New flash demo reel. need comments!!!!!!!! - GoFuckYourself.com

garry · 10-06-2003, 03:28 PM

I would be most thankful if I could get any feedback on our new demoreel we just finished. We tried to make it tasty and cool ! Can I please get some feedback on it. Good or bad, doesnt matter

http://www.mansionproductions.com/designsite/index.html

Please click on the "demo reel" button at the bottom of the page.

In advance, thanks for all help !

grumpy · 10-06-2003, 03:31 PM

very nice, very slick, but why is the main frame so small ??? Makes everything hard to read. Im not even bothered to read all the small print. Design is great.

garry · 10-06-2003, 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by grumpy
very nice, very slick, but why is the main frame so small ??? Makes everything hard to read. Im not even bothered to read all the small print. Design is great.

Thanks for the feedback !!! very nice word coming from a guy with a nick name like that

Any one else have ANY comments ????

chronic avenger · 10-06-2003, 03:57 PM

its dope. I thought it moved kinda slow. maybe turn up the frames per second? or its the demand for the file.

its a long intro good job.

The Truth Hurts · 10-06-2003, 04:06 PM

the site:
shitty sounds and loops that I didn't ask for.

transition that's been done eight million times before.

the caplital S in deSign makes it look kind of weird.

typo ain't helping. (see: hessitate, note the extra S)

the demo reel:
Not bad, kind of long though...

very bad song that again, I didn't ask for.

typo carried over from the site

both:
seem to be very dark.

garry · 10-06-2003, 04:17 PM

Yeah the truth can hurt some times

BUT I love it. This is how we can get even better at what we do. So feel free to NOT hold anything back, give it to me NOW

The Truth Hurts · 10-06-2003, 04:28 PM

take no offense.

it's just another designers opinion.
we don't all always see things the same.

and, i never hold back ; )

garry · 10-06-2003, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by The Truth Hurts
take no offense.

it's just another designers opinion.
we don't all always see things the same.

and, i never hold back ; )

No offence taken

As you said your self, different view on things. BUT getting different view on things and try to learn from what others tell you is what makes you grow and become a better design/programmer.

So again, thank you for the feedback ! Just to bed no one else care to tell me what they think about the demo reel

Darren · 10-06-2003, 04:52 PM

if your design services are anyway as good as the mpa2 program then ur on to another winner. top notch.

good demo

garry · 10-06-2003, 04:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Darren
if your design services are anyway as good as the mpa2 program then ur on to another winner. top notch.

good demo

Finally some good words here

Thanks to Darren and his great penis pill program. Not that I need any pills my self though

hollymoss · 10-06-2003, 05:00 PM

Nice clean design! I like it.

Holly Moss
www.hmossconsulting.com

SureFire · 10-06-2003, 05:46 PM

Nice Flash work. I enjoyed the presentation. Some of the copy doesn't read right, beside that you have an execellent flash site.

garry · 10-06-2003, 05:57 PM

Holly and SureFire Thanks for the love !!!

RandyAMC · 10-06-2003, 08:56 PM

Nice look Garry, it's as sharp as the new content management program, it will do very well as always!

Quote:

Thanks to Darren and his great penis pill program.

Garry, those of us close to you know better my friend, don't be ashamed.

George Bush Jr. · 10-06-2003, 11:33 PM

Great flash productions !!

I especially like the sex.tv site. ( never seen it before )

* only thing i could say is a little slow moving and it could be higher quality pictures , i dont mind the wait , as long as theres something to see during the wait..

jwerd · 10-07-2003, 02:03 AM

It's no Eric Jordan production (2advanced.com) but it's the best site outside of the bigtime design studios

Keep up the good work, and nice effects... Flash MX ?

DeadFidel · 10-07-2003, 02:15 AM

A little long. Also, isn't that one of the fly-in options at zeocast without the cups and t-shirts?

otherwise kinda cool

garry · 10-07-2003, 01:53 PM

Randy, shhhh, you dont have to tell everyone that I have a small penis

But then again it doesnt really matter that much because I never get to use it anyway.

Mr. Bush Jr. Thanks for the good words. Actually the sex.tv site is something we did over 2 years ago, but then there where some problems with .tv or something like that. So they went out of business. Nothing to do with our design though !

LamerhooD, To be second best is not that bad ;)

DeadFidel, do not know the fly-in options at zeocast, but god knows where my designers get their ideas from. And cool is what we are looking for

10-06-2003, 03:28 PM	#1
garry Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 680	New flash demo reel. need comments!!!!!!!! I would be most thankful if I could get any feedback on our new demoreel we just finished. We tried to make it tasty and cool ! Can I please get some feedback on it. Good or bad, doesnt matter http://www.mansionproductions.com/designsite/index.html Please click on the "demo reel" button at the bottom of the page. In advance, thanks for all help ! __________________ The Creator Of THE STANDARD* *in Affiliate Program Software - We make affiliates and program owners more money! MPA3® – Anything Else Is A Replica Choose between our impressive lineup of software's: MPA3® PRO - MPA3® ENTERPRISE - MPA3® Standard -MAS® CMS - and topping it off with amazing DESIGN, Consulting and Webmaster Services! "Your Mansion of Opportunities!" Around since 1997 and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" to the industry. MPA3® V5 - The most intuitive Affiliate Program Software ever made - MPA3® V5 – Anything Else Is A Replica

10-06-2003, 03:31 PM	#2
grumpy Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Holland Posts: 9,870	very nice, very slick, but why is the main frame so small ??? Makes everything hard to read. Im not even bothered to read all the small print. Design is great. __________________ Don't let greediness blur your vision \| You gotta let some shit slide icq - 441-456-888

10-06-2003, 03:57 PM	#4
chronic avenger Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: C.A. All Day Posts: 2,509	its dope. I thought it moved kinda slow. maybe turn up the frames per second? or its the demand for the file. its a long intro good job. __________________ \| Sexxy Toons \| Blog Designs \| Icq 333676510

10-06-2003, 04:17 PM	#6
garry Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 680	Yeah the truth can hurt some times BUT I love it. This is how we can get even better at what we do. So feel free to NOT hold anything back, give it to me NOW __________________ The Creator Of THE STANDARD* *in Affiliate Program Software - We make affiliates and program owners more money! MPA3® – Anything Else Is A Replica Choose between our impressive lineup of software's: MPA3® PRO - MPA3® ENTERPRISE - MPA3® Standard -MAS® CMS - and topping it off with amazing DESIGN, Consulting and Webmaster Services! "Your Mansion of Opportunities!" Around since 1997 and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" to the industry. MPA3® V5 - The most intuitive Affiliate Program Software ever made - MPA3® V5 – Anything Else Is A Replica Last edited by garry; 10-06-2003 at 04:24 PM..

10-06-2003, 04:52 PM	#9
Darren Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2001 Posts: 5,994	if your design services are anyway as good as the mpa2 program then ur on to another winner. top notch. good demo __________________ Penis enlargement / male enhancement pills - earn up to $229.48 per signup ICQ: 46335817 Last edited by Darren; 10-06-2003 at 04:58 PM..

10-06-2003, 04:06 PM	#5
The Truth Hurts Zph7YXfjMhg Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: In Your Skull Posts: 15,305	the site: shitty sounds and loops that I didn't ask for. transition that's been done eight million times before. the caplital S in deSign makes it look kind of weird. typo ain't helping. (see: hessitate, note the extra S) the demo reel: Not bad, kind of long though... very bad song that again, I didn't ask for. typo carried over from the site both: seem to be very dark.

10-06-2003, 04:28 PM	#7
The Truth Hurts Zph7YXfjMhg Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: In Your Skull Posts: 15,305	take no offense. it's just another designers opinion. we don't all always see things the same. and, i never hold back ; )

10-06-2003, 05:00 PM	#11
hollymoss Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Valley Girl Posts: 155	Nice clean design! I like it. Holly Moss www.hmossconsulting.com

10-06-2003, 05:46 PM	#12
SureFire Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: internet Posts: 4,398	Nice Flash work. I enjoyed the presentation. Some of the copy doesn't read right, beside that you have an execellent flash site.

10-06-2003, 05:57 PM	#13
garry Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 680	Holly and SureFire Thanks for the love !!! __________________ The Creator Of THE STANDARD* *in Affiliate Program Software - We make affiliates and program owners more money! MPA3® – Anything Else Is A Replica Choose between our impressive lineup of software's: MPA3® PRO - MPA3® ENTERPRISE - MPA3® Standard -MAS® CMS - and topping it off with amazing DESIGN, Consulting and Webmaster Services! "Your Mansion of Opportunities!" Around since 1997 and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" to the industry. MPA3® V5 - The most intuitive Affiliate Program Software ever made - MPA3® V5 – Anything Else Is A Replica

10-06-2003, 11:33 PM	#15
George Bush Jr. So Fucking Banned Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The White House Posts: 150	Great flash productions !! I especially like the sex.tv site. ( never seen it before ) * only thing i could say is a little slow moving and it could be higher quality pictures , i dont mind the wait , as long as theres something to see during the wait..

10-07-2003, 02:03 AM	#16
jwerd Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Costa Rica Posts: 1,953	It's no Eric Jordan production (2advanced.com) but it's the best site outside of the bigtime design studios Keep up the good work, and nice effects... Flash MX ? __________________ Yii Framework Guru - Seasoned PHP vet - Partner @ XXXCoupon.com

10-07-2003, 02:15 AM	#17
DeadFidel Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: This was my wife circa 2002 Posts: 6,760	A little long. Also, isn't that one of the fly-in options at zeocast without the cups and t-shirts? otherwise kinda cool

10-07-2003, 01:53 PM	#18
garry Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 680	Randy, shhhh, you dont have to tell everyone that I have a small penis But then again it doesnt really matter that much because I never get to use it anyway. Mr. Bush Jr. Thanks for the good words. Actually the sex.tv site is something we did over 2 years ago, but then there where some problems with .tv or something like that. So they went out of business. Nothing to do with our design though ! LamerhooD, To be second best is not that bad ;) DeadFidel, do not know the fly-in options at zeocast, but god knows where my designers get their ideas from. And cool is what we are looking for __________________ The Creator Of THE STANDARD* *in Affiliate Program Software - We make affiliates and program owners more money! MPA3® – Anything Else Is A Replica Choose between our impressive lineup of software's: MPA3® PRO - MPA3® ENTERPRISE - MPA3® Standard -MAS® CMS - and topping it off with amazing DESIGN, Consulting and Webmaster Services! "Your Mansion of Opportunities!" Around since 1997 and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" to the industry. MPA3® V5 - The most intuitive Affiliate Program Software ever made - MPA3® V5 – Anything Else Is A Replica