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Skn_Designs · 01-21-2005, 08:23 AM

I am not sure if i should use it, sometimes it loos too "crappy" for me, but on the other side it looks "good", don't know, help me out please!

I am currently building up the whole shit, and I am a newbie to the "Biz" so help me in plz... :-)

Cheers

shuki · 01-21-2005, 08:25 AM

hard to read imo

BV · 01-21-2005, 08:26 AM

i cant tell what it says

KRL · 01-21-2005, 08:26 AM

What the fuck. Come on. That is seriously hard on the eyes.

Back to the drawing board.

DEA - banned for life · 01-21-2005, 08:26 AM

You steal that graphic off the side of a subway train?

Dynamix · 01-21-2005, 08:27 AM

Not sure that a "tag" would be the #1 marketable logo for an adult design company.. may want to re-think that first off. Second, the logo isn't suitable for print, ie. business cards, letterhead, etc. Not sure if that matters to you or not.

Finally, if you were to use the logo, I'd ditch the butterfly shape and use one of the other 300 custom shapes that comes with Photoshop that looks a bit more grungy.

Patrick

Skn_Designs · 01-21-2005, 08:27 AM

hmm...damn thats what i thought too....

ok, back to the drawing...

xclusive · 01-21-2005, 08:30 AM

Good luck with the design man just a bit of advice use a readable font and make sure it's striking but simple. It's a very fine balance and hard to reach but i'm sure you can do it.

EyesWideShut · 01-21-2005, 08:33 AM

That's a terrible font but don't give up. Make sure that it's very easily readable, you don't want people to have to figure out what it says. Good luck dude.

Mefo · 01-21-2005, 08:40 AM

really bad, can't even read what it says

Paco, of Large Cash. · 01-21-2005, 08:44 AM

sick graffiti!

As for how does it look as a logo ... I can not make out the hyphen between 'skn' and 'designs'.

Aside from that, I likes.

Skn_Designs · 01-21-2005, 08:49 AM

it's no font i used, it's a custon graffiti i drawed today...

i agree that people should be able to read the whole thing, so i am going forward to a cleaner logo and post it then....

And for the Hyphen....just forgot it....

Timych · 01-21-2005, 09:20 AM

Would work if all your customers are below 15 yrs of age

DeadFidel · 01-21-2005, 10:06 AM

Ditto what 95% said.

Wolfy · 01-21-2005, 10:26 AM

Ditto what 95.6% said

pxxx · 01-21-2005, 10:33 AM

I have no idea what that says.

DirtyRider · 01-21-2005, 10:52 AM

Yeah its a bit hard to read, but looks good.

Wiggles · 01-21-2005, 11:01 AM

can't read what it says, and background is crappy, otherwise its okay.

Platinumpimp · 01-21-2005, 11:03 AM

I don't like it, looks a bit ghetto. But each his style I guess.

Like others said, you might wanna work on the text, the background shouldn't really matter.

DeadFidel · 01-21-2005, 11:04 AM

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Originally Posted by DirtyRider

Yeah its a bit hard to read, but looks good.

Looked at again...still the same, however, if you made it yourself then you have talent. I think you were proud of the work and that's why you posted it.
Work on it you'll be ok.

Dalai lama · 01-21-2005, 11:05 AM

Back to the drawing board, please

Froey Twe · 01-21-2005, 11:05 AM

i dont thik its very good, try again from scratch

Dalai lama · 01-21-2005, 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DeadFidel

Looked at again...still the same, however, if you made it yourself then you have talent. I think you were proud of the work and that's why you posted it.
Work on it you'll be ok.

That's for sure, this guy gots talent.

chaze · 01-21-2005, 11:07 AM

I like it, but hard to read what it says.

Also a light color is usuaully the best logo background if I remember right.

Paco, of Large Cash. · 01-21-2005, 11:08 AM

Still think it is a kick ass logo and this 35-YO can read it without a problem (my only issue is I can not see the hyphen).
To make it easier for those that can not read it; maybe drop the URL down a bit so it does not overlap the arrowhead.

Again, awesome work and I like what you drew.

CoreAdult-Dee · 01-21-2005, 11:10 AM

Too chaotic in my opinion. If you want to get into adult design, your logo should look creative, but professional. Your example designs for adult sites can be a little more exciting, but your main goal is to give people the impression you are serious.

Skn_Designs · 01-21-2005, 11:21 AM

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If you want to get into adult design, your logo should look creative, but professional. Your example designs for adult sites can be a little more exciting, but your main goal is to give people the impression you are serious.

Thats something i can work with, and thx for the compliments, yes i am totally new to Adult Design, i have done a few other design and websites yet but no adult things... i have only a little clue till yet what it means to make a banner or a full page ad totally "attractive" to adult content surfers, because it seems that in no other biz is the online-advertisment so important like in adult industry! I have learned much last weeks from this forum, thats the reason why i posted this logo, to get opinions from GFY Members....

So, i am young & free and i am sure i will go forward in Adult Designs.... we'll see what future brings.... :-)

And the Graffiti thing is difficult to say in the early stage if it will be readable to others... tell me truly how many graffitis have you already seen which you couldn't read

Cheers & have fun

machinegunkelly · 01-21-2005, 11:40 AM

It sucks .

Hard to read
Crappy PS butterfly shapes .
the default PS grass brush you used looks like shit .

Can't tell what it says except that it says " designs "

Keep going bud ... them tutorials will pay off later Im sure .

Femme Fa'tale · 01-21-2005, 11:44 AM

Looks nice but hard to read...

machinegunkelly · 01-21-2005, 11:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by machinegunkelly

It sucks .

Hard to read
Crappy PS butterfly shapes .
the default PS grass brush you used looks like shit .

Can't tell what it says except that it says " designs "

Keep going bud ... them tutorials will pay off later Im sure .

Okay reading that it sounded a little harsh .

Here is some constructive crits .

The colors I do like and the destressed look , although it wasn't done effectively .. the idea is there and can be worked on .

You seem to be opening a design studio before you're ready for it .. but thats okay . thats where I started too ..

If you don't know how to make custom brushes and shapes ... learn now and save yourself the embarrasment later when your client says " I coulda made that" cause the butterflies , stars and a few other things scream default PS work to me .

I find it really really hard to read .
but the overall look ( especially on your site ) looks alright .. just needs to be cleaned up ..

Now please get them PS butterflies out of there .

dcortez · 01-21-2005, 11:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Skn_Designs

I am not sure if i should use it, sometimes it loos too "crappy" for me, but on the other side it looks "good", don't know, help me out please!

I am currently building up the whole shit, and I am a newbie to the "Biz" so help me in plz... :-)

Cheers

Way too busy looking.

-Dino

siva350 · 01-21-2005, 12:18 PM

That is weak... SORRY!!

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xclusive Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Buffalo, NY Posts: 35,218	Good luck with the design man just a bit of advice use a readable font and make sure it's striking but simple. It's a very fine balance and hard to reach but i'm sure you can do it. __________________ I support MediumPimpin.com / Shemp's Outlawtgp.com /

01-21-2005, 08:23 AM	#1
Skn_Designs Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: i think.... there-> Posts: 256	Need a logo evaluated, would you take it? I am not sure if i should use it, sometimes it loos too "crappy" for me, but on the other side it looks "good", don't know, help me out please! I am currently building up the whole shit, and I am a newbie to the "Biz" so help me in plz... :-) Cheers __________________ Skn-designs.com - Unique Designs - ICQ 5974430*0 - Currently building my Portofolio, so hit me up for Specials!!

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BV wtf Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Bikini State, FL USA Posts: 10,914	i cant tell what it says

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DEA - banned for life V.I.P. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: InYour Head Posts: 7,886	You steal that graphic off the side of a subway train?

01-21-2005, 08:33 AM	#9
EyesWideShut Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: New York City Posts: 354	That's a terrible font but don't give up. Make sure that it's very easily readable, you don't want people to have to figure out what it says. Good luck dude. __________________ $$$$$$ $$$$$$ $$$$$$

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Mefo Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 6,169	really bad, can't even read what it says __________________

01-21-2005, 08:44 AM	#11
Paco, of Large Cash. Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: --> . <-- Posts: 2,267	sick graffiti! As for how does it look as a logo ... I can not make out the hyphen between 'skn' and 'designs'. Aside from that, I likes.

01-21-2005, 08:49 AM	#12
Skn_Designs Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: i think.... there-> Posts: 256	it's no font i used, it's a custon graffiti i drawed today... i agree that people should be able to read the whole thing, so i am going forward to a cleaner logo and post it then.... And for the Hyphen....just forgot it.... __________________ Skn-designs.com - Unique Designs - ICQ 5974430*0 - Currently building my Portofolio, so hit me up for Specials!!

01-21-2005, 09:20 AM	#13
Timych Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Odessa, Ukraine Posts: 12	Would work if all your customers are below 15 yrs of age

01-21-2005, 10:06 AM	#14
DeadFidel Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: This was my wife circa 2002 Posts: 6,760	Ditto what 95% said.

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Wolfy Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 3,574	Ditto what 95.6% said

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pxxx First African GFY Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 12,114	I have no idea what that says.

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DirtyRider Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 819	Yeah its a bit hard to read, but looks good. __________________ hello

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Platinumpimp Logos and such. Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Kingdom of the Netherlands Posts: 10,214	I don't like it, looks a bit ghetto. But each his style I guess. Like others said, you might wanna work on the text, the background shouldn't really matter. __________________ I design logo's.

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Froey Twe Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 1,297	i dont thik its very good, try again from scratch

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chaze Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 9,752	I like it, but hard to read what it says. Also a light color is usuaully the best logo background if I remember right.

01-21-2005, 11:08 AM	#25
Paco, of Large Cash. Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: --> . <-- Posts: 2,267	Still think it is a kick ass logo and this 35-YO can read it without a problem (my only issue is I can not see the hyphen). To make it easier for those that can not read it; maybe drop the URL down a bit so it does not overlap the arrowhead. Again, awesome work and I like what you drew.

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CoreAdult-Dee Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 187	Too chaotic in my opinion. If you want to get into adult design, your logo should look creative, but professional. Your example designs for adult sites can be a little more exciting, but your main goal is to give people the impression you are serious. __________________ Professional design, development, and "grunt work" for webmasters and sponsors at reasonable prices. NOT OFFSHORED. ICQ: 312068826 ::: AIM: CoreAdult :: Check us out

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machinegunkelly Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 3,285	It sucks . Hard to read Crappy PS butterfly shapes . the default PS grass brush you used looks like shit . Can't tell what it says except that it says " designs " Keep going bud ... them tutorials will pay off later Im sure . __________________ dead.

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Femme Fa'tale Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: U.S. Posts: 541	Looks nice but hard to read...

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