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Grapesoda · 12-22-2013, 08:01 AM

Scars

a wicked scar, looking like
ripped jagged death
crossed her lower spine
brown mottled and deadly
left over pain

"Hollywood's a tuff town, and everyone needs a pimp,
my husband left me because I wouldn't party, I hope he doesn't find out and
come back."

"I left my three kids at my mother-in-laws, because well . . .
look at me, I couldn't trust my mom."

"You'll go to hell for fucking on your period, so I don't guess I'll be
lonely, but then again you'll go to hell for almost everything."

I took a dishcloth, dipped it in cold water,
put just a dab of dish soap on it,
got on knees
then gently
delicately worked the red spot of my carpet

carefully turning red stain to white foam,
then to just plain old wet, then to nothing
there's nothing left now
I just walked over and looked

like it never happened

but somehow
I don't think it's over

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Magnetron · 12-22-2013, 10:18 AM

These masses yearn for more.

CyberHustler · 12-22-2013, 10:58 AM

dyna mo · 12-22-2013, 11:05 AM

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<-- tear.

Grapesoda · 12-22-2013, 11:10 AM

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Originally Posted by dyna mo

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<-- tear.

dyna mo · 12-22-2013, 11:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grapesoda

well played!

Grapesoda · 12-22-2013, 11:11 AM

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Originally Posted by Magnetron

These masses yearn for more.

Empty Sensations

she had a hard flat stomach
and small firm breast
she was so tight I
had to force myself in

I felt her pulling and
grabing underneath me
coiled muscles and firm
warm skin
with the slight gleam of sweat and
youth, smelling fresh
and clean

with two other
people it could have been love

with us it was a
$40 dollar fuck

that ended with me
trying to forget my emptiness
and her
waiting at the
gas station
for the dealer,

to get her emptiness
filled

Paully · 12-22-2013, 11:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Grapesoda

Empty Sensations

she had a hard flat stomach
and small firm breast
she was so tight I
had to force myself in

I felt her pulling and
grabing underneath me
coiled muscles and firm
warm skin
with the slight gleam of sweat and
youth, smelling fresh
and clean

with two other
people it could have been love

with us it was a
$40 dollar fuck

that ended with me
trying to forget my emptiness
and her
waiting at the
gas station
for the dealer,

to get her emptiness
filled

Very uplifting. Ready to start my day.

BlackCrayon · 12-22-2013, 11:29 AM

i take it porn girls are your muse.

Grapesoda · 12-22-2013, 12:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dyna mo

well played!

(tellin ya best meme for gfy ever !)

Grapesoda · 12-22-2013, 12:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlackCrayon

i take it porn girls are your muse.

wrote this stuff 10 years before I got into porn ..only wrote 3-4 since porn...

watch this:
she squeezed her lips together with just the tip
of her tongue sticking out of one corner

that's what mine looks like, sometimes it sticks out a little more but mostly it's in there hers is a big bump because she's 'italian'

we had to stop dating because we're both like 19, I mean we're madly in love and everything
but we wanna grow up a little. you shoulda seen the problems it caused
when we held hands in public. mostly the old ladies got upset.
maybe they had daughters and we worried about it. who knows?

so I dated this guy for 4 months, well we were together for 2 months and seeing each other for 2 months but we lived together for 1 month. he never got a job. he worked at the movies when we met. he said he couldn't get another job because he had a criminal record.

we never had sex: got a disease before we met and never went to the doctor. I told him I would take him, but he always said he would take care of it.

he really knew how to treat a girl. he was the best boyfriend I ever had. when he left he stole my car. I had to file a police report . . . .

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science fiction
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after my brother killed himself my mom kinda freaked out'
yeah, my dad got depressed too. so I didn't wanna like go ask for food to eat
so that's when I went into porno

I found him, at first I thought he was asleep,
but he didn't even get up to piss or anything for over 2 hours
he was all pale, with blood dripping out of his nose, he used a shotgun
his nose looked kinda weird, sorta mashed.
he shot himself in the chest

it wasn't even that messy, when we cleaned out his room,
we had to turn the mattress sideways to get it out the door
the blood just went: drip, drip, drip
we had to moved because of the memories

I'm not really too interested in doing much more porno though . . .
kinda boring and everything, mostly I sit home a read. the bible
it makes my mom happy, but I'm kinda scared I'll burn in hell
because everything I like is wrong.

so anyway I'll have my dad drop me off for the next shoot
do you ever fuck the girls you shoot?

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Family matters
--------------

. . . So I slipped my finger a in
and snapped a few pics . . .

"I used to think sex was dirty, but I've been working on it, I'm 32 now"
"yeah? how's that"

"well I got abused by my dad's boyfriend when I was a kid"
"that's terrible, how did that happen?"

"I think my dad was always gay but when my mom died, daddy
moved his boyfriend in about a month later, I was 10 and my sister was 3"
"how's your sister?"

"she's fucked up too."

When I put my dick in her hand asking her to make me hard, she froze.
we stopped the shoot . .

dyna mo · 12-22-2013, 01:20 PM

you're shitty poetry is easily 10x better than magnatard's ramblings.

12-22-2013, 08:01 AM	#1
Grapesoda So Fucking Banned Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Montana Posts: 46,238	and here's MY shitty poetry Scars a wicked scar, looking like ripped jagged death crossed her lower spine brown mottled and deadly left over pain "Hollywood's a tuff town, and everyone needs a pimp, my husband left me because I wouldn't party, I hope he doesn't find out and come back." "I left my three kids at my mother-in-laws, because well . . . look at me, I couldn't trust my mom." "You'll go to hell for fucking on your period, so I don't guess I'll be lonely, but then again you'll go to hell for almost everything." I took a dishcloth, dipped it in cold water, put just a dab of dish soap on it, got on knees then gently delicately worked the red spot of my carpet carefully turning red stain to white foam, then to just plain old wet, then to nothing there's nothing left now I just walked over and looked like it never happened but somehow I don't think it's over --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

12-22-2013, 10:18 AM	#2
Magnetron Lord High Groundhog Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Bumblefuck, USA Posts: 1,841	These masses yearn for more. __________________ . Approach the mirrored reflection saying his name three times : "Butcher .... Butcher .... Butcher ....." and wait to see if this Bogeyman urban legend manifests in the background, looming over shoulder While your neighbors were busy killing off everyone in the neighborhood with your own butcher knife in hand concealed behind your back you stood for ever before the window saying nothing

12-22-2013, 11:29 AM	#9
BlackCrayon Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Ottawa Posts: 19,631	i take it porn girls are your muse. __________________ you don't know you're wearing a leash if you sit by the peg all day..

12-22-2013, 10:58 AM	#3
CyberHustler Unregistered Abuser Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 25,973

12-22-2013, 11:05 AM	#4
dyna mo The People's Post Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: invisible 7-11 Posts: 64,814	. <-- tear.

12-22-2013, 01:20 PM	#12
dyna mo The People's Post Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: invisible 7-11 Posts: 64,814	you're shitty poetry is easily 10x better than magnatard's ramblings.