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Old 03-25-2004, 04:43 AM   #1
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Please review my new site!

Hi guys,

I need a small review to my new site

http://www.yasmin-smoking.com/tour1.htm

Thank you for all critics.

All the best
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Old 03-25-2004, 04:50 AM   #2
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no critic???
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Old 03-25-2004, 04:52 AM   #3
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The text is too hard to read and too close together. And there's too many of those white things flying off it that make it look like it's shimmering in the moonlight.
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Old 03-25-2004, 04:54 AM   #4
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looks good to me. Intresting niche to.
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Old 03-25-2004, 04:55 AM   #5
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Thank you!
Yes, the text should be correct.
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Old 03-25-2004, 05:13 AM   #6
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Well you might get Phillip Morris to sponsor the site and you will make more money.

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Old 03-25-2004, 05:14 AM   #7
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Thanks Grumpy!
yes smoking is a very good selling niche.
I have 2(+1 new) smoking paysites and each sells very well. And smoking is a growing niche too.
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Old 03-25-2004, 05:16 AM   #8
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I like the design, but the text isn't easy to read. Interesting niche you got there
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Old 03-25-2004, 05:19 AM   #9
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I like the design, but the text isn't easy to read. Interesting niche you got there
thanks, yes I will change the text.
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Old 03-25-2004, 05:27 AM   #10
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your site looks good.
font used in logo is hard to read.
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Old 03-25-2004, 06:43 AM   #11
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It looks nice to me,but just change that font
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Old 03-25-2004, 07:37 AM   #12
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not bad

the font is a little illegible, and you should definately learn the photoshop technique of layer styles. jazzing up your text a bit will improve that design ten-fold.
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Old 03-25-2004, 07:59 AM   #13
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not bad

the font is a little illegible, and you should definately learn the photoshop technique of layer styles. jazzing up your text a bit will improve that design ten-fold.
Thank you!
I see the problem is definately the font.
Important critics for me, thanks.
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