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  • JesseQuinn
    feeding the wolves
    • Aug 2012
    • 6622

    #1

    anyone here into poetry?

    I'm a voracious reader (novels, history, biographies, etc) but I also thirve on poetry

    I write a lot of my own but it's not for public consumption, just me working through stuff

    anyway, I'm reading Tar Baby by Toni Morrison right now where a so-called 'poet' plagiarizes a line from one of my fav poems ever


    Richard Cory

    Whenever Richard Cory went down town,
    We people on the pavement looked at him:
    He was a gentleman from sole to crown,
    Clean favored, and imperially slim.

    And he was always quietly arrayed,
    And he was always human when he talked;
    But still he fluttered pulses when he said,
    "Good-morning," and he glittered when he walked.

    And he was rich—yes, richer than a king—
    And admirably schooled in every grace:
    In fine, we thought that he was everything
    To make us wish that we were in his place.

    So on we worked, and waited for the light,
    And went without the meat, and cursed the bread;
    And Richard Cory, one calm summer night,
    Went home and put a bullet through his head.

    -E.A. Robinson


    my next fav, Lady Lazarus

    I have done it again.
    One year in every ten
    I manage it——

    A sort of walking miracle, my skin
    Bright as a Nazi lampshade,
    My right foot

    A paperweight,
    My face a featureless, fine
    Jew linen.

    Peel off the napkin
    O my enemy.
    Do I terrify?——

    The nose, the eye pits, the full set of teeth?
    The sour breath
    Will vanish in a day.

    Soon, soon the flesh
    The grave cave ate will be
    At home on me

    And I a smiling woman.
    I am only thirty.
    And like the cat I have nine times to die.

    This is Number Three.
    What a trash
    To annihilate each decade.

    What a million filaments.
    The peanut-crunching crowd
    Shoves in to see

    Them unwrap me hand and foot——
    The big strip tease.
    Gentlemen, ladies

    These are my hands
    My knees.
    I may be skin and bone,

    Nevertheless, I am the same, identical woman.
    The first time it happened I was ten.
    It was an accident.

    The second time I meant
    To last it out and not come back at all.
    I rocked shut

    As a seashell.
    They had to call and call
    And pick the worms off me like sticky pearls.

    Dying
    Is an art, like everything else.
    I do it exceptionally well.

    I do it so it feels like hell.
    I do it so it feels real.
    I guess you could say I’ve a call.

    It’s easy enough to do it in a cell.
    It’s easy enough to do it and stay put.
    It’s the theatrical

    Comeback in broad day
    To the same place, the same face, the same brute
    Amused shout:

    ‘A miracle!’
    That knocks me out.
    There is a charge

    For the eyeing of my scars, there is a charge
    For the hearing of my heart——
    It really goes.


    And there is a charge, a very large charge
    For a word or a touch
    Or a bit of blood

    Or a piece of my hair or my clothes.
    So, so, Herr Doktor.
    So, Herr Enemy.

    I am your opus,
    I am your valuable,
    The pure gold baby

    That melts to a shriek.
    I turn and burn.
    Do not think I underestimate your great concern.

    Ash, ash—
    You poke and stir.
    Flesh, bone, there is nothing there——

    A cake of soap,
    A wedding ring,
    A gold filling.

    Herr God, Herr Lucifer
    Beware
    Beware.

    Out of the ash
    I rise with my red hair
    And I eat men like air


    -Sylvia Plath


    so any poetry peeps up in here? if so, what are your favs?
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  • AmeliaG
    Too lazy to set a custom title
    • Jan 2003
    • 10663

    #2
    Oh wow, haven't thought of that Edwin Arlington Robinson poem in forever, but it was such a favorite when I was a kid. Such perfect rhythm, rhyme, and message.

    Always thought I should like Plath, but she didn't resonate. In general, I like song lyrics but not so much lines intended to be poetry.
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    • Klen
      • Aug 2006
      • 32235

      #3
      I am , i wrote several hundred poems.

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      • CaptainHowdy
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        • Dec 2004
        • 94733

        #4
        Poetry is nobody’s business except the poet’s,
        and everybody else can fuck off.

        —Philip Larkin

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        • CurrentlySober
          Too lazy to wipe my ass
          • Aug 2002
          • 38945

          #5
          i lik pooetery:
          Hers is a pooem i wrote

          Just stick 2 fingers up your bum, and wiggle them around...
          When you take them out again, they've turned a shade of brown!
          They're sticky & they're smelly, & they kinda taste like shit...
          But if your afraid to taste them, then just give em a good sniff!

          © - CS - 2022


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          • k0nr4d
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            • Aug 2006
            • 9231

            #6
            Originally posted by CurrentlySober
            i lik pooetery:
            Hers is a pooem i wrote

            Just stick 2 fingers up your bum, and wiggle them around...
            When you take them out again, they've turned a shade of brown!
            They're sticky & they're smelly, & they kinda taste like shit...
            But if your afraid to taste them, then just give em a good sniff!

            © - CS - 2022
            One day you will take your rightful place amongst the great poets of history
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            • JesseQuinn
              feeding the wolves
              • Aug 2012
              • 6622

              #7
              Originally posted by CaptainHowdy
              Poetry is nobody’s business except the poet’s,
              and everybody else can fuck off.

              —Philip Larkin
              true motherfucking say


              Originally posted by Klen
              I am , i wrote several hundred poems.
              it's really cathartic, isn't it


              Originally posted by k0nr4d
              One day you will take your rightful place amongst the great poets of history
              agreed


              Originally posted by AmeliaG
              Oh wow, haven't thought of that Edwin Arlington Robinson poem in forever, but it was such a favorite when I was a kid. Such perfect rhythm, rhyme, and message.

              Always thought I should like Plath, but she didn't resonate. In general, I like song lyrics but not so much lines intended to be poetry.
              I love Plath but kinda feel ya, I've read her novel The Bell Jar way more times than Ariel. I just love some of the lines in that poem, particularly the last couplet. was a kid when I first read it and first time I dyed my hair (red)

              to me music lyrics are often poetry. P.E., Nas, Depeche Mode, Wu Tang, Protege etc etc. they just...hit me in such a good way. and it's not just the beat-it's the words too. I'll never dance to Can't Truss It or A Better Tomorrow but both are pure poetry

              anyway, another one for you:

              Eros Turannos


              She fears him, and will always ask
              What fated her to choose him;
              She meets in his engaging mask
              All reasons to refuse him;
              But what she meets and what she fears
              Are less than are the downward years,
              Drawn slowly to the foamless weirs
              Of age, were she to lose him.

              Between a blurred sagacity
              That once had power to sound him,
              And Love, that will not let him be
              The Judas that she found him,
              Her pride assuages her almost,
              As if it were alone the cost.—
              He sees that he will not be lost,
              And waits and looks around him.

              A sense of ocean and old trees
              Envelops and allures him;
              Tradition, touching all he sees
              Beguiles and reassures him;
              And all her doubts of what he says
              Are dimmed with what she knows of days—
              Till even prejudice delays
              And fades, and she secures him.

              The falling leaf inaugurates
              The reign of her confusion;
              The pounding wave reverberates
              The dirge of her illusion;
              And home, where passion lived and died,
              Becomes a place where she can hide,
              While all the town and harbor side
              Vibrate with her seclusion.

              We tell you, tapping on our brows,
              The story as it should be,—
              As if the story of a house
              Were told, or ever could be;
              We’ll have no kindly veil between
              Her visions and those we have seen,—
              As if we guessed what hers have been,
              Or what they are or would be.

              Meanwhile we do no harm; for they
              That with a god have striven,
              Not hearing much of what we say,
              Take what the god has given;
              Though like waves breaking it may be,
              Or like a changed familiar tree,
              Or like a stairway to the sea
              Where down the blind are driven


              Robinson is def one of my favs


              I wasn't sure anyone would even reply in this thread, very cool to come home and see this. y'all are awesome. much love
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              • Klen
                • Aug 2006
                • 32235

                #8
                Originally posted by JesseQuinn
                it's really cathartic, isn't it
                It will discover emotions
                which you didn't know they exist.
                It will fulfill desires
                which never meant to be filled.
                It will speak to you words
                which you never heard before.
                It will remind you of memories
                which has been forgotten long ago.

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                • JesseQuinn
                  feeding the wolves
                  • Aug 2012
                  • 6622

                  #9
                  Originally posted by Klen
                  It will discover emotions
                  which you didn't know they exist.
                  It will fulfill desires
                  which never meant to be filled.
                  It will speak to you words
                  which you never heard before.
                  It will remind you of memories
                  which has been forgotten long ago.
                  beautiful

                  gracias for sharing <3
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                  • TaiGhost
                    So Fucking Banned
                    • Dec 2019
                    • 491

                    #10
                    Originally posted by CurrentlySober
                    i lik pooetery:
                    Hers is a pooem i wrote

                    Just stick 2 fingers up your bum, and wiggle them around...
                    When you take them out again, they've turned a shade of brown!
                    They're sticky & they're smelly, & they kinda taste like shit...
                    But if your afraid to taste them, then just give em a good sniff!

                    © - CS - 2022
                    Hallmark Cards there you go!

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                    • TaiGhost
                      So Fucking Banned
                      • Dec 2019
                      • 491

                      #11
                      I've read most of the good translations of Rumi. I like Byron, Shelley, T.S. Elliott.
                      Have written as well though same as Jessie. Mostly internal processing.

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                      • NatalieK
                        Natalie K
                        • Apr 2010
                        • 20110

                        #12
                        poetry can be fun, i´ve always enjoyed Spike Milligan
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                        • JesseQuinn
                          feeding the wolves
                          • Aug 2012
                          • 6622

                          #13
                          Originally posted by TaiGhost
                          Hallmark Cards there you go!



                          Originally posted by TaiGhost
                          T.S. Eliot
                          yessss

                          "Mungojerrie and Rumpelteazer were a very notorious couple
                          of cats.
                          As knockabout clowns, quick-change comedians, tight-rope
                          walkers and acrobats
                          They had extensive reputation. They made their home in
                          Victoria Grove--
                          That was merely their centre of operation, for they were
                          incurably given to rove.




                          Originally posted by NatalieK
                          poetry can be fun, i´ve always enjoyed Spike Milligan
                          haven't thought about him in several years, and poetry def does not have to be depressing

                          my fav line of mine by him is

                          "And God said, 'Let there be light' and there was light, but the Electricity Board said He would have to wait until Thursday to be connected"



                          to ya both
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                          • Klen
                            • Aug 2006
                            • 32235

                            #14
                            Originally posted by JesseQuinn
                            beautiful

                            gracias for sharing <3
                            Found one funny poem:

                            Diana is my desire
                            To start my fire
                            The whole world is on platter
                            But only her would matter

                            Thousand souls around world
                            But only one is the gold
                            Thousand hits every time
                            But only one will chime

                            Will she be my guided missile
                            Or miss it like missed whistle
                            Will she by my final word
                            Or just a single cord

                            Can we make it to the end
                            To be away from any bend
                            Can we pass above the obstacles
                            To make an tasty popsicles

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                            • JesseQuinn
                              feeding the wolves
                              • Aug 2012
                              • 6622

                              #15
                              Originally posted by Klen
                              To be away from any bend
                              Can we pass above the obstacles
                              To make an tasty popsicles
                              I'd like to be a homemade lime tang one por favor
                              throwing molotav cocktails at the precinct

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                              • TaiGhost
                                So Fucking Banned
                                • Dec 2019
                                • 491

                                #16
                                Originally posted by JesseQuinn





                                yessss

                                "Mungojerrie and Rumpelteazer were a very notorious couple
                                of cats.
                                As knockabout clowns, quick-change comedians, tight-rope
                                walkers and acrobats
                                They had extensive reputation. They made their home in
                                Victoria Grove--
                                That was merely their centre of operation, for they were
                                incurably given to rove.






                                haven't thought about him in several years, and poetry def does not have to be depressing

                                my fav line of mine by him is

                                "And God said, 'Let there be light' and there was light, but the Electricity Board said He would have to wait until Thursday to be connected"



                                to ya both

                                - Loving your posts.

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                                • JesseQuinn
                                  feeding the wolves
                                  • Aug 2012
                                  • 6622

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by TaiGhost
                                  - Loving your posts.
                                  merci sire


                                  for Amelia:

                                  re track lyrics,

                                  these are some hard one to listen to but so important. and yes, poetry

                                  Can't Truss It- P.E




                                  A Better Tomorrow- Wu Tang




                                  Blue Dress- Depeche Mode




                                  one of my favs by DP is Enjoy the Silence
                                  prolly not appropriate for this thread

                                  plus all he had in his arms was heroin


                                  another one, I do dance to this track even though Protige choked to death on a fucking egg while in hospital for sickle cell treatment

                                  Black or Red they want us dead. they're still digging up the bodies of Native kids killed at residential schools in Canada. some of them had an 80% death rate. the ones that survived suffered unreal abuse. denial of access to fam, their languages, their heritage, physical, sexual, abuse, zero health care you name it

                                  have no idea how the oldest sister (my mom) dropped out of school and managed to get some work to keep those fucking social workers off their doorstep to save her sisters

                                  apologies if I'm getting depressing again but this needs stating. this is important




                                  had a non-platonic friend over last night, we fucked a couple of times but in between had such wicked convos. love (not 'in love', he's just hot, smart and fun and enjoy his company in every way) people who are not boring and more than just a body

                                  anyway, we were discussing at one point injustices in our communities and he intro'ed me to this chica on yt called JessicaOS. her words are meant for dudes but also very instructive to relationship-oriented females (of which I am SO not). but so down with everything she says

                                  pass her on to anyone you think would benefit
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                                  • TaiGhost
                                    So Fucking Banned
                                    • Dec 2019
                                    • 491

                                    #18
                                    One of the truly brilliant writers working in hip-hop

                                    https://genius.com/artists/Krs-one

                                    I met him for music biz once. My editor let me tag along after begging him for a week or so. Super fucking cool.

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                                    • candyflip
                                      Carpe Visio
                                      • Jul 2002
                                      • 43069

                                      #19
                                      One of my business partners has a degree in American Poetry.

                                      Spend you some brain.
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                                      • Look Chang
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                                        • Sep 2010
                                        • 18255

                                        #20
                                        To stay into GFY spirit --> https://allpoetry.com/poems/about/Pornography

                                        One poem published on this site :

                                        When I was thirteen,
                                        some neighborhood kids and I
                                        found a brown paper bag
                                        by the side of the road,
                                        with a gold mine inside.

                                        We argued,
                                        divvied up the spoils,
                                        and pedaled our bikes home,
                                        booty stashed in waistbands
                                        under sweaty tshirts.

                                        I kept mine hidden under
                                        my mattress, to savor
                                        the glossy images
                                        of those bodies
                                        at my leisure.

                                        Things are different now,
                                        new and improved,
                                        you might say,
                                        for teenagers on phones
                                        and computers.

                                        An endless array of images
                                        open doors those boys never thought
                                        of passing through,
                                        and into forbidden hallways
                                        lit in red and pink,
                                        dim and seductive.

                                        They explore this labyrinth
                                        in dark bedrooms,
                                        drawn to the intensity,
                                        the next strange fetish,
                                        the stronger high,
                                        their faces flushed,
                                        their eyes dilated,

                                        as scowling, incredulous
                                        teenage girlfriends say,
                                        "You want me to do what?"


                                        © 4 years ago, Brian Rihlmann teen • pornography • fantasy

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                                        • JesseQuinn
                                          feeding the wolves
                                          • Aug 2012
                                          • 6622

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by TaiGhost
                                          One of the truly brilliant writers working in hip-hop






                                          true say, so jealous you got to meet him


                                          Originally posted by Look Chang
                                          To stay into GFY spirit --> https://allpoetry.com/poems/about/Pornography

                                          One poem published on this site :

                                          When I was thirteen,
                                          some neighborhood kids and I
                                          found a brown paper bag
                                          by the side of the road,
                                          with a gold mine inside.

                                          We argued,
                                          divvied up the spoils,
                                          and pedaled our bikes home,
                                          booty stashed in waistbands
                                          under sweaty tshirts.

                                          I kept mine hidden under
                                          my mattress, to savor
                                          the glossy images
                                          of those bodies
                                          at my leisure.

                                          Things are different now,
                                          new and improved,
                                          you might say,
                                          for teenagers on phones
                                          and computers.

                                          An endless array of images
                                          open doors those boys never thought
                                          of passing through,
                                          and into forbidden hallways
                                          lit in red and pink,
                                          dim and seductive.

                                          They explore this labyrinth
                                          in dark bedrooms,
                                          drawn to the intensity,
                                          the next strange fetish,
                                          the stronger high,
                                          their faces flushed,
                                          their eyes dilated,

                                          as scowling, incredulous
                                          teenage girlfriends say,
                                          "You want me to do what?"


                                          © 4 years ago, Brian Rihlmann teen • pornography • fantasy
                                          love it


                                          y'all really surprised me here, in this thread. a gift
                                          throwing molotav cocktails at the precinct

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                                          • CaptainHowdy
                                            Too lazy to set a custom title
                                            • Dec 2004
                                            • 94733

                                            #22
                                            "Y yo soy tu poeta y adentro te entra esta . . ."

                                            - Kaleb Di Masi




                                            "Sometime while night obscures the tree
                                            The zenith of its life will be
                                            Gone past forever, and from thence
                                            A second history will commence . . ."

                                            -Tennessee Williams


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                                            • baddog
                                              So Fucking Banned
                                              • Apr 2001
                                              • 107089

                                              #23
                                              The Canterbury Tales by Chaucer is one of the best, followed by Homer's Iliad

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                                              • TrafficRush
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                                                • 2099

                                                #24
                                                Here I sit broken hearted...took a shit and then I farted!
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                                                • INever
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                                                  • Jan 2005
                                                  • 4031

                                                  #25
                                                  https://classicalpoets.org/category/poetry/
                                                  I love Camdough

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                                                  • TaiGhost
                                                    So Fucking Banned
                                                    • Dec 2019
                                                    • 491

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by JesseQuinn






                                                    true say, so jealous you got to meet him




                                                    love it


                                                    y'all really surprised me here, in this thread. a gift

                                                    Soft spoken. Really mellow personality. Then he detonated on stage. One of the best shows ever.

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                                                    • MatureKing
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Mar 2006
                                                      • 4872

                                                      #27
                                                      Real POETRY

                                                      One night with you (20 stories)
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                                                      • CaptainHowdy
                                                        Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                        • Dec 2004
                                                        • 94733

                                                        #28
                                                        Originally posted by MatureKing
                                                        That is not poetry, that is puppetry (which is fine) . . .

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                                                        • manilaagent
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                                                          • Aug 2010
                                                          • 5149

                                                          #29
                                                          You would think a good poet is a good rapper?
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                                                          • TaiGhost
                                                            So Fucking Banned
                                                            • Dec 2019
                                                            • 491

                                                            #30
                                                            Originally posted by manilaagent
                                                            You would think a good poet is a good rapper?
                                                            The Last Poets were both.

                                                            https://youtu.be/UJ-5NFfZTx8

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                                                            • MatureKing
                                                              Confirmed User
                                                              • Mar 2006
                                                              • 4872

                                                              #31
                                                              Originally posted by CaptainHowdy
                                                              That is not poetry, that is puppetry (which is fine) . . .
                                                              Ok ok ok man... be free to discover
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                                                              • CaptainHowdy
                                                                Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                • Dec 2004
                                                                • 94733

                                                                #32
                                                                "The day is gone, and all its sweets are gone!"

                                                                The day is gone, and all its sweets are gone!
                                                                Sweet voice, sweet lips, soft hand, and softer breast,
                                                                Warm breath, light whisper, tender semi-tone,
                                                                Bright eyes, accomplish’d shape, and lang’rous waist!
                                                                Faded the flower and all its budded charms,
                                                                Faded the sight of beauty from my eyes,
                                                                Faded the shape of beauty from my arms,
                                                                Faded the voice, warmth, whiteness, paradise –
                                                                Vanish’d unseasonably at shut of eve,
                                                                When the dusk holiday – or holinight
                                                                Of fragrant-curtain’d love begins to weave
                                                                The woof of darkness thick, for hid delight,
                                                                But, as I’ve read love’s missal through to-day,
                                                                He’ll let me sleep, seeing I fast and pray.

                                                                - John Keats

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                                                                • TheLegacy
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                                                                  • Apr 2003
                                                                  • 18078

                                                                  #33
                                                                  Originally posted by CaptainHowdy
                                                                  "The day is gone, and all its sweets are gone!"

                                                                  The day is gone, and all its sweets are gone!
                                                                  Sweet voice, sweet lips, soft hand, and softer breast,
                                                                  Warm breath, light whisper, tender semi-tone,
                                                                  Bright eyes, accomplish’d shape, and lang’rous waist!
                                                                  Faded the flower and all its budded charms,
                                                                  Faded the sight of beauty from my eyes,
                                                                  Faded the shape of beauty from my arms,
                                                                  Faded the voice, warmth, whiteness, paradise –
                                                                  Vanish’d unseasonably at shut of eve,
                                                                  When the dusk holiday – or holinight
                                                                  Of fragrant-curtain’d love begins to weave
                                                                  The woof of darkness thick, for hid delight,
                                                                  But, as I’ve read love’s missal through to-day,
                                                                  He’ll let me sleep, seeing I fast and pray.

                                                                  - John Keats
                                                                  Keats is one of my all time favorites along with a few others like Wilde, Kipling, Frost and others like them.

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                                                                  • JesseQuinn
                                                                    feeding the wolves
                                                                    • Aug 2012
                                                                    • 6622

                                                                    #34
                                                                    Originally posted by TaiGhost
                                                                    The Last Poets were both.



                                                                    Originally posted by MatureKing
                                                                    Ok ok ok man... be free to discover
                                                                    I'd call it abstract poetry. either way, enjoyed your sample MK


                                                                    Originally posted by CaptainHowdy
                                                                    ...
                                                                    sigh, beautiful el C


                                                                    Originally posted by TheLegacy
                                                                    Wilde


                                                                    now I just need to find my handbag
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                                                                    • MatureKing
                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                      • Mar 2006
                                                                      • 4872

                                                                      #35
                                                                      Originally posted by JesseQuinn

                                                                      I'd call it abstract poetry. either way, enjoyed your sample MK
                                                                      Keep it real, Jess
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                                                                      • JesseQuinn
                                                                        feeding the wolves
                                                                        • Aug 2012
                                                                        • 6622

                                                                        #36
                                                                        please sign your organ donor card

                                                                        Originally posted by MatureKing
                                                                        Keep it real, Jess
                                                                        I try


                                                                        back on topic, or rather a slight deviation but still about poetry of the musical sort

                                                                        as per the title of this post please sign your organ donor cards (if available in your nation) and let your loved ones know

                                                                        my dad died earlier this year, but in Canada still need approval from the remaining nuke fam to proceed

                                                                        was shocked when my mom asked me if I was ok with it; my dad while responsible when it mattered wasn't exactly responsible in other ways

                                                                        anyway, my answer was of course, fuck yes. it's not like he needed them anymore

                                                                        my mom sent me photos of 4 anon thank you cards she received via the Kingston (Ontario) organ donor team. they were able to recover one of his lungs (shocking as he smoked almost as much as me), portions of skin for burn victims, veins from his legs for heart issue patients and his eyes. the latter to me was/is the coolest. two people can see again, through my dad's eyes

                                                                        attended a zoom organ donor tribute thing this afternoon, wasn't sure I'd attend but wrote the tribute spoken in his honor ending with "shine on you crazy diamond". we both loved Floyd

                                                                        two of my best friends (one the artist I wrote about in another thread) asked me if I wanted them there for support but I figured I might cry and I do NOT cry in front of other people

                                                                        so watched buttressed by a kitten (all cats are kittens) on either side (my babies are so sweet and intuitive) and copious amounts of herb but still cried like a bitch when dad's tribute came up

                                                                        he now has his name on a leaf on the tree of life at the Kingston hospital


                                                                        anyway, we rarely skyped but exchanged a lot of music via email. he sent me pics of the elaborate meals he cooked as well, that I didn't reciprocate as protein shakes and tang slushies aren't exactly exciting

                                                                        but we absolutely shared a love of math, words and music

                                                                        two lyrical poems in his honour:

                                                                        from the same album quoted in his tribute, a fav of both of us:




                                                                        and my finest achievement in converting him to hip hop:




                                                                        both absolute poetry (in motion)

                                                                        and please sign your cards. just cuz you're gone you can't still change other peep's lives

                                                                        off for a nap with a cold compress over my eyes to reduce the puffiness before my 2nd work shift
                                                                        throwing molotav cocktails at the precinct

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                                                                        • MatureKing
                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                          • Mar 2006
                                                                          • 4872

                                                                          #37
                                                                          legendary MOVIE - Can I take your photo? (~short movie)
                                                                          Hell Thailand - trailer
                                                                          Hell Thailand - movie

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                                                                          • CaptainHowdy
                                                                            Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                            • Dec 2004
                                                                            • 94733

                                                                            #38
                                                                            I'm slowly getting back to GFY so . . .

                                                                            It’s coming — the postponeless Creature —
                                                                            It gains the Block — and now — it gains the Door —
                                                                            Chooses its latch, from all the other fastenings —
                                                                            Enters — with a “You know Me — Sir”?

                                                                            Simple Salute — and certain Recognition —
                                                                            Bold — were it Enemy — Brief — were it friend —
                                                                            Dresses each House in Crape, and Icicle —
                                                                            And carries one — out of it — to God —


                                                                            ~ Emily Dickinson

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                                                                            • JesseQuinn
                                                                              feeding the wolves
                                                                              • Aug 2012
                                                                              • 6622

                                                                              #39
                                                                              Originally posted by CaptainHowdy
                                                                              I'm slowly getting back to GFY so . . .

                                                                              It’s coming — the postponeless Creature —
                                                                              It gains the Block — and now — it gains the Door —
                                                                              Chooses its latch, from all the other fastenings —
                                                                              Enters — with a “You know Me — Sir”?

                                                                              Simple Salute — and certain Recognition —
                                                                              Bold — were it Enemy — Brief — were it friend —
                                                                              Dresses each House in Crape, and Icicle —
                                                                              And carries one — out of it — to God —


                                                                              ~ Emily Dickinson
                                                                              excellent choice, not a general fan of E.D. but that one rocks

                                                                              so you're getting a new sig soon, am I still gonna be able to decorate your avatar? either way you know I adore you

                                                                              I stare at words that mean nothing

                                                                              that poem so not cheery enough for the forum
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                                                                              • CaptainHowdy
                                                                                Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                • Dec 2004
                                                                                • 94733

                                                                                #40
                                                                                Originally posted by JesseQuinn
                                                                                cheery
                                                                                The Nameless One

                                                                                Tell thou the world, when my bones lie whitening
                                                                                Amid the last homes of youth and eld,
                                                                                That there was once one whose blood ran lightning
                                                                                No eye beheld.
                                                                                And tell how trampled, derided, hated,
                                                                                And worn by weakness, disease and wrong,
                                                                                He fled for shelter to God, who mated
                                                                                His soul with song.
                                                                                Go on to tell how, with genius wasted,
                                                                                Betrayed in friendship, befooled in love,
                                                                                With spirit shipwrecked and young hopes blasted,
                                                                                He still, still strove.
                                                                                And tell how now, amid wreck and sorrow,
                                                                                And want and sickness and houseless nights,
                                                                                He bides in calmness the silent morrow,
                                                                                That no ray lights.
                                                                                And lives he still then? Yes. Old and hoary
                                                                                At thirty-nine from despair and woe,
                                                                                He lives enduring what future story
                                                                                Will never know.
                                                                                Him grant a grave to, ye pitying noble,
                                                                                Deep in your bosoms. There let him dwell.
                                                                                He too had tears for all souls in trouble
                                                                                Here and in Hell.


                                                                                ~ James Clarence Mangan

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                                                                                • Mr Pheer
                                                                                  So Fucking Banned
                                                                                  • Dec 2002
                                                                                  • 22083

                                                                                  #41
                                                                                  Will Smith, a 10yr old in 1980:

                                                                                  I have a buddy
                                                                                  My buddy is a toad.
                                                                                  He's kind of muddy
                                                                                  and flat in the road.
                                                                                  But he's my buddy, my buddy to stay
                                                                                  Until he is peeled up, and sailed away.

                                                                                  I was never asked to write another poem in the 4th grade.

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                                                                                  • JesseQuinn
                                                                                    feeding the wolves
                                                                                    • Aug 2012
                                                                                    • 6622

                                                                                    #42
                                                                                    Originally posted by CaptainHowdy
                                                                                    ...
                                                                                    excellent

                                                                                    To be Irish is to know that in the end the world will break your heart.

                                                                                    -Daniel Patrick Moynihan




                                                                                    Originally posted by Mr Pheer
                                                                                    Will Smith, a 10yr old in 1980:

                                                                                    I have a buddy
                                                                                    My buddy is a toad.
                                                                                    He's kind of muddy
                                                                                    and flat in the road.
                                                                                    But he's my buddy, my buddy to stay
                                                                                    Until he is peeled up, and sailed away.

                                                                                    I was never asked to write another poem in the 4th grade.


                                                                                    if you weren't plagiarizing Garfield you'd be the Bard of gfy =p


                                                                                    You have to be always drunk. That’s all there is to it—it’s the only way. So as not to feel the horrible burden of time that breaks your back and bends you to the earth, you have to be continually drunk.

                                                                                    But on what? Wine, poetry or virtue, as you wish. But be drunk.


                                                                                    -Baudelaire


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                                                                                    • Mr Pheer
                                                                                      So Fucking Banned
                                                                                      • Dec 2002
                                                                                      • 22083

                                                                                      #43
                                                                                      Originally posted by JesseQuinn
                                                                                      excellent
                                                                                      if you weren't plagiarizing Garfield you'd be the Bard of gfy =p
                                                                                      Actually it was Jon, but yeah

                                                                                      I only remember it because I actually turned it in as my assignment

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                                                                                      • sarettah
                                                                                        see you later, I'm gone
                                                                                        • Oct 2002
                                                                                        • 14298

                                                                                        #44
                                                                                        the thunder roared
                                                                                        the lightning flashed
                                                                                        the tree fell down
                                                                                        and the frog got smashed

                                                                                        someone, somewhere, long time ago

                                                                                        .
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                                                                                        • JesseQuinn
                                                                                          feeding the wolves
                                                                                          • Aug 2012
                                                                                          • 6622

                                                                                          #45
                                                                                          Originally posted by sarettah
                                                                                          ...

                                                                                          someone, somewhere, long time ago

                                                                                          .



                                                                                          for real you and Pheer need to lay off the cru$h porn

                                                                                          besides, I hear live toads are super fun to lick
                                                                                          throwing molotav cocktails at the precinct

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                                                                                          • fastball
                                                                                            Confirmed User
                                                                                            • Apr 2021
                                                                                            • 6280

                                                                                            #46
                                                                                            Originally posted by JesseQuinn


                                                                                            for real you and Pheer need to lay off the cru$h porn

                                                                                            besides, I hear live toads are super fun to lick
                                                                                            The thunder rolls, and the lightnin' strikes
                                                                                            Another love grows cold on a sleepless night
                                                                                            As the storm blows on out of control
                                                                                            Deep in her heart the thunder rolls

                                                                                            I interviewed Garth, and we had lunch. He is a poet, Jesse Quinn.

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                                                                                            • MatureKing
                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                              • Mar 2006
                                                                                              • 4872

                                                                                              #47
                                                                                              UP!

                                                                                              ONE NIGHT WITH YOU - (20 STORIES) - YOU BET!
                                                                                              legendary MOVIE - Can I take your photo? (~short movie)
                                                                                              Hell Thailand - trailer
                                                                                              Hell Thailand - movie

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                                                                                              • sarettah
                                                                                                see you later, I'm gone
                                                                                                • Oct 2002
                                                                                                • 14298

                                                                                                #48
                                                                                                Elenore, gee I think you're swell
                                                                                                And you really do me well
                                                                                                You're my pride and joy et cetera


                                                                                                (Kaylan)
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                                                                                                • sarettah
                                                                                                  see you later, I'm gone
                                                                                                  • Oct 2002
                                                                                                  • 14298

                                                                                                  #49
                                                                                                  Met you, brushing your hair with the wind
                                                                                                  Riding your bike up on Mulholland Drive

                                                                                                  Oh, I got a five minute rush from
                                                                                                  You in your faded blue jeans

                                                                                                  How many years is it you’ve been alive?
                                                                                                  Oh I’ll take a guess

                                                                                                  Rebecca, could it be eighteen, nineteen or so
                                                                                                  Rebecca, will I ever know?

                                                                                                  No way, how will I fit in your life?
                                                                                                  How could you live with a man without change?

                                                                                                  Too strange and too poor to be trusted
                                                                                                  Busted a couple of times

                                                                                                  Shaken a bit by the years on the road
                                                                                                  And the women I’ve known

                                                                                                  Rebecca, you’d have liked the name I gave to you
                                                                                                  Rebecca, if you only knew…

                                                                                                  Go home, to your father’s friend’s
                                                                                                  straight sons

                                                                                                  To your mother’s friend’s
                                                                                                  sweet ones

                                                                                                  To the families,
                                                                                                  so well-to-do and so well-established and

                                                                                                  One day, you might wake up to a shock girl
                                                                                                  What has it come to?… this sensible life

                                                                                                  The wife of a fool…

                                                                                                  Rebecca, reading magazines in a chic salon
                                                                                                  Rebecca… where’s Rebecca gone?

                                                                                                  (Volman/Kaylan)
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                                                                                                  • CaptainHowdy
                                                                                                    Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                    • Dec 2004
                                                                                                    • 94733

                                                                                                    #50
                                                                                                    The Sea of Faith
                                                                                                    Was once, too, at the full, and round earth’s shore
                                                                                                    Lay like the folds of a bright girdle furled.
                                                                                                    But now I only hear
                                                                                                    Its melancholy, long, withdrawing roar,
                                                                                                    Retreating, to the breath
                                                                                                    Of the night-wind, down the vast edges drear
                                                                                                    And naked shingles of the world.


                                                                                                    ~ Matthew Arnold

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