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SykkBoy · 04-01-2014, 01:09 PM

Something lighthearted and fun

The idea came up over a couple beers and acting like 12 year olds...

MetaMan · 04-01-2014, 01:13 PM

I think the commercial is a waste in the fact it does not get the brand across. At the ending i had to play back to even see what the website was. It should be announcing the website in some way. I found the logo difficult to read and the domain name not prevalent. the idea may be "good" but to actually direct traffic to a brand it was a complete miss in my opinion.

it also does not explain what it is about, people could think it is for an anti gas prescription. i am just being honest with you outside the "humor factor" it missed the mark completely.

SykkBoy · 04-01-2014, 01:49 PM

Thanks for the critique

We have a couple variants and have 3 more commercials planned, each a bit more elaborate and scripted.

04-01-2014, 01:09 PM	#1
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04-01-2014, 01:49 PM	#3
SykkBoy Jesus loves bacon Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Sin City, Motherfucker Posts: 19,969	Thanks for the critique We have a couple variants and have 3 more commercials planned, each a bit more elaborate and scripted. __________________ Support my new movie “The Second Coming”

04-01-2014, 01:13 PM	#2
MetaMan I AM WEB 2.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 28,682	I think the commercial is a waste in the fact it does not get the brand across. At the ending i had to play back to even see what the website was. It should be announcing the website in some way. I found the logo difficult to read and the domain name not prevalent. the idea may be "good" but to actually direct traffic to a brand it was a complete miss in my opinion. it also does not explain what it is about, people could think it is for an anti gas prescription. i am just being honest with you outside the "humor factor" it missed the mark completely.