My second adult design ! Feedback please!

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  • chapecito
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2003
    • 173

    #1

    My second adult design ! Feedback please!

    Hello.. finally made a design.. its still unfinished ( it need more content to be added to the bottom..so please dont tell me that) but overall the idea is kinda there.. what do you guys think?

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  • What The Hell
    So Fucking Banned
    • Feb 2005
    • 215

    #2
    looks like shit imo...

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    • Pete-KT
      Workin With The Devil
      • Oct 2004
      • 51532

      #3
      look ok

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      • chapecito
        Confirmed User
        • Nov 2003
        • 173

        #4
        anything you would change to make it look better Pete?
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        • tungsten
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • Mar 2004
          • 10579

          #5
          i think its well done, if its your 2nd design, you got talent
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          • Paraskass
            Confirmed User
            • May 2002
            • 5829

            #6
            I like it.

            I would add some more content. (as you mentionned)
            preview pics from episodes or something

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            • Spunky
              I need a beer
              • Jun 2002
              • 133986

              #7
              I think you're giving away too much with the pics..tame it down a bit

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              • futurehero
                Registered User
                • Feb 2005
                • 27

                #8
                nice job man! keep it simple and clean and your on...
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                • slipkid
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2004
                  • 791

                  #9
                  Main SEX PORN MAP graphic text is tough to read, parhaps change colors or darken.

                  The rest looks promising.


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                  • cspdinc
                    Confirmed User
                    • Jan 2004
                    • 724

                    #10
                    my question is why would I want to join it? whats the payoff really...? maybe if you made a true scavenger hunt in a different state each month andmade a porn slut teh "prize" that would be interesteing and might get me to join when my month/locatin rolls around.. I know, have members TAPE thier hunt and then take some clips as of it and make it into the hahahaha hunt of the month.... hey-- I kinda like that.. Hmmmm if I only had the cash...
                    Last edited by cspdinc; 02-22-2005, 08:08 PM. Reason: spelling

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                    • NaughtyRob
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                      • Nov 2004
                      • 29602

                      #11
                      Originally posted by slipkid
                      Main SEX PORN MAP graphic text is tough to read, parhaps change colors or darken.

                      The rest looks promising.
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                      • cspdinc
                        Confirmed User
                        • Jan 2004
                        • 724

                        #12
                        god i hate my typing

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                        • Stomped
                          Confirmed User
                          • Nov 2003
                          • 1105

                          #13
                          Hey Chapecito, contact me via ICQ, we need to talk...
                          email: admin {AT} estomped [DOT] com

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                          • ozmatt
                            Confirmed User
                            • Nov 2003
                            • 1843

                            #14
                            nice site...the "sets/episode" seem to be just floating out there.. maybe if they were grouped together.. say use the map to form a border?

                            otherwise good work for your 2nd effort

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                            • jonesy
                              Confirmed User
                              • Jan 2003
                              • 6688

                              #15
                              i like the design - good job - theres a brand and the site has a definitive look
                              in sex porn map the letters e,o,n,a get lost and its hard to read
                              too many pics in the tour part - run with 6 and the large one
                              Last edited by jonesy; 02-22-2005, 08:36 PM.
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                              • Stomped
                                Confirmed User
                                • Nov 2003
                                • 1105

                                #16
                                Hey, Chapecito, you're not online yet? Come on dude!
                                Do you need some work? I have some sites you can do for me

                                Hit me up on ICQ
                                email: admin {AT} estomped [DOT] com

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                                • chapecito
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Nov 2003
                                  • 173

                                  #17
                                  got ya.. if anybody else wants to risk it.. hehe anything goes for 75 dollars ! lol.. unlimited changes

                                  btw.. tomorrow i'll shoot myself
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                                  • jonesy
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Jan 2003
                                    • 6688

                                    #18
                                    $75 -WTF is wrong with you?

                                    god damn foreigners!
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                                    • chapecito
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Nov 2003
                                      • 173

                                      #19
                                      this is my 2nd ever adult design.. of course i want much more than that.. but if i ask for 600 nobady is going to give me any work couse im new.. i have to start somehow.. !
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                                      • Stomped
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • Nov 2003
                                        • 1105

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by jonesy
                                        $75 -WTF is wrong with you?

                                        god damn foreigners!
                                        75 Dollars here are 225 Pesos and that's a very good salary here (well, not for a monthly income, but for a design one it's pretty good)
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                                        • jonesy
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Jan 2003
                                          • 6688

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by chapecito
                                          this is my 2nd ever adult design.. of course i want much more than that.. but if i ask for 600 nobady is going to give me any work couse im new.. i have to start somehow.. !
                                          im busting your balls chapy

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                                          • jonesy
                                            Confirmed User
                                            • Jan 2003
                                            • 6688

                                            #22
                                            Originally posted by Stomped
                                            75 Dollars here are 225 Pesos and that's a very good salary here (well, not for a monthly income, but for a design one it's pretty good)
                                            $75 is lunch in america.
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                                            • chapecito
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Nov 2003
                                              • 173

                                              #23
                                              i know and i understand.. but i need money fast and with no adult portfolio to show.. i cant make a single sale on ANYTHING.. nobady wants to risk it.. you guys tell me what to do..
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