Critique my galleries please (pics and video)

Not bad

just regular simple galleries...

On the second one put those text links in the middle. Actually do that on all of them. they will look so much nicer

They're not bad ... a couple suggestions:

1) As someone else said put something in the middle. You've got 3 rows of images.. break it up and put a line of text and maybe a link between the 1st and 2nd row.

2) Make it blatantly obvious that the surfer has to click on a link to see more pictures (ie: join). Instead of links like "Limelight girls - click here" make it more like "Click Here To Download More Pics of Cris!"

3) Don't ever think that a surfer is going to have his eyes on anything other than the thumbs / pics. When a surfer is surfing TGPs he's looking at free porn, he doesn't care about a small link or graphic that links to your paysite. You want the links to BE BIG AND FLASHY! To distract from the pictures without being too invasive, annoying and pissing off TGP owners.
A simple animated "Click Here For More Pics" button directly under the thumbs that flashes does the trick ;)

4) This is just my personal opinion / taste .. but I always put borders around the images. Not blue link borders.. but nice 1 pixel black or dark purple borders .. looks more professional.