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Join Date: Nov 2004
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I'd like a few GFY'ers opinion.
One of my writers posted this story to my site. I just wanted a bit of feedback.
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That's a pretty shitty sex story. I had trouble keeping my hard-on.
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it needs pics
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Do you have the cliff notes?
I am kinda busy.
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the middle is confusing and jumps around. it doesn't do a good job of painting a vivid picture. Too much implications that don't flow.
peace out ~zombiegirl
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Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: USA
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Too long
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Join Date: Oct 2003
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Make it shorter it's too long
maybe good for SEO though
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Buffalo, NY
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It needs to be edited down a bit but it's not that bad...
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