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  • Rob
    I'm a great bowler.
    • Nov 2003
    • 13310

    #1

    Tell Me What You Think About My New Site!

    Constructive criticism is welcome! This is my new marketing website that is still in develpment. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

    Hooklight Marketing Solutions, LLC

  • Pete-KT
    Workin With The Devil
    • Oct 2004
    • 51532

    #2
    Kool, looks good acid

    Pete-KT


    p.s. where are my sample;)

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    • Pete
      Confirmed User
      • Jan 2001
      • 6617

      #3
      Nice and clean looking.
      Evoke Electronics

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      • Rob
        I'm a great bowler.
        • Nov 2003
        • 13310

        #4
        Originally posted by Pete-KT
        Kool, looks good acid

        Pete-KT


        p.s. where are my sample;)
        LOL - I haven't had the time to put it together yet (all these shows are kicking my ass). I'll have on for you on Monday.

        P.S. Thanks for the compliment!

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        • Pete-KT
          Workin With The Devil
          • Oct 2004
          • 51532

          #5
          anytime acid im messin with you take your time like i said im not in a hurry, just giving you a hard time

          Pete

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          • xclusive
            Too lazy to set a custom title
            • Apr 2004
            • 35218

            #6
            I like it but you still have a lot of pages to upload? the my account, services, shopping cart, choose a product, design templates, and forum links are not up. But good start for sure...

            I support MediumPimpin.com / Shemp's Outlawtgp.com /


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            • fulcrumstudio
              Confirmed User
              • Mar 2004
              • 414

              #7
              I get a 404 here...
              http://www.hooklight.com/tools.html
              SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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              • Rob
                I'm a great bowler.
                • Nov 2003
                • 13310

                #8
                Originally posted by xclusive
                I like it but you still have a lot of pages to upload? the my account, services, shopping cart, choose a product, design templates, and forum links are not up. But good start for sure...
                Its a painstakng tast and I'm struggling to get all the pages done. I'm shooting for a launch date of Jan. 1st.

                All the pages aren't uploaded yet and some of the links are dupes...I just wanted to get a general response. I plan to put $25k into marketing and advertising so I want to make sure I get it right!

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                • xclusive
                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                  • Apr 2004
                  • 35218

                  #9
                  It's cool man like I said a good start and when It's done it will be great i'm sure. Just like a beta software it's good but once the final product is done is when it really shines. Not to mention I know how busy you are with WA and Internext so close together. Good luck with it man...

                  I support MediumPimpin.com / Shemp's Outlawtgp.com /


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                  • Basic_man
                    Programming King Pin
                    • Oct 2003
                    • 27360

                    #10
                    Looks good. Could be more "professional", but it gives us a good impression !
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                    • Rob
                      I'm a great bowler.
                      • Nov 2003
                      • 13310

                      #11
                      Originally posted by Basic_man
                      Could be more "professional",...
                      Please explain. I want you guy's help on making this the best site in my industry and the most complete. It is going to be almost entirely online and not person-to-person so I have to build a professional site that people can trust.

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                      • MetaformX
                        Confirmed User
                        • Mar 2002
                        • 6704

                        #12
                        Hey Acid, could you get a hold of me bro about those businesscards? I havent heard from you. Email me please: info AT studiocash.com or icq me at 127058515. I just sent you an icq, so u can just add me.

                        I would appreciate it bro. Thanks

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                        • sickkittens
                          I am a meat popsicle.
                          • Jul 2002
                          • 25100

                          #13
                          Not bad. I think you should get crisper and higher res. images to through on there (with more color possibly).

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                          • Young
                            Bland for life
                            • Nov 2004
                            • 10468

                            #14
                            Originally posted by HighOnAcid
                            Constructive criticism is welcome! This is my new marketing website that is still in develpment. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

                            Hooklight Marketing Solutions, LLC

                            Nice clean design. My only suggestion is to change up the hover over. The white outline would look better if it only went halfway around. Keep it on the right side, get rid of the left.
                            ★★★

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                            • Vitasoy
                              GFY HALL OF FAME DAMMIT!!!
                              • Oct 2003
                              • 58202

                              #15
                              The butterfly pics look blurry. Site gives me a *gloomy* impression.


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                              • pussyluver
                                Clueless OleMan
                                • Mar 2003
                                • 11009

                                #16
                                Originally posted by Vitasoy
                                The butterfly pics look blurry. Site gives me a *gloomy* impression.
                                No offense intended - have to agree. The art should be very crisp.

                                I would also align="justify" all the text.

                                You know about the broken link I assume in portfolio.

                                Goodluck.

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                                • Rob
                                  I'm a great bowler.
                                  • Nov 2003
                                  • 13310

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by pussyluver
                                  No offense intended - have to agree. The art should be very crisp.

                                  I would also align="justify" all the text.

                                  You know about the broken link I assume in portfolio.

                                  Goodluck.
                                  Great suggestions! That's why I love to get advice from fellow webmasters. Thanks to everyone that contributed so far.

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                                  • Wiggles
                                    Too lazy to set a custom title
                                    • May 2004
                                    • 14423

                                    #18
                                    looks great, very nice and clean, looks very professional!
                                    no sig

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                                    • Rob
                                      I'm a great bowler.
                                      • Nov 2003
                                      • 13310

                                      #19

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                                      • Chichio
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • Mar 2002
                                        • 1467

                                        #20
                                        Looks nice. Very professional looking. I'm not sure if you dumped the Lamp Logo idea but I noticed that Pixar's (Finding Nemo) logo was pretty similar.

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                                        • Warden
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Nov 2002
                                          • 2906

                                          #21
                                          Great look!
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                                          • keyboard warrior
                                            Confirmed User
                                            • Jul 2004
                                            • 1435

                                            #22
                                            the header and right tall banner need work.
                                            also fix the top and bottom table borders/ loose them.
                                            - nothing here -

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                                            • BitterPen
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Sep 2004
                                              • 1926

                                              #23
                                              I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:

                                              "We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."

                                              Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.

                                              Those are just a couple of suggestions.

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                                              • Doctor Dre
                                                Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                • Jan 2001
                                                • 51692

                                                #24
                                                Very honestly I don't like the design too much room for improvement . Looks better then acidflyers thought :P
                                                Originally posted by rayadp05
                                                I rebooted, deleted temp files, history, cookies and everything...still cannot view the news clip. All I see is that fucking gay ass music video from "Rick Roll". Anyone else have a different link to the news clip?

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                                                • Doctor Dre
                                                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                  • Jan 2001
                                                  • 51692

                                                  #25
                                                  Originally posted by BitterPen
                                                  I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:

                                                  "We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."

                                                  Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.

                                                  Those are just a couple of suggestions.
                                                  equipement malfonctions happens all the time in printing ...
                                                  Originally posted by rayadp05
                                                  I rebooted, deleted temp files, history, cookies and everything...still cannot view the news clip. All I see is that fucking gay ass music video from "Rick Roll". Anyone else have a different link to the news clip?

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                                                  • BitterPen
                                                    Confirmed User
                                                    • Sep 2004
                                                    • 1926

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by Doctor Dre
                                                    equipement malfonctions happens all the time in printing ...
                                                    Exactly, so why should you have to mention that it does happen? That's my point.

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                                                    • Lykos
                                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                      • Apr 2003
                                                      • 31032

                                                      #27
                                                      It looks professional to me,i like it;)

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