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  • Dynamix
    G F Y not
    • Jan 2004
    • 2910

    #1

    GFY! Help critique my resume

    I'm going to be applying at a few local design places and want to make sure everything's in tip-top order before I start contacting them. A few things right off the bat:

    1) I know the "Digital Portfolio" doesn't work - I'm still organizing that.
    2) I'm still awaiting 4 letters of recommendation which will accompany the one that is already there
    3) Before you tell me it's "out-there" or doesn't look "professional" -- I know. I figure I'll be applying to design companies and advertising agencies who will (hopefully) remember something "different" and "creative."

    Aside from that, rip me apart or give me praise


    http://www.patrickwmoore.com/

    TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services
    ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com
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  • Dynamix
    G F Y not
    • Jan 2004
    • 2910

    #2
    Oh two other things:

    There will be more "References" soon, just waiting to verify with a few old employers.

    I know the "Download" links at the bottom don't work yet.

    TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services
    ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com
    See who I am at AdultWhosWho.com!

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    • Tango
      Let's Tango!
      • Apr 2005
      • 1570

      #3
      biz isnt good??
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      • BigRod
        Confirmed User
        • Apr 2005
        • 3685

        #4
        That looks really good man
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        Mainstream Ad Agency Owner
        ICQ: 607306

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        • Dynamix
          G F Y not
          • Jan 2004
          • 2910

          #5
          Originally posted by Tango
          biz isnt good??
          It's been slow lately and I'm going to get kicked out of college the end of the semester (3 days from now) so I'm trying to plan ahead..

          TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services
          ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com
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          • broke
            Confirmed User
            • Aug 2003
            • 4501

            #6
            The objective needs work...

            In an objective -- no employer cares about what you hope to "gain". Personally, I'd rework it to show what you can offer.
            Perfect Gonzo

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            • Dynamix
              G F Y not
              • Jan 2004
              • 2910

              #7
              Originally posted by broke
              The objective needs work...

              In an objective -- no employer cares about what you hope to "gain". Personally, I'd rework it to show what you can offer.
              Great, thanks

              TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services
              ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com
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              • DateDoc
                Outside looking in.
                • Feb 2005
                • 14243

                #8
                OBJECTIVE

                Gain a position in the Graphic Design / Advertising field. Maintain industry standards while creating professional, effective, aesthetically-pleasing print and internet solutions.

                this would sound better....

                OBJECTIVE

                To create cutting edge, aesthetically pleasing, high converting print and internet promotions for clients by implementing my knowledge of graphic design and advertising solutions.

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                • Dynamix
                  G F Y not
                  • Jan 2004
                  • 2910

                  #9
                  Originally posted by BusterPorn
                  OBJECTIVE

                  Gain a position in the Graphic Design / Advertising field. Maintain industry standards while creating professional, effective, aesthetically-pleasing print and internet solutions.

                  this would sound better....

                  OBJECTIVE

                  To create cutting edge, aesthetically pleasing, high converting print and internet promotions for clients by implementing my knowledge of graphic design and advertising solutions.
                  Changed, Thanks

                  TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services
                  ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com
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                  • broke
                    Confirmed User
                    • Aug 2003
                    • 4501

                    #10
                    Originally posted by BusterPorn
                    To create cutting edge, aesthetically pleasing, high converting print and internet promotions for clients by implementing my knowledge of graphic design and advertising solutions.
                    I'd leave ", high converting" out...



                    But that's definitely a step in the right direction.
                    Perfect Gonzo

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                    • Dynamix
                      G F Y not
                      • Jan 2004
                      • 2910

                      #11
                      Bump Portfolio is now up

                      TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services
                      ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com
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                      • Tim
                        AffiliateManager for Hire
                        • Feb 2002
                        • 19210

                        #12
                        Looking good
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