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jwerd 10-31-2005 05:56 PM
50..........

RogerV 10-31-2005 05:56 PM
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Originally Posted by holograph
nice concept, didnt grab my attention at the first seconds (maybe needs more dynamics/action there) but continued to watch it by the end wanted to see more.
Hmmm interesting what would you recommend? showing a girl behind the camera first?

My girlfriend is hot but she wont let me put her face out there..

Serge Litehead 10-31-2005 07:55 PM
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Originally Posted by RogerV
Hmmm interesting what would you recommend? showing a girl behind the camera first?

My girlfriend is hot but she wont let me put her face out there..
some spice.. need to grab attention right from the first moment it starts playing, maybe few stills of girls, site logo changing fast or flashing type of video effect in a way like bam bam bam :) or maybe a narration of whats being written, your GF's background voice is sexy but was too repetative on "taking off" part throughout the trailer, if she could talk more it'd be also attracite, imho.
overall its great.

Serge Litehead 10-31-2005 08:15 PM
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Originally Posted by holograph
some spice.. need to grab attention right from the first moment it starts playing, maybe few stills of girls, site logo changing fast or flashing type of video effect in a way like bam bam bam :) or maybe a narration of whats being written, your GF's background voice is sexy but was too repetative on "taking off" part throughout the trailer, if she could talk more it'd be also attracite, imho.
overall its great.
on another thought, if you could make (just an idea) black text screens shorter in time in the beginning that could do it.. like one text screen for a second or two and then vids started.. i could be well out of line here and the trailer is good as, it is i guess i have to see it in the morning or something.

swoop 10-31-2005 08:21 PM
some cuties there, good promo.

except the one in the greenish/blue bikini. that voice and body, thought it was a skinny man

lagwagon 10-31-2005 08:24 PM
super long, but that is a great trailer. !!

RogerV 10-31-2005 09:46 PM
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Originally Posted by holograph
on another thought, if you could make (just an idea) black text screens shorter in time in the beginning that could do it.. like one text screen for a second or two and then vids started.. i could be well out of line here and the trailer is good as, it is i guess i have to see it in the morning or something.
I love the feedback no worries... we are always improving what we have

RogerV 10-31-2005 09:48 PM
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Originally Posted by swoop
some cuties there, good promo.

except the one in the greenish/blue bikini. that voice and body, thought it was a skinny man
Yea I agree she is ugly but dont you think it adds to the reality of it.. if they are all hot who would belive it then.

and they might be actors but 70% of them its there first shoot so they are real nervous


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