Please Critique My New Design - GoFuckYourself.com

BlueFly · 04-25-2004, 09:43 AM

This is a "hands off" I threw together...

It is made up of daily updating sponsor hosted galleries, and J A V A S C R I P T date at the top.

What do you think of the design?

http://www.girlsearch.net

sexyclicks · 04-25-2004, 09:57 AM

looks clean - maybe too clean

dunefield · 04-25-2004, 10:00 AM

too plain... you need something to make it stand out...

dav555add · 04-25-2004, 10:01 AM

too plain

studio · 04-25-2004, 10:06 AM

I don't care for the white background... and it's missing a pineapplepink Banner... IMHO

Hit me I ICQ I may be interested in having you do a Hands Free TGP for me... ICQ # 251860879

Thanks,
Denny

shima · 04-25-2004, 10:11 AM

wow!

BlueFly · 04-25-2004, 10:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by studio
I don't care for the white background... and it's missing a pineapplepink Banner... IMHO

Hit me I ICQ I may be interested in having you do a Hands Free TGP for me... ICQ # 251860879

Thanks,
Denny

It requires a shit load of sponsors... lol I am using about 25 sponsors to generate the galleries... Not all of them offer the daily rotating galleries, so I had to dig around a bit. Other than that, it is just like any other tgp.

studio · 04-25-2004, 10:16 AM

Bluefly,

Hit me on ICQ... Really

Thanks

mammy · 04-25-2004, 10:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by shima
wow!

shhhhh
don't tell anyone bout this guru

B-Eazy · 04-25-2004, 10:20 AM

The site is pretty cool. The only thing is that the layout you have is too old school. I dont know im not in the mood to talk alot.. and on the phone.. But its Ok.. werd up Biatchh

johndoebob · 04-25-2004, 10:23 AM

Too plain and clean linkfarm style,google doesn't like that

Custom descriptions,lots of banners and a bigger more colorful logo would do the trick

BlueFly · 04-25-2004, 10:36 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by johndoebob
Too plain and clean linkfarm style,google doesn't like that

Custom descriptions,lots of banners and a bigger more colorful logo would do the trick

I was kind of going for plain... a place for the surfers to go when they get sick of looking at banners and flashing lights... It could be jazzed up a bit, I agree.

Raf1 · 04-25-2004, 10:50 AM

It's a bit too simple in my opinion. Some elements should be added to spice it up a little

Lykos · 04-25-2004, 11:53 AM

Not bad,but yeah it does look to clean

AdultDesigners · 04-25-2004, 12:18 PM

Simple. Waaaay too simple.

alan-l · 04-25-2004, 12:42 PM

correct, but boring. add a banner at least

SlickRick · 04-25-2004, 12:44 PM

not bad pretty clean

BradM · 04-25-2004, 12:48 PM

Very small page... bland. I don't know how well it will do. Nice but you need osme more pazzaz to it.

BlueFly · 04-26-2004, 03:38 AM

Ok... I jazzed it up just a bit. I wanted to keep it simple, but I got rid of most of the blank space.

EscortBiz · 04-26-2004, 03:42 AM

wont load for me

mrniceguy · 04-26-2004, 04:11 AM

really good design indeed

BlueFly · 04-26-2004, 04:15 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EscortBiz
wont load for me

hmmmm. what are you using?

04-25-2004, 09:43 AM	#1
BlueFly Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: NC, USA Posts: 716	Please Critique My New Design This is a "hands off" I threw together... It is made up of daily updating sponsor hosted galleries, and J A V A S C R I P T date at the top. What do you think of the design? http://www.girlsearch.net __________________ Now Taking Hard Link Trades BTW - NEVER use thexxxhost.com

04-25-2004, 10:00 AM	#3
dunefield www.barely18movies.com Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 10,920	too plain... you need something to make it stand out... __________________

04-25-2004, 10:01 AM	#4
dav555add Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 3,427	too plain __________________ ...

04-25-2004, 10:06 AM	#5
studio Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Oshkosh, WI ICQ #251860879 Posts: 1,095	I don't care for the white background... and it's missing a pineapplepink Banner... IMHO Hit me I ICQ I may be interested in having you do a Hands Free TGP for me... ICQ # 251860879 Thanks, Denny __________________

04-25-2004, 10:16 AM	#8
studio Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Oshkosh, WI ICQ #251860879 Posts: 1,095	Bluefly, Hit me on ICQ... Really Thanks __________________

04-25-2004, 09:57 AM	#2
sexyclicks Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: c9media.com Posts: 3,240	looks clean - maybe too clean

04-25-2004, 10:11 AM	#6
shima Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2003 Location: Office, as usual Posts: 1,753	wow!

04-25-2004, 10:20 AM	#10
B-Eazy Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 1,521	The site is pretty cool. The only thing is that the layout you have is too old school. I dont know im not in the mood to talk alot.. and on the phone.. But its Ok.. werd up Biatchh __________________

04-25-2004, 10:23 AM	#11
johndoebob Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,405	Too plain and clean linkfarm style,google doesn't like that Custom descriptions,lots of banners and a bigger more colorful logo would do the trick

04-25-2004, 10:50 AM	#13
Raf1 Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Writer for hire :) Gallery descriptions, articles, blog posts etc. ICQ: 209 356 106 Posts: 12,117	It's a bit too simple in my opinion. Some elements should be added to spice it up a little __________________ 80% Revshare or 30$ PPS on $1 trials: 200 Niches = Vidz.com Galleries / FLVs / Embeds 3 & 5mins FLVs \| RSS & Tube Feeds \| Matching Thumbs \| FLV Browser & Exporter \| No Prechecked Xsales >> Mobile Redirection Script: mobile.vidz.com also paying 80% net Lifetime << ICQ: 198-394-557

04-25-2004, 11:53 AM	#14
Lykos Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: World Posts: 31,027	Not bad,but yeah it does look to clean __________________

04-25-2004, 12:18 PM	#15
AdultDesigners Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 459	Simple. Waaaay too simple. __________________ [email protected]

04-25-2004, 12:42 PM	#16
alan-l Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Location: look behind you Posts: 2,477	correct, but boring. add a banner at least

04-25-2004, 12:44 PM	#17
SlickRick Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Kingman AZ Posts: 2,849	not bad pretty clean

04-25-2004, 12:48 PM	#18
BradM Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: 1123,6536,5231 Posts: 3,397	Very small page... bland. I don't know how well it will do. Nice but you need osme more pazzaz to it.

04-26-2004, 03:38 AM	#19
BlueFly Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: NC, USA Posts: 716	Ok... I jazzed it up just a bit. I wanted to keep it simple, but I got rid of most of the blank space. __________________ Now Taking Hard Link Trades BTW - NEVER use thexxxhost.com

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04-26-2004, 04:11 AM	#21
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