much... I'm sure you will get all the advice you need here to fix it...

aico · 06-27-2006, 02:35 PM

Too many colors, the thumbs are not the same size ratio as what you have so they look squished.

too bright

-Turk- · 06-27-2006, 02:36 PM

omg... stop now. i beg you.
the future of our children depend on it!

Farang · 06-27-2006, 02:38 PM

you're not serious, right?

sigurman · 06-27-2006, 02:39 PM

looks like a christmas tree...

justsexxx · 06-27-2006, 02:41 PM

Looks better than your other sites

j/k ;-)

BluewireAngie · 06-27-2006, 02:44 PM

Too many colors.

teg0 · 06-27-2006, 02:52 PM

Too many colors and too many tables as far as code goes. Its not an efficient page. No real basic design, just a lot of things going on. In design, less is more.

rowan · 06-27-2006, 03:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by teg0

Too many colors and too many tables as far as code goes. Its not an efficient page. No real basic design, just a lot of things going on. In design, less is more.

That's why I used no graphics! I guess I didn't get it quite right then. :-)

czarina · 06-27-2006, 03:03 PM

honey, that's not a site, it's a collection of thumbs and colors.

cyberstar · 06-27-2006, 03:59 PM

simple solution - hire a designer!

.. problem solved

crockett · 06-27-2006, 04:00 PM

It hurts my eyes man..

Playa-Deak · 06-27-2006, 04:02 PM

Rowan, I've seen some of your other TGPs... I even use your slothtrader script on my sites... This site here, doesn't seem like something you did... Its rather amateurish... Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute... Scrap it, and do it over and buy a template... My eyes literally are hurting and acting funny...

Mr. Romance · 06-27-2006, 04:09 PM

i dig it....

Mr. Romance

rowan · 06-27-2006, 07:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Playa-Deak

Its rather amateurish...

I thought the amateur look converted well?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Playa-Deak

Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute...

Well... it was more like 5...

The traffic from GFY has pulled down the average prod, it's only 38.5% now.

I am still buying the feeder though! Just you watch! I'm gonna make it big!!!

MichaelP · 06-27-2006, 07:41 PM

which design ?

Spunky · 06-27-2006, 07:56 PM

Time to start over from scratch

BIGTYMER · 06-27-2006, 08:00 PM

Jeezzz... Where to start?

Resize thumbs for better aspect ratio.
Reduce thumb size for faster page loads.
You have broken images.
You have too many colors.
You have spelling errors.

Funny joke. :D

belle2003 · 06-27-2006, 08:00 PM

check it out immediately mythrillworld.com

rowan · 06-27-2006, 08:40 PM

This is it GFY. I've poured my heart and soul into this business and now it's finally paying off. I'm rich! Richer than astronauts.

BIGTYMER · 06-27-2006, 08:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rowan

This is it GFY. I've poured my heart and soul into this business and now it's finally paying off. I'm rich! Richer than astronauts.

Good to hear! Keep up the talented design work.

You should open your own design site.

Australian Designs by Rown.

blazi · 06-27-2006, 08:48 PM

best design I've seen all year!!

LOL

madawgz · 06-27-2006, 09:42 PM

um, i think you should let a professional handle it...2c

gandalfuy · 06-28-2006, 12:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by XPays

this is a joke right

nobody could randomly have each of every mistake so perfectly

gooddomains · 06-28-2006, 12:46 AM

perfect site

The Sultan Of Smut · 06-28-2006, 12:55 AM

We got a winner!

gandalfuy · 06-28-2006, 01:07 AM

but erika, she is so cute:

PinkElectric · 06-28-2006, 01:11 AM

Do you use drugs???

nico-t · 06-28-2006, 04:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Playa-Deak

Rowan, I've seen some of your other TGPs... I even use your slothtrader script on my sites... This site here, doesn't seem like something you did... Its rather amateurish... Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute... Scrap it, and do it over and buy a template... My eyes literally are hurting and acting funny...

wtf are you serious

rowan · 06-29-2006, 01:53 PM

Site is for sale, bids start at $300!

PinkElectric · 06-29-2006, 01:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rowan

Site is for sale, bids start at $300!

QUE??

hova · 06-29-2006, 01:55 PM

that's just wrong

rowan · 06-29-2006, 10:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PinkElectric

QUE??

Already had an offer of $315 from someone, you gonna better it?

MaddCaz · 06-29-2006, 10:30 PM

naht bahd

Kimo · 06-30-2006, 12:27 AM

too many colors, red background = NO, and lime green text? is it christmas porn?

exterminator · 06-30-2006, 12:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cyberstar

simple solution - hire a designer!

.. problem solved

hmm...maybe i can help with it.
pls check my portfolio..thanks!

06-27-2006, 01:48 PM	#1
rowan Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Australia Posts: 17,393	Please critique my new design! Dear fellow webmasters, I have been tweaking this new design for the past couple of weeks and I think it's at the point where I am ready to start throwing some real traffic at it. I'm really looking forward to seeing the fruits of my labour, so I would appreciate any comments you have before I make it 100% live. Thank you in advance! http://www.digteens.com/newsite.html PS: Please be constructive rather than nasty, it's too easy to hurt people's feelings when you're a keyboard warrior.

06-27-2006, 01:51 PM	#2
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06-27-2006, 01:54 PM	#5
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06-27-2006, 02:06 PM	#8
candyflip Carpe Visio Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: New York Posts: 43,068	I think the line of text at the bottom just about says it all. __________________ Spend you some brain. Email Me

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06-27-2006, 01:52 PM	#3
Fucksakes Shit... Fuck! What the Hell? Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,567	too much color, blurry pictures, some don't load, red bg hard on eyes, images need to be huge, need more galleries, toplists are nice for trades, a good looking header.

06-27-2006, 01:53 PM	#4
Fucksakes Shit... Fuck! What the Hell? Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,567	nice galleries thou.

06-27-2006, 02:04 PM	#7
BoyAlley So Fucking Gay Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 19,714	My eyes my eyes my eyes!!!!!!

06-27-2006, 02:20 PM	#12
rowan Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Australia Posts: 17,393	Thank you GFY! I will do some work on the design later. The prod is already up to 59%, I will be buying 100k of feeder soon!

06-27-2006, 02:21 PM	#13
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06-27-2006, 02:35 PM	#16
aico Moo Moo Cow Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Washington State Posts: 14,748	Too many colors, the thumbs are not the same size ratio as what you have so they look squished. too bright

06-27-2006, 02:36 PM	#17
-Turk- I gag on GFY Admin's cock!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 350	omg... stop now. i beg you. the future of our children depend on it!

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06-27-2006, 02:39 PM	#19
sigurman Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: WWW Posts: 665	looks like a christmas tree...

06-27-2006, 02:41 PM	#20
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teg0 Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gringo in Puerto Rico Posts: 4,204	Too many colors and too many tables as far as code goes. Its not an efficient page. No real basic design, just a lot of things going on. In design, less is more.

06-27-2006, 03:03 PM	#24
czarina Webmaster Extraordinaire Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A beautiful beach... Posts: 10,748	honey, that's not a site, it's a collection of thumbs and colors.

06-27-2006, 03:59 PM	#25
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06-27-2006, 04:02 PM	#27
Playa-Deak Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 1,065	Rowan, I've seen some of your other TGPs... I even use your slothtrader script on my sites... This site here, doesn't seem like something you did... Its rather amateurish... Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute... Scrap it, and do it over and buy a template... My eyes literally are hurting and acting funny... __________________ I shoot Amateur Porn. Mostly Black Girls and Some White Gals... My site is www.FreakyDeak.com Check me out! ICQ: 205-608-095

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06-27-2006, 07:41 PM	#30
MichaelP Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: QWEBEC Corporate Office Posts: 7,124	which design ?

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BIGTYMER Junior Achiever Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Walled Garden Posts: 17,066	Jeezzz... Where to start? Resize thumbs for better aspect ratio. Reduce thumb size for faster page loads. You have broken images. You have too many colors. You have spelling errors. Funny joke. :D

06-27-2006, 08:00 PM	#33
belle2003 Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 58	no this is more awesome check it out immediately mythrillworld.com

06-27-2006, 08:40 PM	#34
rowan Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Australia Posts: 17,393	This is it GFY. I've poured my heart and soul into this business and now it's finally paying off. I'm rich! Richer than astronauts.

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06-28-2006, 12:46 AM	#39
gooddomains Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Netherlands Posts: 10,127	perfect site

06-28-2006, 12:55 AM	#40
The Sultan Of Smut Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Vancouver Posts: 4,325	We got a winner!

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06-28-2006, 01:11 AM	#42
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