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xxxoutsourcing · 12-24-2003, 06:53 PM

http://asianschoolchicks.com/

Tell us what you think, one of our new designers did this.

Pornwolf · 12-24-2003, 06:56 PM

Those thai and philipino broads look young!

ChumpChange · 12-24-2003, 07:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pornwolf
Those thai and philipino broads look young!

School chicks

xxxoutsourcing · 12-24-2003, 07:38 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pornwolf
Those thai and philipino broads look young!

Hence the site asianschoolchicks.com
All id's are on file and supplied by content2die4.com

Pornwolf · 12-24-2003, 07:42 PM

I didn't say that was a bad thing. No over PC responses from me, ever.

Judas_Hansen · 12-24-2003, 07:45 PM

Sitedesign/layout = crappy
Content =

who will PAY to jerk off to this kind of shit?
http://asianschoolchicks.com/tour1.html

xxxoutsourcing · 12-24-2003, 07:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pornwolf
I didn't say that was a bad thing. No over PC responses from me, ever.

prostock · 12-24-2003, 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Judas_Hansen
Sitedesign/layout = crappy
Content =

who will PAY to jerk off to this kind of shit?
http://asianschoolchicks.com/tour1.html

so fare alot are paying to jack off to it the same as they are to jacking off to my diapoer sites to ,
just for the fact yuo are into the fat bitchs doesnt mean we cant help you there we have fat chicks sites as well

AaronM · 12-24-2003, 08:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by xxxoutsourcing
http://asianschoolchicks.com/

Tell us what you think, one of our new designers did this.

I think you're a fucking idiot and I have no need to check out your site.

Anything else you would like my opninions on?

Judas_Hansen · 12-24-2003, 08:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by prostock

so fare alot are paying to jack off to it the same as they are to jacking off to my diapoer sites to ,
just for the fact yuo are into the fat bitchs doesnt mean we cant help you there we have fat chicks sites as well

Guess I found the next name to put in my next 2 mill. spam messages, as sender/reply

You asked for my opinion, and you got it.

Space Puppy · 12-24-2003, 08:10 PM

its sucks worse than your grandma

Happy Dicks · 12-24-2003, 08:11 PM

Your banner girl has the "Fuck You Idiot" look

AaronM · 12-24-2003, 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Happy Dicks
Your banner girl has the "Fuck You Idiot" look

How appropriate.

xxxoutsourcing · 12-24-2003, 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by AaronM

I think you're a fucking idiot and I have no need to check out your site.

Anything else you would like my opninions on?

Your entilitled to think what you like, I think your really smart!

AaronM · 12-24-2003, 11:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by xxxoutsourcing

Your entilitled to think what you like, I think your really smart!

Of course you do...Because you know I hit the nail on the head about you being a fucking idiot.

BTW...It's "you're" no "your."

psyko514 · 12-24-2003, 11:30 PM

That makes two ugly designs I've seen from you, and two reasons why I'd never outsource my XXX work to your designers.

1lln3ss · 12-24-2003, 11:33 PM

Unless www.yahoo.com is paying you for the traffic... WHY THE FUCK would you exit to them????

just my tought

Jamdin · 12-24-2003, 11:36 PM

There are some spelling and grammer errors:

The correct form is schoolgirls not school girl and make sure that you are consistant with the spelling.

".The hottest asian chicks from the heart of asia ." should be "The hottest Asian chicks from the heart of Asia." (this sounds better "The hottest young Oriental chicks from the heart of Asia.")

"This lusty little school girls keep spreading their legs for that fat cock." should be "These lusty little schoolgirls keep spreading their legs for theat fat cock"

"...cute breast" should be "...cute breasts"

"Asian schoolgirls on full explicit action!" should be "Asian schoolgirls in full explict action!"

Other than that, the site looks okay. I am not a fan of pictures featuring close-up shots of faces only on tour pages. I like the first page with the schoolgirl in the skirt. Maybe the rest of the pages should have a face shot and a skirt shot of each schoolgirl. Names with the pictures would be nice too. Instead of saying "These schoolgirls...", go with something like "Tsing's first homework assignment was to give a perfect blowjob. She found a willing subject to practice on and she was a fast learner. Tsing earned an A+ in her Sex Education class that week and we have the pictures inside!"

Let your imagination soar with the descriptive text ;)

Those are my two cents and some suggestions for what they are worth...

xxxoutsourcing · 12-24-2003, 11:47 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jamdin
There are some spelling and grammer errors:

The correct form is schoolgirls not school girl and make sure that you are consistant with the spelling.

".The hottest asian chicks from the heart of asia ." should be "The hottest Asian chicks from the heart of Asia." (this sounds better "The hottest young Oriental chicks from the heart of Asia.")

"This lusty little school girls keep spreading their legs for that fat cock." should be "These lusty little schoolgirls keep spreading their legs for theat fat cock"

"...cute breast" should be "...cute breasts"

"Asian schoolgirls on full explicit action!" should be "Asian schoolgirls in full explict action!"

Other than that, the site looks okay. I am not a fan of pictures featuring close-up shots of faces only on tour pages. I like the first page with the schoolgirl in the skirt. Maybe the rest of the pages should have a face shot and a skirt shot of each schoolgirl. Names with the pictures would be nice too. Instead of saying "These schoolgirls...", go with something like "Tsing's first homework assignment was to give a perfect blowjob. She found a willing subject to practice on and she was a fast learner. Tsing earned an A+ in her Sex Education class that week and we have the pictures inside!"

Let your imagination soar with the descriptive text ;)

Those are my two cents and some suggestions for what they are worth...

Hi, Thank you for taking the time to have a look at the site and come back here with all those comments.
Very profesional and mature, thanks again and i'll get our boys onto it after the holidays.

xxxoutsourcing · 12-24-2003, 11:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by AaronM

Of course you do...Because you know I hit the nail on the head about you being a fucking idiot.

BTW...It's "you're" no "your."

Thank you for the lessons, i'll be coming back for more, i appreciate that you took the time to correct me on my posts.
Tell ya what tho, If i am an idiot i'm a happy sucessful one that's for sure, it's easy to slam everyone when your a smarty pants tho init......

I thought smart people took the time to listen and explain to those that don't know or make mistakes to correct that in a proper polite manner......

Lets getting summot clear, I'm a fucking idiot just like you said, now tell me something i don't know about myself please, or is this board just about small minded battles!

Libertine · 12-25-2003, 12:14 AM

Ok, you asked to be slammed, so...

That site sucks.

The girls aren't even remotely hot, half are just downright ugly. I'm not talking "plain" here, but so ugly that the only way I'd hit it would be with a baseball bat. And I do like asian schoolgirls... a lot.

The type of content used in the tour is bad. While you don't want the surfer to get off before he reaches the join page, the idea is to keep him hard while on your site. Head shots won't achieve that. This gives the impression of it being a non-nude site.

What the hell is up with that design? Schoolgirls are supposed to look "innocent". Black/yellow most definitely doesn't create that type of atmosphere.
Aside from that, it also looks like a bad turnkey site with very little content. I'd never join a site like that, for the simple reason that I'd expect it to have exactly the amount of (picture) content sets shown in the tour. You really need to put in some stuff to make it look like you actually have a nice bit of content (e.g. a large table of headshots at the bottom). Some stuff about updates and the amount of pics/vids would also be good.

And the text... apart from the many errors in style and spelling, it's extremely lame. Use some creativity, and give each girl her own "story". Get the surfer involved, instead of feeding him some obvious ad text.

So, in short, virtually every aspect of the site sucks ass. You need a better design, better text and better content. Good luck, it seems like you'll need it.

AaronM · 12-25-2003, 10:45 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by xxxoutsourcing

Thank you for the lessons, i'll be coming back for more, i appreciate that you took the time to correct me on my posts.
Tell ya what tho, If i am an idiot i'm a happy sucessful one that's for sure, it's easy to slam everyone when your a smarty pants tho init......

I thought smart people took the time to listen and explain to those that don't know or make mistakes to correct that in a proper polite manner......

Lets getting summot clear, I'm a fucking idiot just like you said, now tell me something i don't know about myself please, or is this board just about small minded battles!

Fuck you.

Welcome to GFY.

Trax · 12-25-2003, 10:49 AM

ive seen worse designs
chick look very young indeed

xxxoutsourcing · 12-25-2003, 11:24 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Trax
ive seen worse designs
chick look very young indeed

- AFN - · 12-25-2003, 12:25 PM

You said in your Title to SLAM your design.

So a guy does it and you then insult him personally. If you can't take a strong critique then don't phrase your requests for critiques so pungently.

Quote:

Originally posted by prostock

so fare alot are paying to jack off to it the same as they are to jacking off to my diapoer sites to ,
just for the fact yuo are into the fat bitchs doesnt mean we cant help you there we have fat chicks sites as well

AdultNex · 12-25-2003, 12:34 PM

Quote:

There are some spelling and grammer errors:

The correct form is schoolgirls not school girl and make sure that you are consistant with the spelling.

What a classic... It's grammar, not "grammer".

Also, it's consistent, but "consistant".

pornjudge · 12-25-2003, 12:38 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by xxxoutsourcing
http://asianschoolchicks.com/

Tell us what you think, one of our new designers did this.

The only problem I see with your site is that you are using CCBILL

With all that negative vibe going on around CCbill these days, you won't get allot of webmasters signing up for your program. Myself, I will never sign up for a program using CCbill again until improvements are done to their tracking system... I am getting sick & tired of the fuckin scrubbing, shaving & cookie issue. CCbill, remember Affiliates made you what you are today, so don't fuck up it will only back fire on your company & lost of income....

Also would like to add another thing, sponsors must fuckin get their shit together when it comes to Sub Accounts, when they have more then one pay site. They must have the correct sub account number so we get the proper sales...

- AFN - · 12-25-2003, 12:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by AaronM

I think you're a fucking idiot and I have no need to check out your site.

Anything else you would like my opninions on?

LOL! Is that why he got banned the first time around?

Shoplifter · 12-25-2003, 12:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Judas_Hansen

who will PAY to jerk off to this kind of shit?
http://asianschoolchicks.com/tour1.html

You would be surprised.

Jamdin · 12-25-2003, 10:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by AdultNex

What a classic... It's grammar, not "grammer".

Also, it's consistent, but "consistant".

I was also half-asleep when I posted it so

This is why I don't fucking help anyone

Vitasoy · 12-25-2003, 10:47 PM

I'm sorry but the girls are ugly

AaronM · 12-25-2003, 10:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by - AFN -

LOL! Is that why he got banned the first time around?

uptheyingyang · 12-25-2003, 11:31 PM

the tour needs to be re-worked to be effective.

but the niche, and the direction i see it taking, will be viable if marketed correctly.

make sure your 2257 is in order.

12-24-2003, 06:53 PM	#1
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12-24-2003, 06:56 PM	#2
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12-24-2003, 07:42 PM	#5
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12-24-2003, 07:45 PM	#6
Judas_Hansen Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Denmark / Hellerup Posts: 520	Sitedesign/layout = crappy Content = who will PAY to jerk off to this kind of shit? http://asianschoolchicks.com/tour1.html __________________ \| EUROPEAN HOSTING = FORGET 2257 \| IcQ 300-894038 \| anti-SPYWARE \| Last edited by Judas_Hansen; 12-24-2003 at 07:47 PM..

12-24-2003, 11:30 PM	#16
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12-24-2003, 08:10 PM	#11
Space Puppy So Fucking Banned Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 817	its sucks worse than your grandma

12-24-2003, 08:11 PM	#12
Happy Dicks Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 96	Your banner girl has the "Fuck You Idiot" look

12-24-2003, 11:33 PM	#17
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12-24-2003, 11:36 PM	#18
Jamdin Registered User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Kansas Posts: 3,560	There are some spelling and grammer errors: The correct form is schoolgirls not school girl and make sure that you are consistant with the spelling. ".The hottest asian chicks from the heart of asia ." should be "The hottest Asian chicks from the heart of Asia." (this sounds better "The hottest young Oriental chicks from the heart of Asia.") "This lusty little school girls keep spreading their legs for that fat cock." should be "These lusty little schoolgirls keep spreading their legs for theat fat cock" "...cute breast" should be "...cute breasts" "Asian schoolgirls on full explicit action!" should be "Asian schoolgirls in full explict action!" Other than that, the site looks okay. I am not a fan of pictures featuring close-up shots of faces only on tour pages. I like the first page with the schoolgirl in the skirt. Maybe the rest of the pages should have a face shot and a skirt shot of each schoolgirl. Names with the pictures would be nice too. Instead of saying "These schoolgirls...", go with something like "Tsing's first homework assignment was to give a perfect blowjob. She found a willing subject to practice on and she was a fast learner. Tsing earned an A+ in her Sex Education class that week and we have the pictures inside!" Let your imagination soar with the descriptive text ;) Those are my two cents and some suggestions for what they are worth...

12-25-2003, 12:14 AM	#21
Libertine sex dwarf Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 17,860	Ok, you asked to be slammed, so... That site sucks. The girls aren't even remotely hot, half are just downright ugly. I'm not talking "plain" here, but so ugly that the only way I'd hit it would be with a baseball bat. And I do like asian schoolgirls... a lot. The type of content used in the tour is bad. While you don't want the surfer to get off before he reaches the join page, the idea is to keep him hard while on your site. Head shots won't achieve that. This gives the impression of it being a non-nude site. What the hell is up with that design? Schoolgirls are supposed to look "innocent". Black/yellow most definitely doesn't create that type of atmosphere. Aside from that, it also looks like a bad turnkey site with very little content. I'd never join a site like that, for the simple reason that I'd expect it to have exactly the amount of (picture) content sets shown in the tour. You really need to put in some stuff to make it look like you actually have a nice bit of content (e.g. a large table of headshots at the bottom). Some stuff about updates and the amount of pics/vids would also be good. And the text... apart from the many errors in style and spelling, it's extremely lame. Use some creativity, and give each girl her own "story". Get the surfer involved, instead of feeding him some obvious ad text. So, in short, virtually every aspect of the site sucks ass. You need a better design, better text and better content. Good luck, it seems like you'll need it. __________________ /(bb\|[^b]{2})/

12-25-2003, 10:49 AM	#23
Trax [----------------------] Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 14,486	ive seen worse designs chick look very young indeed

12-25-2003, 10:47 PM	#31
Vitasoy GFY HALL OF FAME DAMMIT!!! Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 58,202	I'm sorry but the girls are ugly __________________ [email protected]

12-25-2003, 11:31 PM	#33
uptheyingyang Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Location: chicago Posts: 376	the tour needs to be re-worked to be effective. but the niche, and the direction i see it taking, will be viable if marketed correctly. make sure your 2257 is in order. __________________ promote our original content 30 niche site package with ccbill: www.gashflash.com/affiliates/