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Silent_Thunder · 03-19-2006, 05:21 AM

I'm highly interested in how words, sentences and even punctuation affect visitors. As english isn't my primary language, writing even a few appealing sentences requires lots of efforts. Could you take a look at my 404 text and tell me how it could be improved? The mission of this sentence is to make visitor look bellow

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Unfortunately, the page you were trying to view doesn't exist,
but why don't you look bellow for a great offer that will satisfy all your desires 100% guaranteed!!!
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or

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I coudn't find the page you were looking for, but the good news is, that while looking for it, I found a great offer and I'm showing it only for you as I like you a lot!

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Terry · 03-19-2006, 05:38 AM

First, bellow is spellled below, only 1 l.

I am always changing up my 404's and I have found that many different things will work. The text that does well for me is...

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The page you were trying to view has been removed. For your convenience we have listed similar pages that may interest you.
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I also change up this text to include the words free porn, get free access, or whatever offer the site has which I am promoting.

Hope this helps.

Silent_Thunder · 03-19-2006, 06:08 AM

I like that neutral feeling in your promo text. Visitor won't feel as he is forced to do anything.

And yeah, I've read somewhere that the word FREE is the most affective word for promo texts. Words like LOVE, GUARANTEED, DISCOVER go along with it.

Thanks for your notes!

ffmihai · 03-19-2006, 08:42 AM

just put a huge text saying CLICK HERE FOR FREE PORN

03-19-2006, 05:21 AM	#1
Silent_Thunder Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Europe Posts: 5,258	404 text I'm highly interested in how words, sentences and even punctuation affect visitors. As english isn't my primary language, writing even a few appealing sentences requires lots of efforts. Could you take a look at my 404 text and tell me how it could be improved? The mission of this sentence is to make visitor look bellow ---------- Unfortunately, the page you were trying to view doesn't exist, but why don't you look bellow for a great offer that will satisfy all your desires 100% guaranteed!!! ---------- or ---------- I coudn't find the page you were looking for, but the good news is, that while looking for it, I found a great offer and I'm showing it only for you as I like you a lot! ----------

03-19-2006, 05:38 AM	#2
Terry Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Montreal Posts: 1,604	First, bellow is spellled below, only 1 l. I am always changing up my 404's and I have found that many different things will work. The text that does well for me is... --- The page you were trying to view has been removed. For your convenience we have listed similar pages that may interest you. -- I also change up this text to include the words free porn, get free access, or whatever offer the site has which I am promoting. Hope this helps. __________________ TengaCash ICQ: 6776764

03-19-2006, 08:42 AM	#4
ffmihai keep walking... Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 7,177	just put a huge text saying CLICK HERE FOR FREE PORN __________________

03-19-2006, 06:08 AM	#3
Silent_Thunder Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Europe Posts: 5,258	I like that neutral feeling in your promo text. Visitor won't feel as he is forced to do anything. And yeah, I've read somewhere that the word FREE is the most affective word for promo texts. Words like LOVE, GUARANTEED, DISCOVER go along with it. Thanks for your notes!