Please review my first TGP design - GoFuckYourself.com

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 10:59 AM

http://www.sexpixbox.com/html/TGP_En.../dticash2.html

Thank you.

klik · 11-20-2003, 11:00 AM

that is a gallery.. not a tgp.

and it sucks

i wouldnt list it.

Sosa · 11-20-2003, 11:01 AM

Prolly wouldn't get listed at too many places. You have a few too many outgoing links to sponsors. Most places have a max of 3 and would rather just have 2

Electronic Guy · 11-20-2003, 11:01 AM

klik · 11-20-2003, 11:01 AM

not only too many outgoing links.. i would never list a gallery with a link to an affiliate program on it..

JamesK · 11-20-2003, 11:02 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sosa
Prolly wouldn't get listed at too many places. You have a few too many outgoing links to sponsors. Most places have a max of 3 and would rather just have 2

Jay3 · 11-20-2003, 11:02 AM

I have to agree with both of the previous statments, way too many outgoing links.

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 11:05 AM

Thank you, guys, for the straightforward comments.

Actually, it's designed by our new designer, not me. So, keep your comments coming!

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 11:07 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by klik
that is a gallery.. not a tgp.

and it sucks
i wouldnt list it.

Could I know more about the difference of TGP and gallery? TGP newbie here.

Hindsight · 11-20-2003, 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by hyatla

Could I know more about the difference of TGP and gallery? TGP newbie here.

dude you have 1400 posts.. surely you can also read no?

chowda · 11-20-2003, 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by hyatla

Could I know more about the difference of TGP and gallery? TGP newbie here.

u would be a gallery newbie

gallery have 15pics

tgp have many links to galleries.

voila.

MetaMan · 11-20-2003, 11:13 AM

go into most tgps and read there rules, every tgp has a different rule, some 2 links, some 3 links, some 10+ pics some 15+ pics and even some that are 20+ pics.

ur gallery as it stands now will not get accepted anywhere, but modify out your gallery to fit the main standards of tgps and add the extra links of lesser of the pics after.

an extra link in a gallery is a big difference, and try to use enticing wording to get surfers to click. remember these people are horny try to turn them on enough to want to look further into the site and pull out a credit card.

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 11:13 AM

My anger built up by being his scapegoat at GFY, so I yelled at this new designer, and he has done some improvement.

Please have a look again. And let me know should I fire him or not.

http://www.sexpixbox.com/html/TGP_E...l/dticash2.html

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 11:14 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Hindsight

dude you have 1400 posts.. surely you can also read no?

I built my post counts mostly by flirting around.

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 11:15 AM

thank you Metaman! You are the man!

Thank you Chowda!

grumpy · 11-20-2003, 11:23 AM

Just stop with it. You are waisting your time.

Steve · 11-20-2003, 11:27 AM

One thing I strongly suggest is that you ony use a series of images for your galleries.

1) it looks better than random images
2) you will get listed at many more TGP sites

I actually like the layout, and size/quality of the thumbs - but you do need to work on the text (to make surfers horny), and then cut the outbound links down in order to get listed.

Talk dirty on the galleries, give the the facts on the join page/tour.
Telling me "Caribbeancom.com offers both download and streaming methods of delivering movies, which means subscribers can either watch all the movies online or download all the movies for their collection. You should never miss it!" does not make me horny....

something like
"See Cock Crazed Asian Hotties Fuck And Suck Like Monkeys In Heat!" might get me to click.

Ice · 11-20-2003, 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by hyatla
My anger built up by being his scapegoat at GFY, so I yelled at this new designer, and he has done some improvement.

Please have a look again. And let me know should I fire him or not.

http://www.sexpixbox.com/html/TGP_E...l/dticash2.html

Holy shit this one is just as bad if not worse... fire the fuckin guy

delvin123 · 11-20-2003, 11:35 AM

Guys, I am the new designer for that TGP. thanks all of you for all your wonderful insights. I just got fired.

dgdesigns · 11-20-2003, 11:37 AM

Available for hire:

http://www.dg-designs.org/dexter/hen...ire/index.html
http://www.dg-designs.org/dexter/hentai-pimp/index.html

Will convert far better and get you listed.

DG

Electronic Guy · 11-20-2003, 11:38 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by hyatla
My anger built up by being his scapegoat at GFY, so I yelled at this new designer, and he has done some improvement.

Please have a look again. And let me know should I fire him or not.

http://www.sexpixbox.com/html/TGP_E...l/dticash2.html

this shit will get you nowhere but BANNING from all the TGPs.
links on thumb. that's a big fucking violation.

eroswebmaster · 11-20-2003, 11:39 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by iceicebaby

Holy shit this one is just as bad if not worse... fire the fuckin guy

I second that motion.

TGPing is a whole other monster unto itself. Hire a gallery maker who can build you a gallery that will not only get accepted but get desirable click throughs which will hopefullly lead to nice conversions.

Electronic Guy · 11-20-2003, 11:41 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by delvin123
Guys, I am the new designer for that TGP. thanks all of you for all your wonderful insights. I just got fired.

lmao . you should go around to see the world first before doin sumtin.

www.thehun.com is your source.

eroswebmaster · 11-20-2003, 11:42 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by delvin123
Guys, I am the new designer for that TGP. thanks all of you for all your wonderful insights. I just got fired.

So what were you building?

Was it a TGP or a gallery?

I think a lot of people are confused here. Now that I look at it I'm leaning towards TGP.

Either way, there are 1,000's of TGPs out there you could have checked out and maybe have drawn some inspiration from.

Not saying to go out and copy something, but at least find out what a standard tgp layout is like and build from there.

Good luck on your future endeavors.

Electronic Guy · 11-20-2003, 11:50 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by eroswebmaster

So what were you building?

Was it a TGP or a gallery?

I think a lot of people are confused here. Now that I look at it I'm leaning towards TGP.

Either way, there are 1,000's of TGPs out there you could have checked out and maybe have drawn some inspiration from.

Not saying to go out and copy something, but at least find out what a standard tgp layout is like and build from there.

Good luck on your future endeavors.

standard tgp = www.vietgay.com

Jman69 · 11-20-2003, 12:50 PM

Has the gallery been changed in the last couple minutes?
cause I only see 3 outgoing links to the sponsor, yet everyone is finding more.

I think it looks bad being off centered and the text in the middle is a bit much.
Stick with series pics rather then random.

One positive note:
The Asian girls actually look attractive which is nice. Most use those ugly philp and mixed asian-american horseshit content.

Steve · 11-20-2003, 12:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jman69
Has the gallery been changed in the last couple minutes?
cause I only see 3 outgoing links to the sponsor, yet everyone is finding more.

yeah, it's getting better

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 01:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Steve

yeah, it's getting better

thanks.

delvin123 · 11-20-2003, 01:14 PM

I am a the designer for that Gallery. Thanks all of you for your great input and I am still working on it to make it better. Special thanks to Steve for your kindness and being nice to a newbie like me. Any further input will be very much appreciated.

harvey · 11-20-2003, 03:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by delvin123
I am a the designer for that Gallery. Thanks all of you for your great input and I am still working on it to make it better. Special thanks to Steve for your kindness and being nice to a newbie like me. Any further input will be very much appreciated.

so, were you fire or not? If so, why you promote the site? If not, what did you promised?

do u have a cam at hand so u can accuse him of sexual harassment later?

gallery: won't be listed at most TGP. No series, lots of "noise" and LINK HOTTEN!

tgp: u won't be able to trade with any other TGP, but on some level I think u have something there, even when you came to it by a coincidence of events

hyatla · 11-20-2003, 04:38 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by harvey

so, were you fire or not? If so, why you promote the site? If not, what did you promised? do u have a cam at hand so u can accuse him of sexual harassment later?

gallery: won't be listed at most TGP. No series, lots of "noise" and LINK HOTTEN!

tgp: u won't be able to trade with any other TGP, but on some level I think u have something there, even when you came to it by a coincidence of events

I hired him back.

No, I am not afraid of what he got in his video cam, and the messages I left on his machine.

The Click · 11-20-2003, 04:41 PM

looks to much like a paysite.

delvin123 · 11-20-2003, 04:47 PM

You mean the Gallery itself?

Raf1 · 11-20-2003, 05:22 PM

design-not so hot
content-ok

11-20-2003, 05:55 PM

The content is nice, the design isn't satisfactory. You need a series first of all, an eye catching way of getting click throughs and some sort of theme. DOn't mix too many colors together and make everything look clean. When I see your galleries, they make me think of those pages that redirect and pop up endless chained consoles.

Draw inspiration from the galleries listed on the larger TGP's. These are successful gallery makers who know what they are doing (for the most part). If it's not eye catching to you and you need to ask for advice, it's probably not good enough.

boneprone · 11-20-2003, 05:57 PM

the gallery is full of gooks.

Ironhorse · 11-20-2003, 06:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by delvin123
I am a the designer for that Gallery. Thanks all of you for your great input and I am still working on it to make it better. Special thanks to Steve for your kindness and being nice to a newbie like me. Any further input will be very much appreciated.

I thought you got fired. Must be another multiple personality webmaster

Adultnet · 11-20-2003, 07:57 PM

that is a gallery man

I dont like the layout u used on it at all...

fuzebox · 11-20-2003, 08:26 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by boneprone
the gallery is full of gooks.

partytime · 11-20-2003, 08:29 PM

That one girl has some bush. Is that a wig?

11-20-2003, 10:59 AM	#1
hyatla Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,720	Please review my first TGP design http://www.sexpixbox.com/html/TGP_En.../dticash2.html Thank you. __________________ <a href="http://click.dtiserv2.com/Click/1125-99-us979" target="_blank">DTI cash: Top Asian Sponsor, $75 to new affiliates</a><br> <br> ICQ: 274731765

11-20-2003, 11:01 AM	#4
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11-20-2003, 11:02 AM	#7
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11-20-2003, 11:05 AM	#8
hyatla Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,720	Thank you, guys, for the straightforward comments. Actually, it's designed by our new designer, not me. So, keep your comments coming! __________________ <a href="http://click.dtiserv2.com/Click/1125-99-us979" target="_blank">DTI cash: Top Asian Sponsor, $75 to new affiliates</a><br> <br> ICQ: 274731765

11-20-2003, 11:13 AM	#13
hyatla Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,720	My anger built up by being his scapegoat at GFY, so I yelled at this new designer, and he has done some improvement. Please have a look again. And let me know should I fire him or not. http://www.sexpixbox.com/html/TGP_E...l/dticash2.html __________________ <a href="http://click.dtiserv2.com/Click/1125-99-us979" target="_blank">DTI cash: Top Asian Sponsor, $75 to new affiliates</a><br> <br> ICQ: 274731765

11-20-2003, 11:00 AM	#2
klik Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: san diego Posts: 5,092	that is a gallery.. not a tgp. and it sucks i wouldnt list it.

11-20-2003, 11:01 AM	#3
Sosa In Tushy Land Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Nebraska Posts: 40,149	Prolly wouldn't get listed at too many places. You have a few too many outgoing links to sponsors. Most places have a max of 3 and would rather just have 2

11-20-2003, 11:13 AM	#12
MetaMan I AM WEB 2.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 28,682	go into most tgps and read there rules, every tgp has a different rule, some 2 links, some 3 links, some 10+ pics some 15+ pics and even some that are 20+ pics. ur gallery as it stands now will not get accepted anywhere, but modify out your gallery to fit the main standards of tgps and add the extra links of lesser of the pics after. an extra link in a gallery is a big difference, and try to use enticing wording to get surfers to click. remember these people are horny try to turn them on enough to want to look further into the site and pull out a credit card.

11-20-2003, 11:15 AM	#15
hyatla Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,720	thank you Metaman! You are the man! Thank you Chowda! __________________ <a href="http://click.dtiserv2.com/Click/1125-99-us979" target="_blank">DTI cash: Top Asian Sponsor, $75 to new affiliates</a><br> <br> ICQ: 274731765

11-20-2003, 11:23 AM	#16
grumpy Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Holland Posts: 9,870	Just stop with it. You are waisting your time. __________________ Don't let greediness blur your vision \| You gotta let some shit slide icq - 441-456-888

11-20-2003, 11:27 AM	#17
Steve Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: USA Posts: 6,894	One thing I strongly suggest is that you ony use a series of images for your galleries. 1) it looks better than random images 2) you will get listed at many more TGP sites I actually like the layout, and size/quality of the thumbs - but you do need to work on the text (to make surfers horny), and then cut the outbound links down in order to get listed. Talk dirty on the galleries, give the the facts on the join page/tour. Telling me "Caribbeancom.com offers both download and streaming methods of delivering movies, which means subscribers can either watch all the movies online or download all the movies for their collection. You should never miss it!" does not make me horny.... something like "See Cock Crazed Asian Hotties Fuck And Suck Like Monkeys In Heat!" might get me to click.

11-20-2003, 11:35 AM	#19
delvin123 Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: SinCity - JpCam.com Posts: 228	Guys, I am the new designer for that TGP. thanks all of you for all your wonderful insights. I just got fired. __________________ Free Dating Sites Tips DTICash.com (50% Recurring)

11-20-2003, 11:37 AM	#20
dgdesigns Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 174	Available for hire: http://www.dg-designs.org/dexter/hen...ire/index.html http://www.dg-designs.org/dexter/hentai-pimp/index.html Will convert far better and get you listed. DG

11-20-2003, 12:50 PM	#26
Jman69 Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 240	Has the gallery been changed in the last couple minutes? cause I only see 3 outgoing links to the sponsor, yet everyone is finding more. I think it looks bad being off centered and the text in the middle is a bit much. Stick with series pics rather then random. One positive note: The Asian girls actually look attractive which is nice. Most use those ugly philp and mixed asian-american horseshit content.

11-20-2003, 01:14 PM	#29
delvin123 Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: SinCity - JpCam.com Posts: 228	I am a the designer for that Gallery. Thanks all of you for your great input and I am still working on it to make it better. Special thanks to Steve for your kindness and being nice to a newbie like me. Any further input will be very much appreciated. __________________ Free Dating Sites Tips DTICash.com (50% Recurring)

11-20-2003, 04:41 PM	#32
The Click Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 1,685	looks to much like a paysite. __________________ ICQ: 31-30-30

11-20-2003, 04:47 PM	#33
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11-20-2003, 05:22 PM	#34
Raf1 Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Writer for hire :) Gallery descriptions, articles, blog posts etc. ICQ: 209 356 106 Posts: 12,117	design-not so hot content-ok

11-20-2003, 05:55 PM	#35
shermo Guest Posts: n/a	The content is nice, the design isn't satisfactory. You need a series first of all, an eye catching way of getting click throughs and some sort of theme. DOn't mix too many colors together and make everything look clean. When I see your galleries, they make me think of those pages that redirect and pop up endless chained consoles. Draw inspiration from the galleries listed on the larger TGP's. These are successful gallery makers who know what they are doing (for the most part). If it's not eye catching to you and you need to ask for advice, it's probably not good enough.

11-20-2003, 05:57 PM	#36
boneprone Hall Of Fame Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Portland Oregon USA Posts: 34,415	the gallery is full of gooks. __________________ Industry Hall Of Fame Legend Mike Jones Bow to the Power - Still BP4L http://gfyawards.com/hall-of-fame Learn about it kids.

11-20-2003, 07:57 PM	#38
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11-20-2003, 08:29 PM	#40
partytime Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 258	That one girl has some bush. Is that a wig?