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Old 11-21-2004, 09:37 AM   #1
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Tell Me What You Think About My New Site!

Constructive criticism is welcome! This is my new marketing website that is still in develpment. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

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Old 11-21-2004, 09:39 AM   #2
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Kool, looks good acid

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p.s. where are my sample;)
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:40 AM   #3
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Nice and clean looking.
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:41 AM   #4
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Kool, looks good acid

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p.s. where are my sample;)
LOL - I haven't had the time to put it together yet (all these shows are kicking my ass). I'll have on for you on Monday.

P.S. Thanks for the compliment!
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:42 AM   #5
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anytime acid im messin with you take your time like i said im not in a hurry, just giving you a hard time

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I like it but you still have a lot of pages to upload? the my account, services, shopping cart, choose a product, design templates, and forum links are not up. But good start for sure...
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:45 AM   #7
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I get a 404 here...
http://www.hooklight.com/tools.html
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:47 AM   #8
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I like it but you still have a lot of pages to upload? the my account, services, shopping cart, choose a product, design templates, and forum links are not up. But good start for sure...
Its a painstakng tast and I'm struggling to get all the pages done. I'm shooting for a launch date of Jan. 1st.

All the pages aren't uploaded yet and some of the links are dupes...I just wanted to get a general response. I plan to put $25k into marketing and advertising so I want to make sure I get it right!
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It's cool man like I said a good start and when It's done it will be great i'm sure. Just like a beta software it's good but once the final product is done is when it really shines. Not to mention I know how busy you are with WA and Internext so close together. Good luck with it man...
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:53 AM   #10
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Looks good. Could be more "professional", but it gives us a good impression !
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Old 11-21-2004, 09:55 AM   #11
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Could be more "professional",...
Please explain. I want you guy's help on making this the best site in my industry and the most complete. It is going to be almost entirely online and not person-to-person so I have to build a professional site that people can trust.
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Old 11-21-2004, 10:15 AM   #12
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Hey Acid, could you get a hold of me bro about those businesscards? I havent heard from you. Email me please: info AT studiocash.com or icq me at 127058515. I just sent you an icq, so u can just add me.

I would appreciate it bro. Thanks
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Old 11-21-2004, 10:35 AM   #13
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Not bad. I think you should get crisper and higher res. images to through on there (with more color possibly).
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Old 11-21-2004, 12:14 PM   #14
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Nice clean design. My only suggestion is to change up the hover over. The white outline would look better if it only went halfway around. Keep it on the right side, get rid of the left.
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Old 11-21-2004, 12:17 PM   #15
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The butterfly pics look blurry. Site gives me a *gloomy* impression.
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Old 11-21-2004, 12:34 PM   #16
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The butterfly pics look blurry. Site gives me a *gloomy* impression.
No offense intended - have to agree. The art should be very crisp.

I would also align="justify" all the text.

You know about the broken link I assume in portfolio.

Goodluck.
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Old 11-21-2004, 02:40 PM   #17
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No offense intended - have to agree. The art should be very crisp.

I would also align="justify" all the text.

You know about the broken link I assume in portfolio.

Goodluck.
Great suggestions! That's why I love to get advice from fellow webmasters. Thanks to everyone that contributed so far.
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Old 11-21-2004, 02:42 PM   #18
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looks great, very nice and clean, looks very professional!
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Old 11-21-2004, 07:03 PM   #19
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Old 11-21-2004, 07:12 PM   #20
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Looks nice. Very professional looking. I'm not sure if you dumped the Lamp Logo idea but I noticed that Pixar's (Finding Nemo) logo was pretty similar.
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Old 11-21-2004, 07:14 PM   #21
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Old 11-21-2004, 07:55 PM   #22
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the header and right tall banner need work.
also fix the top and bottom table borders/ loose them.
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I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:

"We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."

Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.

Those are just a couple of suggestions.
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Very honestly I don't like the design too much room for improvement . Looks better then acidflyers thought :P
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I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:

"We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."

Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.

Those are just a couple of suggestions.
equipement malfonctions happens all the time in printing ...
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Old 11-21-2004, 08:13 PM   #26
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Exactly, so why should you have to mention that it does happen? That's my point.
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Old 11-21-2004, 10:00 PM   #27
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It looks professional to me,i like it;)
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