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Pornopat · 01-18-2006, 12:15 PM

I love it when they play hard to get. I found this cuty working in a gas station. She was very too hot to be working in a gas station. I use my money to convince her to stop to work for a little bit to talk with me. I try to talk about sex she only want to talk about her dream about getting married one day. It took me a long time for her to show me her tits. She shows me tits and then her boss comes outside so i have to pay him also to leave us alone. She makes soooooo good tits but it takes her along time to let me touch. They felt so fantastic and soft, and her pussy looked so good i gave her all the money i had to take her to the bathroom so i could feel her tits more while she sucked my dick and i fuck her pussy. She said she never saw a dick so big and was scared but not for too long.

So what do you think about this text?

GlydeGirl · 01-18-2006, 12:17 PM

Sounds like a great fantasy... but I don't believe it happened in real life!

wdsguy · 01-18-2006, 12:18 PM

I've seen better stories written by a 5th grader.

Rui · 01-18-2006, 12:19 PM

"She makes soooooo good tits "...ehh

Juilan · 01-18-2006, 12:21 PM

add: she smelled like gasoline and beef jerky, that always revs me up.

Pornopat · 01-18-2006, 12:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Rui

"She makes soooooo good tits "...ehh

Yeah...that line gave it kind of away for me who wrote this crap...

jacked · 01-18-2006, 12:24 PM

back to school back too schoool

you need some help with your story writing there killer

Lifer · 01-18-2006, 12:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Pornopat

I try to talk about sex she only want to talk about her dream about getting married one day. It took me a long time for her to show me her tits. She shows me tits and then her boss comes outside so i have to pay him also to leave us alone.

Sounds like Russian or Polish to me

EroticySteve · 01-18-2006, 12:26 PM

I think that there are some spelling and grammar issues, make a few "factual" corrections and it is a good start to a hot story.

Pornopat · 01-18-2006, 12:26 PM

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Originally Posted by jacked

back to school back too schoool

you need some help with your story writing there killer

Hehehe its not mine!
You would be surprised if you knew where I took it from..

Project-Shadow · 01-18-2006, 12:29 PM

Yeah.. i'd be upset if I paid someone to write that story as content.

Pornopat · 01-18-2006, 12:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Lifer

Sounds like Russian or Polish to me

You are close! It sounds like the language of an eastern European pornstar we all know....

Pornopat · 01-18-2006, 12:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Project-Shadow

Yeah.. i'd be upset if I paid someone to write that story as content.

The sad part is that the owners of the website are so rich they just dont care...

je_rome · 01-19-2006, 12:45 AM

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Originally Posted by wdsguy

I've seen better stories written by a 5th grader.

I agree. it sounds so monotonous

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