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  • Dynamix
    G F Y not
    • Jan 2004
    • 2910

    #1

    Critique this TGP design plz..

    whattup, i'm still new at the adult design biz so if you all wouldn't mind givin me some feedback on this i'd appreciate it

    thanks


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  • NiTe-HaWk
    Confirmed User
    • Jul 2003
    • 1196

    #2
    I like it. How much do you charge for designs?
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    • NiTe-HaWk
      Confirmed User
      • Jul 2003
      • 1196

      #3
      It would be nice to see it on a server so I could see the rest of the page.
      SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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      • Dynamix
        G F Y not
        • Jan 2004
        • 2910

        #4
        Cheap, I'm still trying to make a name for myself.. or at least build a decent portfolio

        This guy's paying me $100 for the TGP design plus some promo/recip graphics..

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        • Oracle Porn
          Affiliate
          • Oct 2002
          • 24433

          #5
          Originally posted by Dynamix
          Cheap, I'm still trying to make a name for myself.. or at least build a decent portfolio

          This guy's paying me $100 for the TGP design plus some promo/recip graphics..
          $100 for a tgp design is VERY normal price. Its far from being cheap.


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          • Slick
            Confirmed User
            • Feb 2001
            • 7338

            #6
            It looks good so far, but like NiTe-HaWk says, it'd be nice to see the full page.

            The one thing that I'd pick out is all of that space above the logo, I think that it should be trimmed outta there. You'd rather have your content up a little higher than to have that dead space up top.

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            • Dynamix
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              • Jan 2004
              • 2910

              #7
              my bad all I have seen is $200+ at some of the other design sites.. thought it was a reasonable price

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              • NiTe-HaWk
                Confirmed User
                • Jul 2003
                • 1196

                #8
                Not a bad price but like Oracle Porn said pretty normal price. If you said $50 you might get some business
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                • pradaboy
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                  • Dec 2003
                  • 12931

                  #9
                  it looks pretty good, maybe think about adding some color to it?
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                  • Dynamix
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                    • Jan 2004
                    • 2910

                    #10
                    lol, I never said I wouldn't go lower

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                    • OzMan84
                      Confirmed User
                      • Nov 2003
                      • 4740

                      #11
                      looks good mate
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                      • SCOOTER
                        Confirmed User
                        • Oct 2001
                        • 4010

                        #12
                        looks good
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                        • OzMan84
                          Confirmed User
                          • Nov 2003
                          • 4740

                          #13
                          but um, lucky it says phatlinks and not phatslinks mate
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                          • Dynamix
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                            • Jan 2004
                            • 2910

                            #14
                            lol, it's not for me anyways

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                            • Odin
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                              • Jan 2004
                              • 2545

                              #15
                              Looking pretty nice mate.
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                              • Lykos
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                                • Apr 2003
                                • 31032

                                #16
                                Looks nice to me

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                                • OzMan84
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Nov 2003
                                  • 4740

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by Dynamix
                                  lol, it's not for me anyways
                                  let the guy know then;)
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                                  • paul1000
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                                    • Aug 2003
                                    • 181

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by NiTe-HaWk
                                    Not a bad price but like Oracle Porn said pretty normal price. If you said $50 you might get some business
                                    don't listen to these cheap ass faggots ... they are trying to talk you down to get cheap prices ... your work is good ... a TGP design is worth AT LEAST $250 for this quality work ... too many third world designers nowdays that are designing full site for 2 bags of rice ... it is a real fucking shame that American born guys have no chance at competing against the rupee.

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                                    • montel
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                                      • Jul 2001
                                      • 2606

                                      #19
                                      you get what you pay for. pay peanuts and get monkeys...
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                                      • MetaMan
                                        I AM WEB 2.0
                                        • Jan 2003
                                        • 28682

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by paul1000


                                        don't listen to these cheap ass faggots ... they are trying to talk you down to get cheap prices ... your work is good ... a TGP design is worth AT LEAST $250 for this quality work ... too many third world designers nowdays that are designing full site for 2 bags of rice ... it is a real fucking shame that American born guys have no chance at competing against the rupee.

                                        Don't sell yourself short ... charge what you are worth
                                        lol ask sites like webinc and bluedesign studios if they ever outsource to russia, if they say no they r terrible liers.

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                                        • beemk
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                                          • Jan 2002
                                          • 20829

                                          #21
                                          looks good
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                                          • MetaformX
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                                            • Mar 2002
                                            • 6704

                                            #22
                                            looks okay. definetly better than some of the other shit you see here

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                                            • bdld
                                              $100,000
                                              • Dec 2001
                                              • 11452

                                              #23
                                              i like it, nice design.

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                                              • liquidmoe
                                                Confirmed User
                                                • Mar 2002
                                                • 4994

                                                #24
                                                Looks good but feels a bit empty for some reason. Maybe change the position of the thumbs, or it might be better once they are actual images.

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                                                • Observing
                                                  Confirmed User
                                                  • Jan 2004
                                                  • 809

                                                  #25
                                                  As it is now it looks simple but not in a bad way, is it geared for all the banners that are gonna be plastered in there though?

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                                                  • bdld
                                                    $100,000
                                                    • Dec 2001
                                                    • 11452

                                                    #26
                                                    dynamix hooked me up with a great banner for my site, free of charge. he's good

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                                                    • block
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Jan 2004
                                                      • 1258

                                                      #27
                                                      Love the logo looks great. When it's filled up with thumbs and everything I'm sure it will look even better. Nice work

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                                                      • Andy
                                                        Confirmed User
                                                        • Jan 2001
                                                        • 460

                                                        #28
                                                        looks good to me . but the question is if the surfers like it .. I am confused nowadays with what they like .. but really its nice
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                                                          #29
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                                                          • FireFoz
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                                                            • Apr 2002
                                                            • 480

                                                            #30
                                                            I dont really like the lower part (the part that says "phat links'

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                                                            • fuzebox
                                                              making it rain
                                                              • Oct 2003
                                                              • 22352

                                                              #31
                                                              Originally posted by paul1000


                                                              don't listen to these cheap ass faggots ... they are trying to talk you down to get cheap prices ... your work is good ... a TGP design is worth AT LEAST $250 for this quality work ... too many third world designers nowdays that are designing full site for 2 bags of rice ... it is a real fucking shame that American born guys have no chance at competing against the rupee.

                                                              Don't sell yourself short ... charge what you are worth


                                                              I hate that shit.

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                                                              • DutchTeenCash
                                                                I like Dutch Girls
                                                                • Feb 2003
                                                                • 21684

                                                                #32
                                                                Originally posted by pradaboy
                                                                it looks pretty good, maybe think about adding some color to it?
                                                                yeah the $100 is really cool but more color id say too

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                                                                • xxxoutsourcing
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                                                                  • Oct 2003
                                                                  • 3888

                                                                  #33
                                                                  Nice

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                                                                  • smokincash
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                                                                    • Jan 2004
                                                                    • 429

                                                                    #34
                                                                    Cool, I could need a design for one of my tgp's, what you said 100$ ???

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                                                                    • WankTank
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                                                                      • Jan 2004
                                                                      • 595

                                                                      #35
                                                                      I like it man, Kepp up the good work!

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                                                                      • sixxxth_sense
                                                                        So Fucking Banned
                                                                        • Nov 2003
                                                                        • 2430

                                                                        #36
                                                                        way too much text between the thumbS!!!!!!

                                                                        put the text links bellow the thumbs!!!

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                                                                        • Angie
                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                          • Sep 2002
                                                                          • 460

                                                                          #37
                                                                          I like it, looks clean and fresh, good work

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                                                                          • VeriSexy
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                                                                            #38
                                                                            Not bad looks clean
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                                                                            • Carrie
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                                                                              • Apr 2002
                                                                              • 3162

                                                                              #39
                                                                              It's awfully bright and washed-out looking for a porn TGP. You're going to be blowing out the surfers' eyes who are coming from typically darker page (especially if he's going to be doing trades).

                                                                              Personally I'd dump the text next to the thumbs and add in 2 more thumbs instead, spaced to be the same width across as they are now. And trim the space above the header, of course.

                                                                              Other than that it looks nice. $100 is about the going rate for something like this, with the extra recips and such thrown in you are giving a nice reasonable price.

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                                                                              • LadyMischief
                                                                                Orgasms N Such!
                                                                                • Sep 2002
                                                                                • 18135

                                                                                #40
                                                                                Look, it's a TGP.

                                                                                Where's my $5?

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                                                                                • Froey Twe
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                                                                                  • Jan 2003
                                                                                  • 1297

                                                                                  #41
                                                                                  Originally posted by Dynamix
                                                                                  whattup, i'm still new at the adult design biz so if you all wouldn't mind givin me some feedback on this i'd appreciate it

                                                                                  thanks

                                                                                  its kind of dull

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                                                                                  • Thomas
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                                                                                    • Jul 2002
                                                                                    • 277

                                                                                    #42
                                                                                    I don't like the text font.

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