Business Writing a business resume.. need translator

[digitalfantasies]

Hello GFY assholes..

For a real estate project I need to write a business resume that will impress a USA bank so much that they will grant me the moneys for my project.... The application is all done by email so in stead of my pretty smile... my writing will have to convince them..

I speak English but not perfect and no doubt I make a lot of small grammar mistakes. I want to make a good impression of course...so which one of you English speakers wants to help me to write an impressive resume with impressive sentences...

I will send you my version with grammar mistakes in it... with the relevant info.. you rewrite that into impressive "business" English...

It's a small job but of course I will compensate your hours....




Also.. who has good tips to make a resume stand out? Appreciate it.. thanks and GFY

[digitalfantasies]

morning bump

[Mickey_]

Hello GFY assholes..

was a nice touch.

[Zuzana Designs]

Stewart may be able to help you out from SEO Text Writing Service - Engine Food
He's a ninja when it comes to writing professionally.

[digitalfantasies]

Stewart may be able to help you out from SEO Text Writing Service - Engine Food
He's a ninja when it comes to writing professionally.

will ask.. thanks

[digitalfantasies]

was a nice touch.

only forum I know of where is it normal to start a serious thread with those words

[Relentless]

Thanks Zuzana

Send me the document and I will take a look at what is needed... then Ill send you a price.

I recommend we do not begin the document with "Hello USA Bank Assholes" ;)

[digitalfantasies]

Thanks Zuzana

Send me the document and I will take a look at what is needed... then Ill send you a price.

I recommend we do not begin the document with "Hello USA Bank Assholes" ;)

[RummyBoy]

I think I could do this better than anyone here. I was born in London (UK) and lived there for over 30 years so I have the proverbial Queen's English. I've written for many publications and also have a legal education behind me.

[Manfap]

Thanks Zuzana

Send me the document and I will take a look at what is needed... then Ill send you a price.

I recommend we do not begin the document with "Hello USA Bank Assholes" ;)

Darling fascist bully boy, give me some more money, you bastard. May the seed of your loins be fruitful in the belly of your woman, Neil

[digitalfantasies]

I think I could do this better than anyone here. I was born in London (UK) and lived there for over 30 years so I have the proverbial Queen's English. I've written for many publications and also have a legal education behind me.

Thanks for you reply.. but Relentless already started with the job 5 mins ago..

[digitalfantasies]

Relentless did an awesome job... if his work/words will not get me the moneys approval... nothing will..

Job done faster than fast.. quality is amazing..

Thanks buddy

[Relentless]

Relentless did an awesome job... if his work/words will not get me the moneys approval... nothing will..
Job done faster than fast.. quality is amazing..
Thanks buddy

My pleasure