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Discuss what's fucking going on, and which programs are best and worst. One-time "program" announcements from "established" webmasters are allowed. |
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Here's Your Sign
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its hot!
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too big.. too much text IMHO
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Skin tones are a little yello IMHO.
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Will you marry me
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too busy looking
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aka K-Man
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looks good... i'd choose another main pic though, that's not a very flattering head-on face shot... makes your face look fat...
will you marry me?
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I agree with Greg, too much text on the right side. Perhaps you could spread the text of MeetNeriah over the entire right column and get rid of the features and friends section? I like the video content right into the FPA like this though, and the rest looks great.
WG
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Thanks you guys...as far as my face looking fat...well maybe it is!
I will bring the gold tones down just a bit and try to minimize the text...thanks for all the advice ![]() |
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1. There's too much of the same font. Two different fonts and two colors. Nothing stands out.
2. Everything is too square and rectangular. You should pick one flattering photo such as the large one to the left or even the one of you on your back and make it 3 diminsional. 3. Make pussycat lounge stand out more as this might be your main selling point when you try to get across how many other girls you feature on your site. If these chicks are on cams all the time, stress how much interaction they will get with you and your friends. 4. "Be a part of my sexy monthly newsletter" There's nothing sexy about a newsletter. Maybe let them know that you will send them previews of exclusive new content and maybe some reader emails replied to by you. 5. Skins too yellow. Looks like we might need to get our liver checked hehe... 6. The fact that you're a Playboy playmate AND a fredricks of hollywood model is huge. That's maybe where you should do some fancy text layering here and there with these brand names. The "Hi I'm Neriah... blah blah" isn't a powerful enough way to present it. |
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Looks nice
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I don't have anything to add that hasn't already been said, but damn you've got a great rack!
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I'm not much of a designer so I cant critque work that is better than mine..lol.
I have been trying to remember what issue I seen you in in Playboy and It finally dawned on me..You did a 50's type waitress set that I really loved . ![]() |
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slow loading
tones are too bright you have better pics than the ones your using as the main pic
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I'm still liking your second tour that I told you about yesterday.
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Sorry I meant the ad-
Simple, Elegant, Hot |
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i LOVE YOU
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Looks great keep up the good work.
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You are so beautiful!!!
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nice
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I like it. You look very hot
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you look great babes, I hope your site is rocking for you
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Looks nice, but its really slow loading. Probably take a minute and a half on a 56k modem
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The marketing text is boring, you have to make the surfer want to click before you get him to buy.
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first I think your Hot
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Too many images; slow loading.
Ignore the suck ups. have it fixed. maybe combin some of those small images in the row into sets of 2 or 3. Possibly use a higher compression level on all the images.
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I think it has a good npsi ratio so it should do well
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the site looks good
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Good design
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Very slick and sexy
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you might want to create a no nudity one for teaser sites (non nude)
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kinda blury and busy
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it looks like a throwback to your old design - would work best if the FPA had the look and feel of your paysite tour.
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the main pic makes you look older than you are. Fairly big and heavy for an FPA too depends what you want out of it i guess. it's basically a tour page. you could almost just pop the site itself and be one click closer to the money. just an untested initial thought.. it's a still a good looking fpa.
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Is this one better for the main pic? I am not sure if maybe it should be more of a body shot? And this one's almost non-nude...I could just clone some hair over the nip...
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Well I kinda like it. Good luck
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