Just finished a TGP.. critique it - GoFuckYourself.com

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 02:08 AM

Flatter me, or rip me apart

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flashfire · 01-26-2005, 02:15 AM

nice simple design, I like it not too busy

xNetworx · 01-26-2005, 02:17 AM

Clean but too plain

Undisputed1 · 01-26-2005, 02:19 AM

definitely too simple

BradM · 01-26-2005, 02:21 AM

The pink makes me want to kill myself.

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 02:22 AM

I agree that it's very plain, but I think it oughta' convert quite nicely. Combine eye-pleasing colors with not many distractions and you should get tons of clicks.

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 02:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BradM

The pink makes me want to kill myself.

kuthi123 · 01-26-2005, 02:23 AM

looking food for me

chaze · 01-26-2005, 02:24 AM

Too many image spots your host will hate you if you put it on a shared server.

Also do some color contrast in my opinion. I would do a dark blue in the mix.

The graphics are great BTW.

All in all a great design

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 02:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chaze

Too many image spots your host will hate you if you put it on a shared server.

Also do some color contrast in my opinion. I would do a dark blue in the mix.

The graphics are great BTW.

All in all a great design

too many image spots? it may be the alcohol talking, but I'm not sure what you mean.

there wasn't much contrast in this design, you are right about that.. guess I got lazy

thanks for your opinion

‡‡‡ · 01-26-2005, 02:27 AM

it sucks

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 02:31 AM

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Originally Posted by ???

it sucks

lolol

chaze · 01-26-2005, 02:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dynamix

too many image spots? it may be the alcohol talking, but I'm not sure what you mean.

there wasn't much contrast in this design, you are right about that.. guess I got lazy

thanks for your opinion

lol sometimes too many images on one page will make the cpu work too hard during heavy traffic, of course a dedicated would be fine but a shared server running a tgp with too many images on one page is asking for probs.

I guess the compression and traffic is a big factor too.

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 02:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chaze

lol sometimes too many images on one page will make the cpu work too hard during heavy traffic, of course a dedicated would be fine but a shared server running a tgp with too many images on one page is asking for probs.

I guess the compression and traffic is a big factor too.

Oh lol. Altogether the site is only 140k and only 9 seperate images

VeriSexy · 01-26-2005, 02:47 AM

Looks clean, not bad

xclusive · 01-26-2005, 05:06 AM

Very nice

nico-t · 01-26-2005, 05:21 AM

just another tgp, nothing special...

feN · 01-26-2005, 05:23 AM

nice, clean, simple, not bad at all

Darth Vader · 01-26-2005, 05:34 AM

I find your lack of galleries disturbing

Dynamix · 01-26-2005, 08:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darth Vader

I find your lack of galleries disturbing

Reak AGV · 01-26-2005, 08:30 AM

That's why too light and plain, use some more colors. Also the logo is just a text but overall for $20 it isnt bad at all.

BIGTYMER · 01-26-2005, 09:31 AM

Its purple.

hova · 01-26-2005, 09:33 AM

I like it, nice and simple and pink

DEA - banned for life · 01-26-2005, 09:33 AM

nice looking site

Basic_man · 01-26-2005, 09:35 AM

Looks good man, I love your design skillz !

01-26-2005, 02:08 AM	#1
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01-26-2005, 02:22 AM	#6
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01-26-2005, 05:23 AM	#18
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flashfire ICQ 1 6 7 8 5 3 4 9 2 Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 13,098	nice simple design, I like it not too busy

01-26-2005, 02:17 AM	#3
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01-26-2005, 02:19 AM	#4
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01-26-2005, 02:23 AM	#8
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01-26-2005, 02:24 AM	#9
chaze Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 9,752	Too many image spots your host will hate you if you put it on a shared server. Also do some color contrast in my opinion. I would do a dark blue in the mix. The graphics are great BTW. All in all a great design

01-26-2005, 02:27 AM	#11
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01-26-2005, 05:21 AM	#17
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01-26-2005, 08:30 AM	#21
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01-26-2005, 09:31 AM	#22
BIGTYMER Junior Achiever Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Walled Garden Posts: 17,066	Its purple.

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01-26-2005, 09:33 AM	#24
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01-26-2005, 09:35 AM	#25
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