Critique this TGP design plz.. - GoFuckYourself.com

Dynamix · 01-27-2004, 10:15 PM

whattup, i'm still new at the adult design biz so if you all wouldn't mind givin me some feedback on this i'd appreciate it

thanks

NiTe-HaWk · 01-27-2004, 10:22 PM

I like it. How much do you charge for designs?

NiTe-HaWk · 01-27-2004, 10:23 PM

It would be nice to see it on a server so I could see the rest of the page.

Dynamix · 01-27-2004, 10:24 PM

Cheap, I'm still trying to make a name for myself.. or at least build a decent portfolio

This guy's paying me $100 for the TGP design plus some promo/recip graphics..

Oracle Porn · 01-27-2004, 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dynamix
Cheap, I'm still trying to make a name for myself.. or at least build a decent portfolio

This guy's paying me $100 for the TGP design plus some promo/recip graphics..

$100 for a tgp design is VERY normal price. Its far from being cheap.

Slick · 01-27-2004, 10:26 PM

It looks good so far, but like NiTe-HaWk says, it'd be nice to see the full page.

The one thing that I'd pick out is all of that space above the logo, I think that it should be trimmed outta there. You'd rather have your content up a little higher than to have that dead space up top.

Dynamix · 01-27-2004, 10:26 PM

my bad

all I have seen is $200+ at some of the other design sites.. thought it was a reasonable price

NiTe-HaWk · 01-27-2004, 10:29 PM

Not a bad price but like Oracle Porn said pretty normal price. If you said $50 you might get some business

pradaboy · 01-27-2004, 10:29 PM

it looks pretty good, maybe think about adding some color to it?

Dynamix · 01-27-2004, 10:31 PM

lol, I never said I wouldn't go lower

OzMan84 · 01-27-2004, 10:31 PM

looks good mate

SCOOTER · 01-27-2004, 10:33 PM

looks good

OzMan84 · 01-27-2004, 10:37 PM

but um, lucky it says phatlinks and not phatslinks mate

Dynamix · 01-27-2004, 10:38 PM

lol, it's not for me anyways

Odin · 01-27-2004, 10:40 PM

Looking pretty nice mate.

Lykos · 01-27-2004, 10:45 PM

Looks nice to me

OzMan84 · 01-28-2004, 12:54 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dynamix
lol, it's not for me anyways

let the guy know then;)

paul1000 · 01-28-2004, 01:17 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by NiTe-HaWk
Not a bad price but like Oracle Porn said pretty normal price. If you said $50 you might get some business

don't listen to these cheap ass faggots ... they are trying to talk you down to get cheap prices ... your work is good ... a TGP design is worth AT LEAST $250 for this quality work ... too many third world designers nowdays that are designing full site for 2 bags of rice ... it is a real fucking shame that American born guys have no chance at competing against the rupee.

Don't sell yourself short ... charge what you are worth

montel · 01-28-2004, 01:19 AM

you get what you pay for. pay peanuts and get monkeys...

MetaMan · 01-28-2004, 01:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by paul1000

don't listen to these cheap ass faggots ... they are trying to talk you down to get cheap prices ... your work is good ... a TGP design is worth AT LEAST $250 for this quality work ... too many third world designers nowdays that are designing full site for 2 bags of rice ... it is a real fucking shame that American born guys have no chance at competing against the rupee.

Don't sell yourself short ... charge what you are worth

lol ask sites like webinc and bluedesign studios if they ever outsource to russia, if they say no they r terrible liers.

beemk · 01-28-2004, 01:19 AM

looks good

MetaformX · 01-28-2004, 01:20 AM

looks okay. definetly better than some of the other shit you see here

bdld · 01-28-2004, 01:37 AM

i like it, nice design.

liquidmoe · 01-28-2004, 01:40 AM

Looks good but feels a bit empty for some reason. Maybe change the position of the thumbs, or it might be better once they are actual images.

Observing · 01-28-2004, 01:41 AM

As it is now it looks simple but not in a bad way, is it geared for all the banners that are gonna be plastered in there though?

bdld · 01-28-2004, 01:50 AM

dynamix hooked me up with a great banner for my site, free of charge. he's good

block · 01-28-2004, 01:55 AM

Love the logo looks great. When it's filled up with thumbs and everything I'm sure it will look even better. Nice work

Andy · 01-28-2004, 02:40 AM

looks good to me . but the question is if the surfers like it .. I am confused nowadays with what they like .. but really its nice

Kicker · 01-28-2004, 02:41 AM

Its ok

FireFoz · 01-28-2004, 04:23 AM

I dont really like the lower part (the part that says "phat links'

fuzebox · 01-28-2004, 04:30 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by paul1000

don't listen to these cheap ass faggots ... they are trying to talk you down to get cheap prices ... your work is good ... a TGP design is worth AT LEAST $250 for this quality work ... too many third world designers nowdays that are designing full site for 2 bags of rice ... it is a real fucking shame that American born guys have no chance at competing against the rupee.

Don't sell yourself short ... charge what you are worth

I hate that shit.

DutchTeenCash · 01-28-2004, 04:33 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by pradaboy
it looks pretty good, maybe think about adding some color to it?

yeah the $100 is really cool but more color id say too

xxxoutsourcing · 01-28-2004, 06:11 AM

smokincash · 01-28-2004, 06:52 AM

Cool, I could need a design for one of my tgp's, what you said 100$ ???

WankTank · 01-28-2004, 08:05 AM

I like it man, Kepp up the good work!

sixxxth_sense · 01-28-2004, 08:06 AM

way too much text between the thumbS!!!!!!

put the text links bellow the thumbs!!!

Angie · 01-28-2004, 08:08 AM

I like it, looks clean and fresh, good work

VeriSexy · 01-28-2004, 08:10 AM

Not bad looks clean

Carrie · 01-28-2004, 08:16 AM

It's awfully bright and washed-out looking for a porn TGP. You're going to be blowing out the surfers' eyes who are coming from typically darker page (especially if he's going to be doing trades).

Personally I'd dump the text next to the thumbs and add in 2 more thumbs instead, spaced to be the same width across as they are now. And trim the space above the header, of course.

Other than that it looks nice. $100 is about the going rate for something like this, with the extra recips and such thrown in you are giving a nice reasonable price.

LadyMischief · 01-28-2004, 08:19 AM

Look, it's a TGP.

Where's my $5?

Froey Twe · 01-28-2004, 08:25 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dynamix
whattup, i'm still new at the adult design biz so if you all wouldn't mind givin me some feedback on this i'd appreciate it

thanks

its kind of dull

Thomas · 01-28-2004, 08:27 AM

I don't like the text font.

01-27-2004, 10:15 PM	#1
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01-27-2004, 10:24 PM	#4
Dynamix G F Y not Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: MN Posts: 2,910	Cheap, I'm still trying to make a name for myself.. or at least build a decent portfolio This guy's paying me $100 for the TGP design plus some promo/recip graphics.. __________________ TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com See who I am at AdultWhosWho.com!

01-27-2004, 10:26 PM	#7
Dynamix G F Y not Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: MN Posts: 2,910	my bad all I have seen is $200+ at some of the other design sites.. thought it was a reasonable price __________________ TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com See who I am at AdultWhosWho.com!

01-27-2004, 10:29 PM	#9
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01-27-2004, 10:31 PM	#10
Dynamix G F Y not Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: MN Posts: 2,910	lol, I never said I wouldn't go lower __________________ TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com See who I am at AdultWhosWho.com!

01-27-2004, 10:22 PM	#2
NiTe-HaWk Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: USA Posts: 1,196	I like it. How much do you charge for designs?

01-27-2004, 10:23 PM	#3
NiTe-HaWk Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: USA Posts: 1,196	It would be nice to see it on a server so I could see the rest of the page.

01-27-2004, 10:26 PM	#6
Slick Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Houghton, MI Posts: 7,338	It looks good so far, but like NiTe-HaWk says, it'd be nice to see the full page. The one thing that I'd pick out is all of that space above the logo, I think that it should be trimmed outta there. You'd rather have your content up a little higher than to have that dead space up top.

01-27-2004, 10:31 PM	#11
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01-27-2004, 10:33 PM	#12
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01-27-2004, 10:37 PM	#13
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01-27-2004, 10:38 PM	#14
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01-27-2004, 10:40 PM	#15
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MetaformX Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 6,704	looks okay. definetly better than some of the other shit you see here __________________

01-28-2004, 01:37 AM	#23
bdld $100,000 Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 11,452	i like it, nice design.

01-28-2004, 01:40 AM	#24
liquidmoe Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: NY Posts: 4,994	Looks good but feels a bit empty for some reason. Maybe change the position of the thumbs, or it might be better once they are actual images. __________________ Take Luck!

01-28-2004, 01:41 AM	#25
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01-28-2004, 01:50 AM	#26
bdld $100,000 Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 11,452	dynamix hooked me up with a great banner for my site, free of charge. he's good

01-28-2004, 01:55 AM	#27
block Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Winnipeg, Canada - cough check sig cough Posts: 1,258	Love the logo looks great. When it's filled up with thumbs and everything I'm sure it will look even better. Nice work

01-28-2004, 02:40 AM	#28
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01-28-2004, 04:23 AM	#30
FireFoz Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 480	I dont really like the lower part (the part that says "phat links'

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01-28-2004, 06:52 AM	#34
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01-28-2004, 08:05 AM	#35
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01-28-2004, 08:06 AM	#36
sixxxth_sense So Fucking Banned Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: T.O. Posts: 2,430	way too much text between the thumbS!!!!!! put the text links bellow the thumbs!!!

01-28-2004, 08:08 AM	#37
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01-28-2004, 08:16 AM	#39
Carrie Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Virgin - nee Posts: 3,162	It's awfully bright and washed-out looking for a porn TGP. You're going to be blowing out the surfers' eyes who are coming from typically darker page (especially if he's going to be doing trades). Personally I'd dump the text next to the thumbs and add in 2 more thumbs instead, spaced to be the same width across as they are now. And trim the space above the header, of course. Other than that it looks nice. $100 is about the going rate for something like this, with the extra recips and such thrown in you are giving a nice reasonable price.

01-28-2004, 08:19 AM	#40
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01-28-2004, 08:27 AM	#42
Thomas Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 277	I don't like the text font.