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RogerV 10-31-2005 03:19 PM

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Originally Posted by jakethedog
I think the trailer couldn't be any different length ...your editing keeps the viewer interested .. i almost closed it right before they started taking off their tops ..hahaha. then i had to stick around to see the bottoms come off ....i do kinda agree some of the models are a bit weak acting wise ... they could maybe be put into the main content and off the trailer if you have any better shoots ...i guess thinking about now ... you probably did your best with that ..lol but as far a a concept ... great !! I love when someone pops something new into the market ....props

we have more girls so we will continue to switch it up and try new things.

Thank you.. so far its doing amazing and converting extremely well. better than anything I'm promoting right now

billywatson 10-31-2005 03:24 PM

that one in the light green/teal bikini looks like a post-op! :1orglaugh

That site is gonna do well. No doubt!

gdog 10-31-2005 03:38 PM

I like it Roger, it is captivating and keeps you watching. As for length, you could go longer, take a look at the Shanes world teasers and also Vanilla's site. That teaser really tells a story about what is about to happen.

Keep up the great work man

RogerV 10-31-2005 03:42 PM

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Originally Posted by gdog
I like it Roger, it is captivating and keeps you watching. As for length, you could go longer, take a look at the Shanes world teasers and also Vanilla's site. That teaser really tells a story about what is about to happen.

Keep up the great work man


thanks alot :thumbsup its still a diamond in the rough that we all know will polish up real Pretty.. Get er done

SkeetSkeet 10-31-2005 03:47 PM

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Originally Posted by RogerV
http://www.bikiniscam.com/gal_Promo.php

turn up your volume its funny

Nice concept

High Plains Drifter 10-31-2005 03:55 PM

I like the concept because its a sexy woman voice doing the persuading, not a cheesy dude.

RogerV 10-31-2005 04:22 PM

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Originally Posted by skinnywussy
I like the concept because its a sexy woman voice doing the persuading, not a cheesy dude.


plus she gets girls that we could never get because she is a hot redhead :winkwink:

I think this is the next big site by the conversions i'm seeing..
its only going to get better

Ice 10-31-2005 04:33 PM

Thats great Roger... I like that a chick is doing it instead of a guy....

Serge Litehead 10-31-2005 04:45 PM

nice concept, didnt grab my attention at the first seconds (maybe needs more dynamics/action there) but continued to watch it by the end wanted to see more.

bdld 10-31-2005 05:55 PM

i'd cut that down to a minute and add better/more graphics and make it a real trailer.

jwerd 10-31-2005 05:56 PM

50..........

RogerV 10-31-2005 05:56 PM

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Originally Posted by holograph
nice concept, didnt grab my attention at the first seconds (maybe needs more dynamics/action there) but continued to watch it by the end wanted to see more.

Hmmm interesting what would you recommend? showing a girl behind the camera first?

My girlfriend is hot but she wont let me put her face out there..

Serge Litehead 10-31-2005 07:55 PM

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Originally Posted by RogerV
Hmmm interesting what would you recommend? showing a girl behind the camera first?

My girlfriend is hot but she wont let me put her face out there..

some spice.. need to grab attention right from the first moment it starts playing, maybe few stills of girls, site logo changing fast or flashing type of video effect in a way like bam bam bam :) or maybe a narration of whats being written, your GF's background voice is sexy but was too repetative on "taking off" part throughout the trailer, if she could talk more it'd be also attracite, imho.
overall its great.

Serge Litehead 10-31-2005 08:15 PM

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Originally Posted by holograph
some spice.. need to grab attention right from the first moment it starts playing, maybe few stills of girls, site logo changing fast or flashing type of video effect in a way like bam bam bam :) or maybe a narration of whats being written, your GF's background voice is sexy but was too repetative on "taking off" part throughout the trailer, if she could talk more it'd be also attracite, imho.
overall its great.

on another thought, if you could make (just an idea) black text screens shorter in time in the beginning that could do it.. like one text screen for a second or two and then vids started.. i could be well out of line here and the trailer is good as, it is i guess i have to see it in the morning or something.

swoop 10-31-2005 08:21 PM

some cuties there, good promo.

except the one in the greenish/blue bikini. that voice and body, thought it was a skinny man

lagwagon 10-31-2005 08:24 PM

super long, but that is a great trailer. !!

RogerV 10-31-2005 09:46 PM

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Originally Posted by holograph
on another thought, if you could make (just an idea) black text screens shorter in time in the beginning that could do it.. like one text screen for a second or two and then vids started.. i could be well out of line here and the trailer is good as, it is i guess i have to see it in the morning or something.

I love the feedback no worries... we are always improving what we have

RogerV 10-31-2005 09:48 PM

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Originally Posted by swoop
some cuties there, good promo.

except the one in the greenish/blue bikini. that voice and body, thought it was a skinny man

Yea I agree she is ugly but dont you think it adds to the reality of it.. if they are all hot who would belive it then.

and they might be actors but 70% of them its there first shoot so they are real nervous


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