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  • Grapesoda
    So Fucking Banned
    • Jul 2003
    • 46234

    #1

    and here's MY shitty poetry

    Scars

    a wicked scar, looking like
    ripped jagged death
    crossed her lower spine
    brown mottled and deadly
    left over pain

    "Hollywood's a tuff town, and everyone needs a pimp,
    my husband left me because I wouldn't party, I hope he doesn't find out and
    come back."

    "I left my three kids at my mother-in-laws, because well . . .
    look at me, I couldn't trust my mom."

    "You'll go to hell for fucking on your period, so I don't guess I'll be
    lonely, but then again you'll go to hell for almost everything."

    I took a dishcloth, dipped it in cold water,
    put just a dab of dish soap on it,
    got on knees
    then gently
    delicately worked the red spot of my carpet

    carefully turning red stain to white foam,
    then to just plain old wet, then to nothing
    there's nothing left now
    I just walked over and looked

    like it never happened

    but somehow
    I don't think it's over


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  • Magnetron
    Lord High Groundhog
    • Jun 2013
    • 1841

    #2


    These masses yearn for more.
    .
    Approach the mirrored reflection saying his name three times : "Butcher .... Butcher .... Butcher ....."
    and wait to see if this Bogeyman urban legend manifests in the background, looming over shoulder
    While your neighbors were busy killing off everyone in the neighborhood
    with your own butcher knife in hand concealed behind your back
    you stood for
    ever before the window saying
    nothing

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    • CyberHustler
      Masterbaiter
      • Feb 2006
      • 28751

      #3
      “If you can convince the lowest white man he’s better than the best colored man, he won’t notice you’re picking his pocket. Hell, give him somebody to look down on, and he’ll empty his pockets for you.”

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      • dyna mo
        just a fucking jerk
        • Dec 2008
        • 68184

        #4
        .


        <-- tear.

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        • Grapesoda
          So Fucking Banned
          • Jul 2003
          • 46234

          #5
          Originally posted by dyna mo
          .


          <-- tear.

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          • dyna mo
            just a fucking jerk
            • Dec 2008
            • 68184

            #6
            Originally posted by Grapesoda

            well played!

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            • Grapesoda
              So Fucking Banned
              • Jul 2003
              • 46234

              #7
              Originally posted by Magnetron


              These masses yearn for more.
              Empty Sensations

              she had a hard flat stomach
              and small firm breast
              she was so tight I
              had to force myself in

              I felt her pulling and
              grabing underneath me
              coiled muscles and firm
              warm skin
              with the slight gleam of sweat and
              youth, smelling fresh
              and clean

              with two other
              people it could have been love

              with us it was a
              $40 dollar fuck

              that ended with me
              trying to forget my emptiness
              and her
              waiting at the
              gas station
              for the dealer,

              to get her emptiness
              filled

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              • Paully
                www.Max-Hardcore.com
                • Nov 2005
                • 1556

                #8
                Originally posted by Grapesoda
                Empty Sensations

                she had a hard flat stomach
                and small firm breast
                she was so tight I
                had to force myself in

                I felt her pulling and
                grabing underneath me
                coiled muscles and firm
                warm skin
                with the slight gleam of sweat and
                youth, smelling fresh
                and clean

                with two other
                people it could have been love

                with us it was a
                $40 dollar fuck

                that ended with me
                trying to forget my emptiness
                and her
                waiting at the
                gas station
                for the dealer,

                to get her emptiness
                filled
                Very uplifting. Ready to start my day.

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                Paullybadboy [@] gmail.com ICQ 631384423

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                • BlackCrayon
                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                  • Jun 2003
                  • 19634

                  #9
                  i take it porn girls are your muse.
                  you don't know you're wearing a leash if you sit by the peg all day..

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                  • Grapesoda
                    So Fucking Banned
                    • Jul 2003
                    • 46234

                    #10
                    Originally posted by dyna mo
                    well played!

                    (tellin ya best meme for gfy ever !)

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                    • Grapesoda
                      So Fucking Banned
                      • Jul 2003
                      • 46234

                      #11
                      Originally posted by BlackCrayon
                      i take it porn girls are your muse.
                      wrote this stuff 10 years before I got into porn ..only wrote 3-4 since porn...


                      watch this:
                      she squeezed her lips together with just the tip
                      of her tongue sticking out of one corner

                      that's what mine looks like, sometimes it sticks out a little more but mostly it's in there hers is a big bump because she's 'italian'

                      we had to stop dating because we're both like 19, I mean we're madly in love and everything
                      but we wanna grow up a little. you shoulda seen the problems it caused
                      when we held hands in public. mostly the old ladies got upset.
                      maybe they had daughters and we worried about it. who knows?

                      so I dated this guy for 4 months, well we were together for 2 months and seeing each other for 2 months but we lived together for 1 month. he never got a job. he worked at the movies when we met. he said he couldn't get another job because he had a criminal record.

                      we never had sex: got a disease before we met and never went to the doctor. I told him I would take him, but he always said he would take care of it.

                      he really knew how to treat a girl. he was the best boyfriend I ever had. when he left he stole my car. I had to file a police report . . . .

                      -----

                      science fiction
                      ----------------
                      after my brother killed himself my mom kinda freaked out'
                      yeah, my dad got depressed too. so I didn't wanna like go ask for food to eat
                      so that's when I went into porno

                      I found him, at first I thought he was asleep,
                      but he didn't even get up to piss or anything for over 2 hours
                      he was all pale, with blood dripping out of his nose, he used a shotgun
                      his nose looked kinda weird, sorta mashed.
                      he shot himself in the chest

                      it wasn't even that messy, when we cleaned out his room,
                      we had to turn the mattress sideways to get it out the door
                      the blood just went: drip, drip, drip
                      we had to moved because of the memories

                      I'm not really too interested in doing much more porno though . . .
                      kinda boring and everything, mostly I sit home a read. the bible
                      it makes my mom happy, but I'm kinda scared I'll burn in hell
                      because everything I like is wrong.

                      so anyway I'll have my dad drop me off for the next shoot
                      do you ever fuck the girls you shoot?


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                      Family matters
                      --------------

                      . . . So I slipped my finger a in
                      and snapped a few pics . . .

                      "I used to think sex was dirty, but I've been working on it, I'm 32 now"
                      "yeah? how's that"

                      "well I got abused by my dad's boyfriend when I was a kid"
                      "that's terrible, how did that happen?"

                      "I think my dad was always gay but when my mom died, daddy
                      moved his boyfriend in about a month later, I was 10 and my sister was 3"
                      "how's your sister?"

                      "she's fucked up too."

                      When I put my dick in her hand asking her to make me hard, she froze.
                      we stopped the shoot . .
                      Last edited by Grapesoda; 12-22-2013, 10:52 AM.

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                      • dyna mo
                        just a fucking jerk
                        • Dec 2008
                        • 68184

                        #12
                        you're shitty poetry is easily 10x better than magnatard's ramblings.

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