Need Design Pointers/critique: - GoFuckYourself.com

Thomas1007 · 04-10-2005, 04:10 PM

Hope you all are having a good sunday.
im screwing around with the idea of doing some thumb tgp/mpg templates.
I am not a pro so bare with me. Altho I have seen some of the designs
being pushed as decent and some are real crap. ( probably mine too )
Any designers around that could give some pointers.
heres what im working on today. ( please be gentle in a noob at this )
my first real attempt
My first attempt:
Now the problem as you can see is the table. I cant get this damn thing to
line up to save my life. Any help/pointers is appreciated.
Thanks all

alan-l · 04-10-2005, 04:22 PM

I'm no expert, but the img at the sides should be used as bg so you can make the table height whatever size you want

Thomas1007 · 04-10-2005, 05:02 PM

bump
no designers around today?

BlueQuartz · 04-10-2005, 06:10 PM

whats not lining up?

Thomas1007 · 04-10-2005, 06:31 PM

fixed it myself
so any designers around for pointers?

ChewbaCreative · 04-10-2005, 07:58 PM

u can use this gallery for anything in this world, but not for any adult content

Thomas1007 · 04-10-2005, 08:00 PM

#1. its not a gallery
#2. thanks for your input
#3. anyone else?

Chio The Pirate · 04-10-2005, 08:06 PM

YARGH!

It looks too peace, and love for me. I would remove the humming bird. Color scheme is good. Overall not bad at all. Good luck with it.

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Thomas1007 · 04-10-2005, 08:34 PM

Thanks Ohio

ya I'll get rid of the hummingbird and see what else I can put in.
Questions/answer for the designers out there:
I have seen some of the designs that have been for sale
on gfy ( and other boards ) some are total crap, some are nice.
What kind of a market is there for this? Is it feasable to make some
extra beer money doing tgp/mpg templates?
How do you base your payscale when you design something?
per project? per hour?
Thanks for any input/advice

P.S I was designing this with a teen tgp in mind.
Its still a work in progress.

Thomas1007 · 04-11-2005, 08:03 AM

bump for pointers

Roald · 04-11-2005, 08:08 AM

get rid of the birdie, it fucks up the word "your" and has no use imo

Thomas1007 · 04-11-2005, 10:10 AM

Thanks Quashe
ya im working on another logo as we speak.
any other pointers?

Mister B · 04-11-2005, 03:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Thomas1007

#1. its not a gallery
#2. thanks for your input
#3. anyone else?

If it not a gallery, what is it? your photos archive? or homepage template?

abyss_al · 04-11-2005, 03:19 PM

-size of the image frames are off... even them out
-cant read the name, damn bird in the way
-change logo, make it nice.. dont use basic shadow and gradient.. mess with what u can do with the features
- get rid of the bird and some flowers, remember your viewers are guys, not so girly

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Thomas1007 Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: BC Canada Posts: 5,542	Thanks Ohio ya I'll get rid of the hummingbird and see what else I can put in. Questions/answer for the designers out there: I have seen some of the designs that have been for sale on gfy ( and other boards ) some are total crap, some are nice. What kind of a market is there for this? Is it feasable to make some extra beer money doing tgp/mpg templates? How do you base your payscale when you design something? per project? per hour? Thanks for any input/advice P.S I was designing this with a teen tgp in mind. Its still a work in progress. __________________ BUY THIS SPOT CONTACT ME FOR DETAILS Contact Email Last edited by Thomas1007; 04-10-2005 at 08:36 PM..

04-10-2005, 04:10 PM	#1
Thomas1007 Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: BC Canada Posts: 5,542	Need Design Pointers/critique: Hope you all are having a good sunday. im screwing around with the idea of doing some thumb tgp/mpg templates. I am not a pro so bare with me. Altho I have seen some of the designs being pushed as decent and some are real crap. ( probably mine too ) Any designers around that could give some pointers. heres what im working on today. ( please be gentle in a noob at this ) my first real attempt My first attempt: Now the problem as you can see is the table. I cant get this damn thing to line up to save my life. Any help/pointers is appreciated. Thanks all __________________ BUY THIS SPOT CONTACT ME FOR DETAILS Contact Email

04-10-2005, 04:22 PM	#2
alan-l Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Location: look behind you Posts: 2,477	I'm no expert, but the img at the sides should be used as bg so you can make the table height whatever size you want

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