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06-09-2005, 12:15 AM
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So Fucking Banned
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,014
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My first gallery
Hi
This is my first gallery, so wat's your oppinion? http://www.fuck4bucks.com/BSP-Sara Which submitter for beginer like me ? Thanks |
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06-09-2005, 12:22 AM
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Too lazy to set a custom title
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Join Date: May 2002
Location: Corona Del Mar, CA
Posts: 10,520
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Not bad for a first gallery... but a little hard on the eyes....
IMO - center the logo and remove the ".com" from it - make "home of the big meaty sausage" the same style as the logo - use consistant thumb sizes. all vertical or all horizontal. crop em if you have to. - add border to thumbs - make your outgoing link graphic shorter, not so many words. Give it a nice "ENTER HERE FOR SAMPLE VIDEOS" or something on one line. - Give yourself some <BR>'s under the bottom outgoing link, so it's not burried on the bottom. - bring the word "of" up to the first line on the bottom outgoing link and make "BigSausagePizza.com" bigger and brighter, a diff color. - make background black or really dark green. nice work though.... |
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06-09-2005, 12:24 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Europe
Posts: 1,054
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No bad
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06-09-2005, 12:24 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: The OC baby!
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I don't promote it, but is BigSausagePizza a MILF site? I thought it was just hardcore? If it's a MILF site, then your last line is fine, otherwise that "Mom" reference might turn the intended target audience off.
The chick in the pics is solid, the layout is average, the text is average, it's not bad. Should do fine. Use that chameleon submitter, many GFYers are always yapping about it.
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06-09-2005, 12:25 AM
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Too lazy to set a custom title
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 16,753
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at least content is right=\
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06-09-2005, 02:37 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 2,615
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design wise it isn't bad for a first time but the color background hurts my eyes.
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06-09-2005, 02:40 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2003
Posts: 13,098
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not too shabby
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06-09-2005, 02:51 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2001
Location: Oakland, CA
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It won't sell, and here's why:
You need to TEASE the surfer. Don't give away everything. Right now I can sit down and have a wack attack to at least 3 images in this gallery. http://www.fuck4bucks.com/BSP-Sara/i...xy-Sara-10.jpg http://www.fuck4bucks.com/BSP-Sara/i...xy-Sara-11.jpg http://www.fuck4bucks.com/BSP-Sara/i...xy-Sara-12.jpg They key to making sales is to leave the BEST images OUT. The tease is KEY to sales. |
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06-09-2005, 06:25 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: USA
Posts: 8,704
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All good advice but let me add one more thing.
Make all the pictures teh same height. Its ok if that makes some wider, but it just looks better. |
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