Is this a better TGP - GoFuckYourself.com

Paul Markham · 12-14-2004, 11:44 AM

OK I know we have to get the pictures sorted out properly, but is this any good?

TGP for Paul Markham Teens

Tell me what you think.

Is it better than our last attempt?

Sly · 12-14-2004, 11:52 AM

I'll start you off by saying that you don't have enough pictures. You need at least 15.

Your gallery doesn't flow at all. It looks very choppy and is hard to follow.

Your bottom banner isn't the greatest. With a site that charges $30, you probably shouldn't be mentioning the price. You need to sell the quality and content of what surfers can expect.

MetaMan · 12-14-2004, 11:54 AM

is this a joke?

Paul Markham · 12-14-2004, 02:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sly
I'll start you off by saying that you don't have enough pictures. You need at least 15.

Your gallery doesn't flow at all. It looks very choppy and is hard to follow.

Your bottom banner isn't the greatest. With a site that charges $30, you probably shouldn't be mentioning the price. You need to sell the quality and content of what surfers can expect.

Don't know why he only put 12 in, it's spaced for 15. But I think it's just to show some pics.

Good point about it not flowing, will work on that. And the price will come off. We always will sell on quality, we have only that to offer.

12-14-2004, 11:44 AM	#1
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12-14-2004, 11:52 AM	#2
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12-14-2004, 11:54 AM	#3
MetaMan I AM WEB 2.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 28,682	is this a joke?