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  • Violetta
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    • Jul 2004
    • 28735
    #1

    English speaking people: Need some grammar help

    My band has recorded a song, but we wonder if we have to change a sentence:

    "the passport is in my trunk,
    and as usual, my boss is almost drunk"

    Is that a bad sentence that has to be changed?
    Its hard to write lyrics in foreign laguages you know...
    M&A Queen
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    • Violetta
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      • Jul 2004
      • 28735
      #2
      wtf? Noone who can help?
      M&A Queen

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        • gh0st
          So Fucking Banned
          • Feb 2005
          • 928
          #3
          that's written perfectly man, no need for help

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            • gh0st
              So Fucking Banned
              • Feb 2005
              • 928
              #4
              only thing i'd change is:

              the passport is in my trunk

              to

              my passport is in the trunk

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                • Violetta
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                  • Jul 2004
                  • 28735
                  #5
                  Originally posted by gh0st
                  only thing i'd change is:

                  the passport is in my trunk

                  to

                  my passport is in the trunk
                  Ok thanks alot man!
                  M&A Queen

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                    • sickkittens
                      I am a meat popsicle.
                      • Jul 2002
                      • 25100
                      #6
                      Originally posted by gh0st
                      only thing i'd change is:

                      the passport is in my trunk

                      to

                      my passport is in the trunk
                      What if it's not his passport? ;)

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                        • Tanker
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                          • Nov 2000
                          • 9287
                          #7
                          Looks good by me

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                            • DarkJedi
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                              • Feb 2001
                              • 28301
                              #8
                              "and as usual, my boss is fucking drunk"

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                                • DateDoc
                                  Outside looking in.
                                  • Feb 2005
                                  • 14243
                                  #9
                                  where is the rest of the song?

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                                    • C_U_Next_Tuesday
                                      WW4L
                                      • Oct 2002
                                      • 10581
                                      #10
                                      you could cut this "and as usual, my boss is almost drunk" down to
                                      "and my boss is always drunk"

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                                        • Hera, the Apocalypse
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Dec 2004
                                          • 181
                                          #11
                                          Originally posted by DarkJedi
                                          "and as usual, my boss is fucking drunk"
                                          this is cool
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                                            • Schwick
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Jul 2002
                                              • 543
                                              #12
                                              I think that I have the next verse for you. Let me know what you think and feel free to use it.

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                                              Would you like to make some fuck, Beserker!
                                              My love for you is ticking clock, Beserker!
                                              Would you like to suck my cock, Beserker!"
                                              Last edited by Schwick; 02-11-2005, 09:14 AM.

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                                                • AdultLocals_Max
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                                                  • Jan 2005
                                                  • 214
                                                  #13
                                                  Originally posted by sickkittens
                                                  What if it's not his passport? ;)
                                                  good point
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                                                    • TooDoLittleIzALot
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Feb 2005
                                                      • 158
                                                      #14
                                                      this place is fuckin' great!!

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                                                        • tranza
                                                          ICQ: 197-556-237
                                                          • Jun 2003
                                                          • 57559
                                                          #15
                                                          Post the mp3 for your song when you're done dude...
                                                          I'm just a newbie.

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                                                            • Manansala
                                                              Confirmed User
                                                              • Jan 2005
                                                              • 551
                                                              #16
                                                              "the" passport is in my trunk
                                                              "the" is poetic artistic as "my" is direct deliverance

                                                              passport's in the trunk,
                                                              and yea, my boss is still drunk.

                                                              Where "still" can be "always", "almost", "fucked", "fucken'", or just...
                                                              and yea, my boss is stoned.
                                                              I don't have a signature. !

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                                                                • Licentious
                                                                  Registered User
                                                                  • Feb 2005
                                                                  • 99
                                                                  #17
                                                                  Originally posted by Rockatansky
                                                                  My band has recorded a song, but we wonder if we have to change a sentence:

                                                                  "the passport is in my trunk,
                                                                  and as usual, my boss is almost drunk"

                                                                  Is that a bad sentence that has to be changed?
                                                                  Its hard to write lyrics in foreign laguages you know...

                                                                  how about the passport is in my trunk
                                                                  as well as my boss whos almost drunk...
                                                                  Fear the sig police.
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