TightFetish.com New Tour, this what you wanted? - GoFuckYourself.com

Ordo · 04-25-2006, 11:23 PM

Ok,
in another thread many of you said I needed to hire someone to re-do my tour for TightFetish.com before you would promote the site.

Below is the link to a concept of a new design by someone you wanted me to hire. I'd like to know if this is what you would like to promote and if not what changes you would like to see made.

I'm only doing this new tour to get your support, so let me know your thoughts.

http://fdsign.com/tightfetish/preview.html

tenderobject · 04-25-2006, 11:28 PM

i cant seem to read the text in white.. im not that impressed..

WWC · 04-25-2006, 11:28 PM

looks nice to me....might want to add some more nudity though...good luck!

harvey · 04-25-2006, 11:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tenderobject

i cant seem to read the text in white.. im not that impressed..

that was one of the things to discuss, here's the "clean" font version
http://fdsign.com/tightfetish/preview2.html

tenderobject · 04-26-2006, 12:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harvey

that was one of the things to discuss, here's the "clean" font version
http://fdsign.com/tightfetish/preview2.html

much better

fitzmulti · 04-26-2006, 01:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harvey

that was one of the things to discuss, here's the "clean" font version
http://fdsign.com/tightfetish/preview2.html

MUCH easier to read

More Booze · 04-26-2006, 03:55 AM

looks like a jeans ad. =)

shack · 04-26-2006, 04:05 AM

I like it, however you need to show the surfer that they do eventually get their kit off.

Unless you're chasing the target catalog type surfers..

Violetta · 04-26-2006, 04:11 AM

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Originally Posted by WWC-Raffi

looks nice to me....might want to add some more nudity though...good luck!

I don't think nudity is the main aspect here...

kursk · 04-26-2006, 04:24 AM

well it's totally amateur design work.. what can i say.. =\

Sarah_Jayne · 04-26-2006, 04:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shack

I like it, however you need to show the surfer that they do eventually get their kit off.

Unless you're chasing the target catalog type surfers..

or possibly somebody with a jeans fetish?

harvey · 04-26-2006, 02:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kursk

well it's totally amateur design work.. what can i say.. =\

guess 8+ years and thousands of works (like in several 1000s, you know) for the biggest companies in adult make me an amateur. Just for your info, each of my designs is done not only with design in mind, but also marketing study, psichology of color, layout performance and such. Yes, I'm one of the few designers in this board with specific university studies. That makes possible to tell you all the mistakes in your 4/5 designs, but since I'm an amateur and you're a pro guess you don't need it

Happily I'm a lucky amateur who can decline work and send it to other designers with a little more ethics and an idea about what they're talking about, including one task coming from somebody who saw this sample and contacted me a few mins ago. Yeah, I'm a lucky mofo and all my clients must be idiotic. Wait: in my schedule there are 3 big companies waiting for their work to be done, I'd tell them I'm not skilled enough

btw, take a look at this old page to get a clue about what you're talking about

and a final hint: bevels are so '95. And photoshop tutorials are overrated

harvey · 04-26-2006, 02:36 PM

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Originally Posted by sarah_webinc

or possibly somebody with a jeans fetish?

indeed

there's no nudity, it's a jeans fetish site, Sarah knows what she's talking about, she's quite expert in fetishes

harvey · 04-26-2006, 03:42 PM

bump for some opinions

CynthiaB · 04-26-2006, 03:58 PM

My two cents - I like the general feel, but the girl in the center bothers me, she's looking down over her shoulder and she's very shadowy. I want her looking out a ME enticing me to come in.

Cyn

alan-l · 04-26-2006, 04:03 PM

Really nice. Original. Appealing. Straight to the point.

I know it's just a sample, but I'd add some text and lotsa samples in next pages or maybe below this splash

btw Harv, turn on your ICQ, I need to ask you something

04-25-2006, 11:23 PM	#1
Ordo Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 1,186	TightFetish.com New Tour, this what you wanted? Ok, in another thread many of you said I needed to hire someone to re-do my tour for TightFetish.com before you would promote the site. Below is the link to a concept of a new design by someone you wanted me to hire. I'd like to know if this is what you would like to promote and if not what changes you would like to see made. I'm only doing this new tour to get your support, so let me know your thoughts. http://fdsign.com/tightfetish/preview.html __________________ Savor Premium Affiliate Area Here

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04-26-2006, 03:58 PM	#15
CynthiaB Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The OC Posts: 1,274	My two cents - I like the general feel, but the girl in the center bothers me, she's looking down over her shoulder and she's very shadowy. I want her looking out a ME enticing me to come in. Cyn

04-26-2006, 04:03 PM	#16
alan-l Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Location: look behind you Posts: 2,477	Really nice. Original. Appealing. Straight to the point. I know it's just a sample, but I'd add some text and lotsa samples in next pages or maybe below this splash btw Harv, turn on your ICQ, I need to ask you something