New Site....Looking For Comments - GoFuckYourself.com

nobull · 04-23-2003, 10:35 AM

We just finished our newest site, www.MartyLikesToParty.com This is not our official announcement. I would like to get some creative and fun feedback because I know that you all like to rip sites up ;) We have not setup a partner program for the site yet because we want to test and tune it a little more. We will open the program up in 2 weeks, it will be a 50% rev share for life. So go ahead and start dropping bombs about the site.

xanx · 04-23-2003, 10:45 AM

I think it looks great... Than again some people may claim I have a bias

tony286 · 04-23-2003, 10:45 AM

Nice looking site, its not 2257 compliant and you may get shit for using the bottles bud (which is a really cool idea by the way). Maybe create your own beer label marty likes to party brew

Good luck.

nobull · 04-23-2003, 10:47 AM

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Originally posted by tony404
Nice looking site, its not 2257 compliant and you may get shit for using the bottles bud (which is a really cool idea by the way). Maybe create your own beer label marty likes to party brew Good luck.

I was thinking the same thing about the bottles. I will change that before we let the site go "Marty Light" or some shit

vegas2003 · 04-23-2003, 11:21 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by nobull
We just finished our newest site, www.MartyLikesToParty.com This is not our official announcement. I would like to get some creative and fun feedback because I know that you all like to rip sites up ;) We have not setup a partner program for the site yet because we want to test and tune it a little more. We will open the program up in 2 weeks, it will be a 50% rev share for life. So go ahead and start dropping bombs about the site.

you have the word parties spelled wrong on the top of the page-you have partys-instead of parties

nobull · 04-23-2003, 11:27 AM

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Originally posted by vegas2003
you have the word parties spelled wrong on the top of the page-you have partys-instead of parties

Thanks Vegas...this is the kinda shit that i'm looking for

nobull · 04-23-2003, 05:22 PM

bump for the night crew

AdultNex · 04-23-2003, 05:28 PM

Optimize the top beer bottle images and get a new logo.

MarkTiarra · 04-23-2003, 05:46 PM

My little comments:

You're using that TGP style form that's working well these days. It's starting to get overplayed though and so I would say as like many tiomes before, the conversions will begin to drop off on these types within two to three months.

The JOIN link at the top might be better served in a more contrasted color to the rest. Like you did on the sample pages. Make it jump.

The Bud botttles as mentioned might be a minor legal issue.

On the join page - why are you promoing another site? Don't give them an option to leave before they even decided to join or not yet. Have it pop on an exit from the join page instead perhaps. Also on the join page make sure people know you aren't going to hit them with BS charges (make the customer support availablilty well known) and let them know that their bill won't say something that will get them in trouble with the wife.

The good thing with designs like this is you can play around with trying many different sample images until you get the best results. Try to see what your members click on most as time goes by and watch also your stats for the tour to see what gets clicked on most... get a feel for what is making people the most horny. =] Your stats don't lie.

ownerland · 04-23-2003, 05:57 PM

Nice site, need a warning page and 2257 statement if running in US

MCsteve-matrix · 04-23-2003, 06:03 PM

I agree with the comments already made and also would suggest cleaning up the edges around this girl or swap her out for one thats looking directly at the customer.

SureFire · 04-23-2003, 06:10 PM

Helpful hint: Partys should be Parties in your tagline. But I have seen it spelled this way in other ads so who am I to judge.

Clean site

Stashi · 04-23-2003, 06:17 PM

Awsome idea and nice design.

Good luck with it

Swiftone · 04-23-2003, 06:18 PM

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Originally posted by ownerland
Nice site, need a warning page and 2257 statement if running in US

since when do you "NEED" a warning page? I personally think they are completely retarded and accomplish nothing but annoy the surfer. A warning page has never stopped a kid from getting into porn!

nobull · 04-23-2003, 06:48 PM

Thanks for all the suggestions....you guys are the best...most anal QA department anyone could ask for

As far as 2257, how many of you really think I need to do that crap? I have a small disclaimer on the bottom of the page, and that's all that my processor needed to activate the site.

Also the reason I have the Broke College Chicks info on the join page is to let them know that they are also going to get access to the BCC site, I'm looking to increase member retention.

Swiftone · 04-23-2003, 07:29 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by nobull
Thanks for all the suggestions....you guys are the best...most anal QA department anyone could ask for As far as 2257, how many of you really think I need to do that crap? I have a small disclaimer on the bottom of the page, and that's all that my processor needed to activate the site.

Also the reason I have the Broke College Chicks info on the join page is to let them know that they are also going to get access to the BCC site, I'm looking to increase member retention.

2257 is easy to add, sure chances are you will probably never have the law banging on your door, but when its such an easy thing to add on to your site why not do it?

nobull · 04-23-2003, 07:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Swiftone
2257 is easy to add, sure chances are you will probably never have the law banging on your door, but when its such an easy thing to add on to your site why not do it?

Very true

modF · 04-23-2003, 08:00 PM

I would consider not making the link to BrokeCollegeChicks.com not clickable on the join page. You might be losing some traffic there.

TheViper · 04-23-2003, 08:02 PM

That site is not too bad....

NaughtyAlysha · 04-23-2003, 10:22 PM

Just a couple of typos on your FAQ page:

1. "I have a website becuase I'm to lazy to have a real job."

because is misspelled and 'to lazy' should be 'too lazy'.

2. "So now we know your pretty much a loser how is it you get all these pictures of good looking naked girls?"

This seems like it should be two sentences, not one; the word 'your' should be 'you're', short for 'you are'.

3. "they send me photos and videos to post up[ on my site"

You have an inadvertent [ in there.

4. "No man, like how am I susposed to buy beer that way."

supposed is misspelled, and it seems the sentence should end in a question mark.

The site looks great, I just figured you wanted some polishing with the spelling.

Adam
http://www.NaughtyAlysha.com
http://www.AlyshaCash.com

04-23-2003, 10:35 AM	#1
nobull Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 1,256	New Site....Looking For Comments We just finished our newest site, www.MartyLikesToParty.com This is not our official announcement. I would like to get some creative and fun feedback because I know that you all like to rip sites up ;) We have not setup a partner program for the site yet because we want to test and tune it a little more. We will open the program up in 2 weeks, it will be a 50% rev share for life. So go ahead and start dropping bombs about the site. __________________ NOREBILLS -- MAKE CASH NOW WITH THE NEWEST IDEA IN ONLINE PORN!

04-23-2003, 05:22 PM	#7
nobull Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 1,256	bump for the night crew __________________ NOREBILLS -- MAKE CASH NOW WITH THE NEWEST IDEA IN ONLINE PORN!

04-23-2003, 05:46 PM	#9
MarkTiarra Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Posts: 3,833	My little comments: You're using that TGP style form that's working well these days. It's starting to get overplayed though and so I would say as like many tiomes before, the conversions will begin to drop off on these types within two to three months. The JOIN link at the top might be better served in a more contrasted color to the rest. Like you did on the sample pages. Make it jump. The Bud botttles as mentioned might be a minor legal issue. On the join page - why are you promoing another site? Don't give them an option to leave before they even decided to join or not yet. Have it pop on an exit from the join page instead perhaps. Also on the join page make sure people know you aren't going to hit them with BS charges (make the customer support availablilty well known) and let them know that their bill won't say something that will get them in trouble with the wife. The good thing with designs like this is you can play around with trying many different sample images until you get the best results. Try to see what your members click on most as time goes by and watch also your stats for the tour to see what gets clicked on most... get a feel for what is making people the most horny. =] Your stats don't lie. __________________ Retired Pornosticator

04-23-2003, 06:03 PM	#11
MCsteve-matrix Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: San Fernando Valley Posts: 341	I agree with the comments already made and also would suggest cleaning up the edges around this girl or swap her out for one thats looking directly at the customer. __________________ MC Steve Matrix Content - Contact me for special discounts! ICQ: 172308203 Matrix Dollars

04-23-2003, 06:48 PM	#15
nobull Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 1,256	Thanks for all the suggestions....you guys are the best...most anal QA department anyone could ask for As far as 2257, how many of you really think I need to do that crap? I have a small disclaimer on the bottom of the page, and that's all that my processor needed to activate the site. Also the reason I have the Broke College Chicks info on the join page is to let them know that they are also going to get access to the BCC site, I'm looking to increase member retention. __________________ NOREBILLS -- MAKE CASH NOW WITH THE NEWEST IDEA IN ONLINE PORN!

04-23-2003, 10:45 AM	#2
xanx Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Orlando, FL Posts: 3,711	I think it looks great... Than again some people may claim I have a bias

04-23-2003, 10:45 AM	#3
tony286 lurker Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: atlanta Posts: 57,021	Nice looking site, its not 2257 compliant and you may get shit for using the bottles bud (which is a really cool idea by the way). Maybe create your own beer label marty likes to party brew Good luck.

04-23-2003, 05:28 PM	#8
AdultNex Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Bostonnnn Posts: 8,985	Optimize the top beer bottle images and get a new logo.

04-23-2003, 05:57 PM	#10
ownerland So Fucking Banned Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 153	Nice site, need a warning page and 2257 statement if running in US

04-23-2003, 06:10 PM	#12
SureFire Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: internet Posts: 4,398	Helpful hint: Partys should be Parties in your tagline. But I have seen it spelled this way in other ads so who am I to judge. Clean site

04-23-2003, 06:17 PM	#13
Stashi Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 408	Awsome idea and nice design. Good luck with it

04-23-2003, 08:00 PM	#18
modF Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,888	I would consider not making the link to BrokeCollegeChicks.com not clickable on the join page. You might be losing some traffic there. __________________ I do things skype:themodF

04-23-2003, 08:02 PM	#19
TheViper Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: the streets. Posts: 2,560	That site is not too bad....

04-23-2003, 10:22 PM	#20
NaughtyAlysha Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Tampa Bay, FL Posts: 1,843	Just a couple of typos on your FAQ page: 1. "I have a website becuase I'm to lazy to have a real job." because is misspelled and 'to lazy' should be 'too lazy'. 2. "So now we know your pretty much a loser how is it you get all these pictures of good looking naked girls?" This seems like it should be two sentences, not one; the word 'your' should be 'you're', short for 'you are'. 3. "they send me photos and videos to post up[ on my site" You have an inadvertent [ in there. 4. "No man, like how am I susposed to buy beer that way." supposed is misspelled, and it seems the sentence should end in a question mark. The site looks great, I just figured you wanted some polishing with the spelling. Adam http://www.NaughtyAlysha.com http://www.AlyshaCash.com