Think I Got too WORDY on this promo gallery?

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  • Donny
    As you wish...
    • May 2002
    • 13754

    #1

    Think I Got too WORDY on this promo gallery?

    I guess I'll find out. This is tomorrow's "gallery of the day":

    http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/
  • Donny
    As you wish...
    • May 2002
    • 13754

    #2
    Guess so...

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    • Sly
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      • Sep 2004
      • 31376

      #3
      Once again, I read the whole thing.
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      • Babagirls
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        • Feb 2001
        • 18812

        #4
        lol just a little ;)




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        • Donny
          As you wish...
          • May 2002
          • 13754

          #5
          Originally posted by Sly
          Once again, I read the whole thing.
          I figure if a surfer reads that entire thing I have a higher chance of getting a join out of them. We'll see what happens.

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          • emthree
            Dialer Kingpin
            • Jun 2003
            • 10816

            #6
            Leave a reason for the surfer to read ... add some pictorials and images on the way down.

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            • reynold
              Too lazy to set a custom title
              • Oct 2002
              • 51271

              #7
              It's wordy alright.

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              • xclusive
                Too lazy to set a custom title
                • Apr 2004
                • 35218

                #8
                Hey it's always good to try new things good job

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                • PHPdude
                  Confirmed User
                  • Aug 2004
                  • 1164

                  #9
                  that's way too wordy indeed
                  SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60. Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                  • Mefo
                    Confirmed User
                    • Jun 2002
                    • 6169

                    #10
                    might try to add some pics at the bottom

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                    • V_RocKs
                      Damn Right I Kiss Ass!
                      • Nov 2003
                      • 32447

                      #11
                      Right after the barn I got tired... and I wouldn't tell people she just blows their money in 1 day... I thought 4 to 5 would be acceptable.

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                      • BVF
                        Black Vagina Finder
                        • Jan 2002
                        • 13975

                        #12
                        All of my galleries are wordy. They're good for search engines.

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                        • Donny
                          As you wish...
                          • May 2002
                          • 13754

                          #13
                          I think I will add some more pics throughout the story. Good idea.

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                          • sickkittens
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                            • Jul 2002
                            • 25100

                            #14
                            Maybe bold some of the words and change some to red?

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                            • iwantchixx
                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                              • Oct 2002
                              • 12860

                              #15
                              wow

                              yeah, definately add more pics if your going to make them read that novel lol

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                              • DateDoc
                                Outside looking in.
                                • Feb 2005
                                • 14243

                                #16
                                Why not include the pics withing the text? So they are reading and get a visual at the same time.

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                                • corvette
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Oct 2001
                                  • 7880

                                  #17
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                                  • pornguy
                                    Too lazy to set a custom title
                                    • Mar 2003
                                    • 62912

                                    #18
                                    Looks like it may be a bit much, but the SE's will love it.
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                                    • Donny
                                      As you wish...
                                      • May 2002
                                      • 13754

                                      #19
                                      Which one do you think I should use?

                                      http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...7/karma032205/

                                      or

                                      http://www.donovanphillips.com/tease...05/index2.html

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                                      • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                        best designer on GFY
                                        • Mar 2003
                                        • 30307

                                        #20
                                        EHhe ya got kinda carried away with the text I think.

                                        Remember its the Photo and Video content they want.

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                                        • Donny
                                          As you wish...
                                          • May 2002
                                          • 13754

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by DonovanPhillips
                                          I chose the "index2" version. Changed it to the main index. The second one doesn't exist anymore.

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                                          • DateDoc
                                            Outside looking in.
                                            • Feb 2005
                                            • 14243

                                            #22
                                            Originally posted by DonovanPhillips
                                            I chose the "index2" version. Changed it to the main index. The second one doesn't exist anymore.
                                            Good choice!

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