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  • lezinterracial
    Confirmed User
    • Jul 2012
    • 3117
    #1

    Tips for writing erotic porn?

    Tips for writing erotic stories? I have written a few stories involving interracial lesbians. My friend read them and said they suck. I do agree.

    I have read on a site about horror stories that you should just keep writing. I am gonna be doing that. Anything else?
    Last edited by lezinterracial; 05-22-2013, 02:18 PM.
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    • xNetworx
      So Fucking What
      • Jan 2004
      • 14445
      #2
      There is a guy here named SleazyDream who has incredible writing skills and even knows about "Yes Signals"

      Let him be your guide to understanding the creation of truly erotic literature.

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        • Relentless
          www.EngineFood.com
          • Aug 2006
          • 5697
          #3
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          Let me know the specifics of what you want written and I'll take care of the rest.
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            • $5 submissions
              I help you SUCCEED
              • Nov 2003
              • 32195
              #4
              I don't write erotica but here is what works for me

              1) GET THE ATTENTION OF THE READER: The title must slap the reader's eyeballs

              2) QUICKLY CONNECT WITH A NEED: For the reader to read your stuff completely, you have to quickly filter the reader based on the NEED your text addresses. In other words, make it clear that you 'get' the reader.

              3) SHOW THE READER THAT YOU HAVE THE ANSWER TO HIS/HER NEEDS: Don't say it, SHOW IT. Use examples.

              4) CALL TO ACTION - All content, even 'informative' content, must CALL the reader to action or else it is worthless content.

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                • lezinterracial
                  Confirmed User
                  • Jul 2012
                  • 3117
                  #5
                  Thanks for all the input. Kind of fun thinking of scenarios. Writing it down and describing the sexual situations seem to be the difficult part.
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                    • bronco67
                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                      • Dec 2006
                      • 29032
                      #6
                      No one can teach you to be erotic. Either you are or you aren't.

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                        • _Richard_
                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                          • Oct 2006
                          • 30991
                          #7
                          Originally posted by lezinterracial
                          Thanks for all the input. Kind of fun thinking of scenarios. Writing it down and describing the sexual situations seem to be the difficult part.
                          that's because you're being all writer about it

                          step 1:

                          go to porn site

                          step 2:

                          find needed niche

                          step 3:

                          watch and be.. 'a-mused'

                          huck huck huck

                          seriously tho

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                            • Colmike9
                              (>^_^)b
                              • Dec 2011
                              • 7230
                              #8
                              Stick to MLA, don't repeat words, be descriptive but don't overdo it, good grammar is huge, have one or two fun twists that are also hot, think about what you fantasize about, everyone knows how sex feels and positions so don't make it boring with those details, paint a good picture of what is going on and keep it consistent, etc.

                              btw, I was kidding about MLA unless necessary
                              Last edited by Colmike9; 05-22-2013, 03:41 PM.
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                                • helterskelter808
                                  So Fucking Banned
                                  • Sep 2010
                                  • 3405
                                  #9
                                  Pretty sure he's talking about writing actual stories, guys; not splog posts.

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                                    • CaptainHowdy
                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                      • Dec 2004
                                      • 94727
                                      #10

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                                        • lezinterracial
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Jul 2012
                                          • 3117
                                          #11
                                          I do need to pick up a copy of "Lady Chatterly's Lover". I hate to admit I haven't read it. Timeless storyline of opposites attract.

                                          Maybe I can copy the old recycled sitcoms. Black woman and white woman stuck in an elevator - lez sex ensues, Good white girl has evil twin that seduces all her asian friends - lez sex ensues, interracial couple goes to Hawaii and find a cursed tiki idol - lez sex ensues.
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