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  • RedShoe
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    • Feb 2001
    • 14831
    #1

    AVS feedback...help your fellow webmaster

    I finally made the main graphic for my first AVS. Up 'till now I've been doing just TGP stuff.

    Following the advice of Idinternet. I'll be making one of these a week.

    I need your feedback. But brutally honest. Don't hold back.
    Don't worry, I can take it. It's the only way to improve.

    http://www.usexfan.com/sexfan/coed-01/

    (The images are there, but the galleries aren't built yet.)

    So what do you think? Does the graphic work? Does it draw you in? Is the wording ok?

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    • Kat - Fast
      Confirmed User
      • Feb 2001
      • 2303
      #2
      that's better than anything i have ever put on the net!

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        • deluxe
          Confirmed User
          • Feb 2001
          • 1434
          #3
          I like the design, but i would not let the main image point to the sign up page directly, the surfer will probebly click free pics and then will be brought to the sign up page and scared of before he even read the text you got under the image...

          also the 'free tour' text is hard to find you should but that more up on the page...

          but still GREAT JOB! i wish i had the patiance to but so much time in a design...

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            • deluxe
              Confirmed User
              • Feb 2001
              • 1434
              #4
              1 more thing, in stead of using the fnp banner use a text link, i think surfers don't like to click banners that have a different name on it, it's very confusing...

              the surfer knows he wants to sign up and then still has to click a banner instead of a sign up here link...

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                • aprilkorova
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2001
                  • 649
                  #5
                  Nice Redshoe!

                  The only advice I would have (since I do the same kind of half to full page graphics) is to get your file size down as much as possible. Compress, compress and then compress some more LOL. And chop up the image so it will load piece by piece. The surfer won't get as bored that way as opposed to having to wait for it all to load.

                  It's easy in photoshop, which I think you've already mentioned you use. Use the guides and make sure it's checked on "snap to guide". Chop it up in like 100x100 squares or whatever. Choose rect tool set it at a fixed size at 100x100 or the size you've chosen. Move the square to your first section, it will snap to it, cut, open new file, paste, save. Do it with all of them and then make a table and insert. Make sure to use
                  tags at the end of each <td> so there are no spaces.

                  Pardon the post if you already know this

                  If anyone else has an easier or different way to go about this, post please, I would be interested too.

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                    • aprilkorova
                      Confirmed User
                      • Feb 2001
                      • 649
                      #6
                      Ok, that went freaky..I guess I'm a retard for not knowing you couldn't put a tag in brackets or it actually does it in the post.

                      What I meant to say is use a br tag after each td so there are no spaces.

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                        • RedShoe
                          赤い靴 call me 202-456-1111
                          • Feb 2001
                          • 14831
                          #7
                          LOL, you're too funny April.

                          I haven't played with it yet, but there is a 'slice' feature in PhotoShop6 that will do exactly what you're talikng about.


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                            • RedShoe
                              赤い靴 call me 202-456-1111
                              • Feb 2001
                              • 14831
                              #8
                              Any other suggestions?

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                                • Wildman
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Feb 2001
                                  • 326
                                  #9
                                  Nice Redshoe,

                                  the only other suggestion I could make, is to change the font of your text. Surfers only read what they are comfortable with, and as boring as it is, Times New Roman is the most effective Text. Perhaps shorten the paragraph (under the main image) and change color to Navy Blue also.

                                  Otherwise, Good work.

                                  Wildman.

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                                    • Warphead
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Jan 2001
                                      • 994
                                      #10
                                      Looks great to me, Redshoe - better than alot of paysites out there.

                                      I'm also going to let you refer me to a webmaster account, coz I like to help out fellow webmasters.

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                                        • Doctor Dre
                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                          • Jan 2001
                                          • 51692
                                          #11
                                          Look pretty good
                                          Well photoshop optimisor sucks ... Use ulead smart saver you will save like 40 % load times .

                                          Maybe feather more on the blue girl but it look good anyways

                                          But for an avs good it look very good.
                                          Originally posted by rayadp05
                                          I rebooted, deleted temp files, history, cookies and everything...still cannot view the news clip. All I see is that fucking gay ass music video from "Rick Roll". Anyone else have a different link to the news clip?

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                                            • Pete Dogg
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Mar 2001
                                              • 204
                                              #12
                                              Everybodies a fucking artist.
                                              Nice graphic man.

                                              Nobody told me if I worked hard school art, I could apply it to shit like this.

                                              I feel violated.

                                              Fucking Teachers.
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                                                • RedShoe
                                                  赤い靴 call me 202-456-1111
                                                  • Feb 2001
                                                  • 14831
                                                  #13
                                                  Get this, I learned to do PhotoShop work only about a year ago, while cleaning up images that I shot for a children's book. LOL

                                                  Hey the same techniques apply. I've had photoshop for years, but I never really learned the program 'till about a year ago.

                                                  BTW, that book will be out this coming fall.

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                                                    • Crutch
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Mar 2001
                                                      • 224
                                                      #14
                                                      Very cool Redshoe..nice job!

                                                      I'm curious though about freenetpass. Are they new? Good deal for webmasters. But my concern is after 3 'free' days they get re-billed (i believe) to $49 bucks. Probably going to piss a lot of surfers off.

                                                      I'm curious how this freenetpass will work for you. If freenetpass paid on recurring as well, hell, i'd create a site and use them.

                                                      Keep us updated Red.

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                                                        • RedShoe
                                                          赤い靴 call me 202-456-1111
                                                          • Feb 2001
                                                          • 14831
                                                          #15
                                                          Hey Warphead.

                                                          My site was just accepted by FNP. WOOHOO!! My first official AVS. Now I see why Babagirls was so excited about a month ago.

                                                          Anyway, here is my referal code if you still want to sign up.
                                                          http://www.freenetpass.com/cgi-bin/w...join.cgi?67627

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