My second adult design ! Feedback please! - GoFuckYourself.com

chapecito · 02-22-2005, 09:11 PM

Hello.. finally made a design.. its still unfinished ( it need more content to be added to the bottom..so please dont tell me that) but overall the idea is kinda there.. what do you guys think?

What The Hell · 02-22-2005, 09:11 PM

looks like shit imo...

Pete-KT · 02-22-2005, 09:12 PM

look ok

chapecito · 02-22-2005, 09:20 PM

anything you would change to make it look better Pete?

tungsten · 02-22-2005, 09:23 PM

i think its well done, if its your 2nd design, you got talent

Paraskass · 02-22-2005, 09:23 PM

I like it.

I would add some more content. (as you mentionned)
preview pics from episodes or something

Spunky · 02-22-2005, 09:27 PM

I think you're giving away too much with the pics..tame it down a bit

futurehero · 02-22-2005, 10:00 PM

nice job man! keep it simple and clean and your on...

slipkid · 02-22-2005, 10:02 PM

Main SEX PORN MAP graphic text is tough to read, parhaps change colors or darken.

The rest looks promising.

cspdinc · 02-22-2005, 10:06 PM

my question is why would I want to join it? whats the payoff really...? maybe if you made a true scavenger hunt in a different state each month andmade a porn slut teh "prize" that would be interesteing and might get me to join when my month/locatin rolls around.. I know, have members TAPE thier hunt and then take some clips as of it and make it into the hahahaha hunt of the month.... hey-- I kinda like that.. Hmmmm if I only had the cash...

NaughtyRob · 02-22-2005, 10:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by slipkid

Main SEX PORN MAP graphic text is tough to read, parhaps change colors or darken.

The rest looks promising.

When are you going to pay me for Modelgig.com?

cspdinc · 02-22-2005, 10:09 PM

god i hate my typing

Stomped · 02-22-2005, 10:12 PM

Hey Chapecito, contact me via ICQ, we need to talk...

ozmatt · 02-22-2005, 10:33 PM

nice site...the "sets/episode" seem to be just floating out there.. maybe if they were grouped together.. say use the map to form a border?

otherwise good work for your 2nd effort

matt

jonesy · 02-22-2005, 10:35 PM

i like the design - good job - theres a brand and the site has a definitive look
in sex porn map the letters e,o,n,a get lost and its hard to read
too many pics in the tour part - run with 6 and the large one

Stomped · 02-22-2005, 10:41 PM

Hey, Chapecito, you're not online yet? Come on dude!
Do you need some work? I have some sites you can do for me

Hit me up on ICQ

chapecito · 02-22-2005, 10:52 PM

got ya.. if anybody else wants to risk it.. hehe anything goes for 75 dollars ! lol.. unlimited changes

btw.. tomorrow i'll shoot myself

jonesy · 02-22-2005, 10:56 PM

$75 -WTF is wrong with you?

god damn foreigners!

chapecito · 02-22-2005, 10:59 PM

this is my 2nd ever adult design.. of course i want much more than that.. but if i ask for 600 nobady is going to give me any work couse im new.. i have to start somehow.. !

Stomped · 02-22-2005, 10:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jonesy

$75 -WTF is wrong with you?

god damn foreigners!

75 Dollars here are 225 Pesos and that's a very good salary here (well, not for a monthly income, but for a design one it's pretty good)

jonesy · 02-22-2005, 11:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chapecito

this is my 2nd ever adult design.. of course i want much more than that.. but if i ask for 600 nobady is going to give me any work couse im new.. i have to start somehow.. !

im busting your balls chapy

dont ever undersell yourself.
it fucks you and every other designer.

jonesy · 02-22-2005, 11:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stomped

75 Dollars here are 225 Pesos and that's a very good salary here (well, not for a monthly income, but for a design one it's pretty good)

$75 is lunch in america.

chapecito · 02-22-2005, 11:19 PM

i know and i understand.. but i need money fast and with no adult portfolio to show.. i cant make a single sale on ANYTHING.. nobady wants to risk it.. you guys tell me what to do..

02-22-2005, 09:11 PM	#1
chapecito Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Buenos Aires - Argentina Posts: 173	My second adult design ! Feedback please! Hello.. finally made a design.. its still unfinished ( it need more content to be added to the bottom..so please dont tell me that) but overall the idea is kinda there.. what do you guys think? __________________ Signature goes here

02-22-2005, 09:20 PM	#4
chapecito Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Buenos Aires - Argentina Posts: 173	anything you would change to make it look better Pete? __________________ Signature goes here

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What The Hell So Fucking Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 215	looks like shit imo...

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cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	my question is why would I want to join it? whats the payoff really...? maybe if you made a true scavenger hunt in a different state each month andmade a porn slut teh "prize" that would be interesteing and might get me to join when my month/locatin rolls around.. I know, have members TAPE thier hunt and then take some clips as of it and make it into the hahahaha hunt of the month.... hey-- I kinda like that.. Hmmmm if I only had the cash... Last edited by cspdinc; 02-22-2005 at 10:08 PM.. Reason: spelling

02-22-2005, 10:09 PM	#12
cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	god i hate my typing

02-22-2005, 10:12 PM	#13
Stomped Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Argentina Posts: 1,105	Hey Chapecito, contact me via ICQ, we need to talk... __________________ email: admin {AT} estomped [DOT] com

02-22-2005, 10:33 PM	#14
ozmatt Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: brisvegas, australia Posts: 1,843	nice site...the "sets/episode" seem to be just floating out there.. maybe if they were grouped together.. say use the map to form a border? otherwise good work for your 2nd effort matt __________________ NEW NEW Pimpin Pays Version 2 NEW NEW *** * * AIM - pwize69 - ICQ - 4664 7757 - EMAIL** - matt at pimpinpays dot com * PIMPIN DESIGN - $699 PAYSITES * HIT ME UP NOW - PIMPINPAYS.COM

02-22-2005, 10:35 PM	#15
jonesy Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 6,688	i like the design - good job - theres a brand and the site has a definitive look in sex porn map the letters e,o,n,a get lost and its hard to read too many pics in the tour part - run with 6 and the large one __________________ . Shooting Bikini Girls Last edited by jonesy; 02-22-2005 at 10:36 PM..

02-22-2005, 10:41 PM	#16
Stomped Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Argentina Posts: 1,105	Hey, Chapecito, you're not online yet? Come on dude! Do you need some work? I have some sites you can do for me Hit me up on ICQ __________________ email: admin {AT} estomped [DOT] com

02-22-2005, 10:52 PM	#17
chapecito Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Buenos Aires - Argentina Posts: 173	got ya.. if anybody else wants to risk it.. hehe anything goes for 75 dollars ! lol.. unlimited changes btw.. tomorrow i'll shoot myself __________________ Signature goes here

02-22-2005, 10:56 PM	#18
jonesy Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 6,688	$75 -WTF is wrong with you? god damn foreigners! __________________ . Shooting Bikini Girls

02-22-2005, 10:59 PM	#19
chapecito Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Buenos Aires - Argentina Posts: 173	this is my 2nd ever adult design.. of course i want much more than that.. but if i ask for 600 nobady is going to give me any work couse im new.. i have to start somehow.. ! __________________ Signature goes here

02-22-2005, 11:19 PM	#23
chapecito Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Buenos Aires - Argentina Posts: 173	i know and i understand.. but i need money fast and with no adult portfolio to show.. i cant make a single sale on ANYTHING.. nobady wants to risk it.. you guys tell me what to do.. __________________ Signature goes here