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optikalz · 09-18-2003, 12:26 AM

Im not sure if most sites want strictly ANIME/HENTAI style art or a combo of "American" realistic type cartoons with hints of Anime/Hentai. Here's some of my artwork.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!

Here's another sample

Im thinking of selling EXCLUSIVE custom made cartoons for $1 a panel, Let me know what you guys think.

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 12:46 AM

JD · 09-18-2003, 12:48 AM

toons are a little weird for me but those are pretty kewl

tootie · 09-18-2003, 12:48 AM

Great stuff! I wish I had some huge versions so I could try my hand at coloring them

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 12:50 AM

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Originally posted by tootie
Great stuff! I wish I had some huge versions so I could try my hand at coloring them

Thanks Tootie. How about a swap, I give you exclusive toons, you build a BYOT I can use based on some of my other toons?

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 01:17 AM

bumpz

damonx · 09-18-2003, 01:42 AM

good job

tootie · 09-18-2003, 01:45 AM

Real quickie color job. It could have looked much better with the original scan and if I'd spent more than a few minutes. But it was fun.

E-mail me at eightiesgirl =at= comcast dot net if you wanna talk about maybe arranging something.

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 03:04 AM

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Originally posted by tootie

Real quickie color job. It could have looked much better with the original scan and if I'd spent more than a few minutes. But it was fun.

E-mail me at eightiesgirl =at= comcast dot net if you wanna talk about maybe arranging something.

Tootie, GREAT coloring work! What did you use? Photoshop? or hand colored?

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 03:47 AM

bumpy

tootie · 09-18-2003, 03:56 AM

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Originally posted by linkyd

Tootie, GREAT coloring work! What did you use? Photoshop? or hand colored?

Photoshop

CashGordon · 09-18-2003, 05:34 AM

really good, congratulations, pls email me some of your works

emin at sextronix.com

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 07:23 AM

bumpster

candyflip · 09-18-2003, 07:25 AM

I like them a lot better than some of the other toons I've seen here on the board.

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 07:33 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by candyflip
I like them a lot better than some of the other toons I've seen here on the board.

thanks, man.

Would a site based on this type of art do just as well or better than Hentai/Anime?

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 09:11 AM

bumperooski

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 09:25 AM

bumpin for critiques/tips

Roxxy · 09-18-2003, 09:32 AM

wow, cool stuff!

cath · 09-18-2003, 09:35 AM

Those are awesome

How can you afford to consider $1 a panel for exclusive...?

Tex Willer · 09-18-2003, 09:43 AM

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Originally posted by linkyd
Would a site based on this type of art do just as well or better than Hentai/Anime?

this quality - yes

very good works

now as you want to start selling them for a buck
i'll buy out everything that you produce for $3 per panel
must be the same style and quality as color01.jpg
and cleaned up

mark at rc-cash.com
this is a serious offer

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 09:43 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by cath
Those are awesome How can you afford to consider $1 a panel for exclusive...?

Drawing and animation is my passion so the price is fine by me. I also enjoy bringing to reality client's cartoon ideas.

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 09:45 AM

Thanks, Tex. Is black and white okay or full color or maybe "wash color"?

I can produce about 50 a week. Also send me your ideas for panels so I can produce them custom exclusive for you.

Quote:

Originally posted by Tex Willer

this quality - yes

very good works

now as you want to start selling them for a buck
i'll buy out everything that you produce for $3 per panel
must be the same style and quality as color01.jpg
and cleaned up

mark at rc-cash.com
this is a serious offer

Tex Willer · 09-18-2003, 09:53 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by linkyd
Thanks, Tex. Is black and white okay or full color or maybe "wash color"?

I can produce about 50 a week. Also send me your ideas for panels so I can produce them custom exclusive for you.

colored like color01.jpg just get rid off the grey lines and min height/width must be 600 pixels when shrinked down

send me email

i have scripts ready, we can start with pinups and/or short comics

Greg B · 09-18-2003, 09:56 AM

Nice work! Don't sell yourself cheap!!!

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 09:59 AM

Tex,

Sounds great! I'm interested in producing pin up/hardcore panels and maybe later comixxx once you have ideas re characters/storyline, etc.

Linky D

Quote:

Originally posted by Tex Willer

colored like color01.jpg just get rid off the grey lines and min height/width must be 600 pixels when shrinked down

send me email

i have scripts ready, we can start with pinups and/or short comics

Hentaikid · 09-18-2003, 12:04 PM

1$ for exclusive? That's ridiculous! You'd make more money opening your own AVS or pay site.

Grab a chronometer and time yourself next time you do a pic and then calculate your hourly rate. I know some real quick artists who could do that sort of art in 15 minutes, but even then (Which is REAL quick) you're talking about 4$ per hour. McDonalds pays better, I think.

MetaMan · 09-18-2003, 12:05 PM

those are radddd man, i hate most peoples crappy design work, or drawing work. but that is some nice ass sheeet.

stevecore · 09-18-2003, 12:05 PM

nice stuff! looks very nice

Honeyslut · 09-18-2003, 12:09 PM

Make sets and sell them yourself.

Honeyslut · 09-18-2003, 12:11 PM

You could also broker them at places like fetishbrokers.com

alias · 09-18-2003, 12:15 PM

nice!

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 03:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Honeyslut
You could also broker them at places like fetishbrokers.com

How do brokerage partnerships work? what is the % of the broker?

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 03:38 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Hentaikid
1$ for exclusive? That's ridiculous! You'd make more money opening your own AVS or pay site.

Grab a chronometer and time yourself next time you do a pic and then calculate your hourly rate. I know some real quick artists who could do that sort of art in 15 minutes, but even then (Which is REAL quick) you're talking about 4$ per hour. McDonalds pays better, I think.

Hmmm interesting points. But I draw very quickly and I draw for fun. Good points you made though.

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 03:43 PM

by the way, thanks for all the great feedback so far.

tootie · 09-18-2003, 08:30 PM

bump

His work deserves to be seen more

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 08:38 PM

Thanks, Tootie!

Nickless · 09-18-2003, 08:52 PM

very nice work!
how much would you charge for a logo? (cartoon character only)

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Nickless
very nice work!
how much would you charge for a logo? (cartoon character only)

I mostly do only panels and comixxx.

Ironhorse · 09-18-2003, 09:03 PM

That's pretty good work. I hope you erase the pencil in the finals. Do more and start your own AVS and then member site. You will need to produce quite a bit more though.

HEARTBREAKER · 09-18-2003, 10:04 PM

nice!

Hardcore J · 09-18-2003, 10:12 PM

Looks really good!

optikalz · 09-18-2003, 11:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Ironhorse
That's pretty good work. I hope you erase the pencil in the finals. Do more and start your own AVS and then member site. You will need to produce quite a bit more though.

Im working on 50 to 60 a week. Although Im sure the coloring will cut into my production time.

wookie · 09-18-2003, 11:40 PM

Linkyd, Awsome, nice work

Tootie, thats really fast and decent color work!

Do either of you have sites to show off your art?

optikalz · 09-19-2003, 12:20 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by wookie
Linkyd, Awsome, nice work

Tootie, thats really fast and decent color work!

Do either of you have sites to show off your art?

Nope, not yet. Thinking of building AVS sites beside selling custom artwork.

h2ohjosh · 09-19-2003, 12:40 AM

very nice linkyd,

Bman · 09-19-2003, 12:45 AM

hey you do animation? looking for some one to do 3-5 second clip o full frome animation calvin and hobbes style??????

chuk · 09-19-2003, 12:45 AM

Those are the SHIT! I wish I had a dollar...

tootie · 09-19-2003, 01:25 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by wookie

Linkyd, Awsome, nice work

Tootie, thats really fast and decent color work!

Do either of you have sites to show off your art?

Thanks, wookie

Unfortunately I'm not that great at drawing, but I'm learning. Coloring is what I do best for now.

I DO, however, create 3D rendered erotic art. Dont have a site yet, but here are a couple of samples if you care to see:

http://www.extremedaily.com/3d/

misfit-one · 09-19-2003, 01:57 AM

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optikalz · 09-19-2003, 02:20 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bman
hey you do animation? looking for some one to do 3-5 second clip o full frome animation calvin and hobbes style??????

Thanks for the compliments and tips guys, I appreciate it!!!

BMAN,

Do you have a link to an existing type of cartoon you want animated? will it be X RATED?

09-18-2003, 12:26 AM	#1
optikalz Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Lost Angelez Posts: 555	HELP!!! Please critique my XXX Cartoons Im not sure if most sites want strictly ANIME/HENTAI style art or a combo of "American" realistic type cartoons with hints of Anime/Hentai. Here's some of my artwork. Feedback would be greatly appreciated!!! Here's another sample Im thinking of selling EXCLUSIVE custom made cartoons for $1 a panel, Let me know what you guys think.

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tootie Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Planet Earp Posts: 6,041	Great stuff! I wish I had some huge versions so I could try my hand at coloring them __________________

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tootie Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Planet Earp Posts: 6,041	Real quickie color job. It could have looked much better with the original scan and if I'd spent more than a few minutes. But it was fun. E-mail me at eightiesgirl =at= comcast dot net if you wanna talk about maybe arranging something. __________________

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Hentaikid Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 1,249	1$ for exclusive? That's ridiculous! You'd make more money opening your own AVS or pay site. Grab a chronometer and time yourself next time you do a pic and then calculate your hourly rate. I know some real quick artists who could do that sort of art in 15 minutes, but even then (Which is REAL quick) you're talking about 4$ per hour. McDonalds pays better, I think.

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MetaMan I AM WEB 2.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 28,682	those are radddd man, i hate most peoples crappy design work, or drawing work. but that is some nice ass sheeet.

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optikalz Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Lost Angelez Posts: 555	by the way, thanks for all the great feedback so far.

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optikalz Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Lost Angelez Posts: 555	Thanks, Tootie!

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