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  • MarkTiarra
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    • Aug 2002
    • 3833

    #1

    Need opinions on a song

    Is this any good, just eh or does it suck the llama's flaming piles?

    http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/No%20Liquid%20Savior.mp3

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  • Ice
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    • Nov 2002
    • 26053

    #2
    The intro was a bit messy, then when the vocals kicked in the mix for the guitar was too low, couldn't really hear the bass... I like what ya did around the 2:18 mark... maybe add a guitar solo in there....

    Just play with the mix a bit and it would be much better
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    • Tylo
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      • May 2002
      • 2108

      #3
      Yo Mark listening to it now.. Like Ice said.. little off at first but kinda catchy along the way.
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      • MarkTiarra
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        • Aug 2002
        • 3833

        #4
        Thanks for taking the time to listen and make intelligent comments. =]

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        • Ice
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          • Nov 2002
          • 26053

          #5
          Originally posted by MarkTiarra
          Thanks for taking the time to listen and make intelligent comments. =]

          No prob man... I love music... I play guitar and keyboards and dabble in recording/mixing when I can find the time.

          Is that your band?
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          • nofx
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            • Nov 2002
            • 16826

            #6
            sounds like the next wannabe nu-metal crappy Creed/Staind type band IMO

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            • MarkTiarra
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              • Aug 2002
              • 3833

              #7
              Originally posted by iceicebaby
              No prob man... I love music... I play guitar and keyboards and dabble in recording/mixing when I can find the time.

              Is that your band?
              It's just me messing around in my studio. I haven't done music professionally in years and mostly I do jazz/fusion when I record. But, my daughter had me teaching her alot of the "numetal" stuff lately so I ended up writing this on a riff I was messing with. I just wondered if it was any good. I can judge the jazz/fusion stuff since it's what I love most but newer rock sounding stuff I have no good barometer.

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              • MarkTiarra
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                • Aug 2002
                • 3833

                #8
                BTW - this is more like what I've been doing the last few years:
                http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/stormchaser.mp3

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                • Ice
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                  • Nov 2002
                  • 26053

                  #9
                  Originally posted by MarkTiarra
                  It's just me messing around in my studio. I haven't done music professionally in years and mostly I do jazz/fusion when I record. But, my daughter had me teaching her alot of the "numetal" stuff lately so I ended up writing this on a riff I was messing with. I just wondered if it was any good. I can judge the jazz/fusion stuff since it's what I love most but newer rock sounding stuff I have no good barometer.
                  Pretty fucking decent for you messing around man.

                  d/l stormchaser now
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                  • badmunchkin
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                    • Feb 2003
                    • 3797

                    #10
                    not bad, esp. if this isn't your first choice of music. The chord changes in the bridge section aren't really working for me. Like Ice said, the breakdown section after the 2nd chorus is a high point and could be expanded on.

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                    • ~Ray
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                      • Jun 2003
                      • 18361

                      #11
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                      • MarkTiarra
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                        • Aug 2002
                        • 3833

                        #12
                        Originally posted by iceicebaby
                        Pretty fucking decent for you messing around man.

                        d/l stormchaser now
                        Thanks. Curious to see what you think of the one that's more my bag.

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                        • Ice
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                          • Nov 2002
                          • 26053

                          #13
                          Originally posted by MarkTiarra
                          Thanks. Curious to see what you think of the one that's more my bag.

                          Interesting man.... Dream Theater meets Frank Gambale and Robben Ford with some mad drums... I like it
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                          • MarkTiarra
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                            • Aug 2002
                            • 3833

                            #14
                            Originally posted by iceicebaby
                            Interesting man.... Dream Theater meets Frank Gambale and Robben Ford with some mad drums... I like it
                            =] I had a blast doing those drums. Took me two days to get them how I wanted. You got anything online I can hear too? It's always good to trade.

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                            • Ice
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                              • Nov 2002
                              • 26053

                              #15
                              Originally posted by MarkTiarra
                              =] I had a blast doing those drums. Took me two days to get them how I wanted. You got anything online I can hear too? It's always good to trade.
                              Nothing online.... it's all on my other computer that is still in Toronto. It would be fun to jam with ya one day though. I'm still trying to get the recording/mix thing down... I'm more old school... plug a Les Paul into my Marshall and rock it out.... but there is so much you can do with the stuff out these days....
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                              • Ice
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                                • Nov 2002
                                • 26053

                                #16
                                Post more songs Mark
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                                • LittleSassy
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                                  • May 2005
                                  • 7402

                                  #17
                                  pretty good since its quite a new turn for ya music...post some more please

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                                  • MarkTiarra
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Aug 2002
                                    • 3833

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by LittleSassy
                                    pretty good since its quite a new turn for ya music...post some more please
                                    Well okay cool. =] I've got stuff up there all the way back from the 1990 hairband days.

                                    Here's another jazz/fusion one:
                                    http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/ageb4beauty.mp3

                                    And a one with vox that's kinda old:
                                    http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/highwaytonowhere.mp3

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                                    • Ice
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Nov 2002
                                      • 26053

                                      #19
                                      Originally posted by MarkTiarra
                                      Well okay cool. =] I've got stuff up there all the way back from the 1990 hairband days.

                                      Here's another jazz/fusion one:
                                      http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/ageb4beauty.mp3

                                      And a one with vox that's kinda old:
                                      http://www.marktiarra.com/mp3/highwaytonowhere.mp3
                                      d/l now
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