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MyLiveCamShow · 09-22-2013, 02:56 PM

Alright, almost launch time www.shopnoveltiesstore.com need you guys to critique the site and make suggestions, in process of adding more products but you get the jist with what's there for now.

Thanks!

galleryseek · 09-22-2013, 02:59 PM

Issues, in order of when I noticed them:

1. Orange on gray navigation bar "Home", terrible contrast. Make it a bold white instead, or make the gradient more close to black.
2. "Add To Cart" buttons don't stick out enough. Not enough padding between the text and button.
3. "NEWSLETTER" on the right sidebar. Tiny text, doesn't look correct center aligned when the text above of it is left aligned.
4. Take the Subscribe button styling there and use that for the "Add To Cart" buttons.
5. Footer. Right align the social icons, too much unused white space.

MyLiveCamShow · 09-22-2013, 03:04 PM

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Originally Posted by galleryseek

Issues, in order of when I noticed them:

1. Orange on gray navigation bar "Home", terrible contrast. Make it a bold white instead, or make the gradient more close to black.
2. "Add To Cart" buttons don't stick out enough. Not enough padding between the text and button.
3. "NEWSLETTER" on the right sidebar. Tiny text, doesn't look correct center aligned when the text above of it is left aligned.
4. Take the Subscribe button styling there and use that for the "Add To Cart" buttons.
5. Footer. Right align the social icons, too much unused white space.

Pointed out a lot for me, thank you keep it coming want to have a pretty solid and simple site. Much appreciated.

whOaKemosabe · 09-22-2013, 06:52 PM

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MyLiveCamShow · 09-22-2013, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by whOaKemosabe

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it's not.

topsiteking · 09-22-2013, 07:41 PM

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Originally Posted by galleryseek

Issues, in order of when I noticed them:

1. Orange on gray navigation bar "Home", terrible contrast. Make it a bold white instead, or make the gradient more close to black.
2. "Add To Cart" buttons don't stick out enough. Not enough padding between the text and button.
3. "NEWSLETTER" on the right sidebar. Tiny text, doesn't look correct center aligned when the text above of it is left aligned.
4. Take the Subscribe button styling there and use that for the "Add To Cart" buttons.
5. Footer. Right align the social icons, too much unused white space.

Agree with number five very much so.
Really ruins every page.

dillfly2000 · 09-22-2013, 09:44 PM

Link the pics on the "About" page.

09-22-2013, 02:56 PM	#1
MyLiveCamShow Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 70	Critique the site Alright, almost launch time www.shopnoveltiesstore.com need you guys to critique the site and make suggestions, in process of adding more products but you get the jist with what's there for now. Thanks! __________________ MyLiveCamShow.com

09-22-2013, 09:44 PM	#7
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09-22-2013, 02:59 PM	#2
galleryseek Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 8,234	Issues, in order of when I noticed them: 1. Orange on gray navigation bar "Home", terrible contrast. Make it a bold white instead, or make the gradient more close to black. 2. "Add To Cart" buttons don't stick out enough. Not enough padding between the text and button. 3. "NEWSLETTER" on the right sidebar. Tiny text, doesn't look correct center aligned when the text above of it is left aligned. 4. Take the Subscribe button styling there and use that for the "Add To Cart" buttons. 5. Footer. Right align the social icons, too much unused white space.

09-22-2013, 06:52 PM	#4
whOaKemosabe So Fucking Stoned... Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,968	is yr nam jusitn