studiocritic |
11-27-2005 11:42 PM |
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Originally Posted by LB-69
Studiocritic, your post make much sence.. can you do me a favour and look through mine new opened site tour and let me know what you think, no templates was used, the pics and texts was written by me and my team, it's 5 tour pages, the last is videotour with 2 downloadable trailers: http://www.lb-69.com/tour1.htm
Thanks in advance for your time !
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0) i didnt look at photo quality cuz i dont erm, enjoy ladyboy pics.
1) tour looks good, good copy etc..
2) join page looks pretty good but the elements are not designed for usability, the color scheme does not guide their eyes to the form.. it needs to be more linear so they can see the form and read the text in the same "eyefull". also there should be a pic on this of your best looking model, to entice them to join.
make those join page changes and hit me up on icq, i'll take another look
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