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cinsitycash · 02-07-2003, 10:14 AM

http://cell.mp3update.com Listen to this and tell me what you think please.

There are a total of three songs on this. I need feedback.

machineg · 02-07-2003, 10:21 AM

I like it ...
Id like to hear a heavy bass rif in the chorus in the first one .. the song had total potential to get heavy as hell ... but lacked a good deep end.

Other than that,... Id save that to my drive.

Raph · 02-07-2003, 10:23 AM

not bad at all :D

I liked the vocals, they did sound weird a couple times, but overall they were okay

the drums lack a little heaviness for the type of song

stevo · 02-07-2003, 10:35 AM

Sounds pretty good... "Kinda" sounds like one of my buddies bands: Indium

cinsitycash · 02-07-2003, 10:49 AM

Thanks for the feed back guys.

cinsitycash · 02-07-2003, 11:23 AM

Keep on posting please.... please.

Sappy · 02-07-2003, 11:35 AM

Reminds me of Incubus. But, a much less sucky Incubus.

KRL · 02-07-2003, 11:45 AM

I liked Drifted the most of the 3. The beginning was really good. Then it kind of went off in another direction from where I thought it was going.

Evolutions was interesting also, but needs some tweaking.

Release was ok, but not as good as the other 2.

The vocals were good.

You do need to get a sound engineer on all of them to get everything in balance and lay some reverb to give everything some depth and power.

Overall pretty good.

The Truth Hurts · 02-07-2003, 12:03 PM

Songs were very good... but singer doesn't sound as though he's mixed right.. maybe cut his levels a bit, cause he drowns out the music quite a bit.
Drums were a bit muddy.

goBigtime · 02-07-2003, 12:14 PM

nice intro on "evolutions"...

I agree that the vocals mix doesn't sound right...

goBigtime · 02-07-2003, 12:21 PM

As long we're asking people to have a listen...

Looking Star -- Wrecked!

Looking Star -- Playin It'

Looking Star -- Can't Read You

Any comments on this stuff?

cinsitycash · 02-07-2003, 02:14 PM

Cool, thanks. Constructive crtiticism is great. Keep the post coming!!!

cinsitycash · 02-07-2003, 08:27 PM

Ok, let's try this again guys. Keep them coming.

cinsitycash · 02-08-2003, 03:53 PM

Back to the top it goes...

cinsitycash · 02-08-2003, 06:43 PM

Scott McD · 02-08-2003, 06:46 PM

Sheeesh. Shameless bumps...

I would comment but don't listen to any music like that so my opinion wouldn't count...

Rex · 02-08-2003, 07:49 PM

sounds great that is my type of music

02-07-2003, 10:14 AM	#1
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	Listen to this. http://cell.mp3update.com Listen to this and tell me what you think please. There are a total of three songs on this. I need feedback. __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-07-2003, 10:21 AM	#2
machineg Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 1,090	I like it ... Id like to hear a heavy bass rif in the chorus in the first one .. the song had total potential to get heavy as hell ... but lacked a good deep end. Other than that,... Id save that to my drive. __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

02-07-2003, 10:23 AM	#3
Raph Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Montreal Posts: 439	not bad at all :D I liked the vocals, they did sound weird a couple times, but overall they were okay the drums lack a little heaviness for the type of song __________________ Raph

02-07-2003, 10:49 AM	#5
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	Thanks for the feed back guys. __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-07-2003, 11:23 AM	#6
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	Keep on posting please.... please. __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-07-2003, 10:35 AM	#4
stevo Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 2,051	Sounds pretty good... "Kinda" sounds like one of my buddies bands: Indium

02-07-2003, 11:35 AM	#7
Sappy Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 460	Reminds me of Incubus. But, a much less sucky Incubus.

02-07-2003, 11:45 AM	#8
KRL Entrepreneur Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 31,429	I liked Drifted the most of the 3. The beginning was really good. Then it kind of went off in another direction from where I thought it was going. Evolutions was interesting also, but needs some tweaking. Release was ok, but not as good as the other 2. The vocals were good. You do need to get a sound engineer on all of them to get everything in balance and lay some reverb to give everything some depth and power. Overall pretty good. __________________ If you would like to develop your domains, you can lease inexpensive foreign labor from the leaders in the field at iWebmasters.com TO LOWER YOUR COSTS AND INCREASE YOUR PRODUCTION! * * * * * * * * * * * * Domains Adult News KRL's Newsletter Biz Tips Just Listed Domains

02-07-2003, 12:03 PM	#9
The Truth Hurts Zph7YXfjMhg Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: In Your Skull Posts: 15,305	Songs were very good... but singer doesn't sound as though he's mixed right.. maybe cut his levels a bit, cause he drowns out the music quite a bit. Drums were a bit muddy.

02-07-2003, 12:14 PM	#10
goBigtime Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 7,761	nice intro on "evolutions"... I agree that the vocals mix doesn't sound right...

02-07-2003, 12:21 PM	#11
goBigtime Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 7,761	As long we're asking people to have a listen... Looking Star -- Wrecked! Looking Star -- Playin It' Looking Star -- Can't Read You Any comments on this stuff?

02-07-2003, 02:14 PM	#12
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	Cool, thanks. Constructive crtiticism is great. Keep the post coming!!! __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-07-2003, 08:27 PM	#13
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	Ok, let's try this again guys. Keep them coming. __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-08-2003, 03:53 PM	#14
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	Back to the top it goes... __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-08-2003, 06:43 PM	#15
cinsitycash Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 27	yo __________________ http://cell.mp3update.com PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LISTEN TO THIS DEMO. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FEEDBACK WHEN YOU LISTEN TO IT. YOU CAN POST ON GFY IF YOU WANT TOO.

02-08-2003, 06:46 PM	#16
Scott McD Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 67,795	Sheeesh. Shameless bumps... I would comment but don't listen to any music like that so my opinion wouldn't count... __________________ I Buy My High Quality Traffic Here, You Should Too!

02-08-2003, 07:49 PM	#17
Rex Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: ohio Posts: 2,241	sounds great that is my type of music __________________ I don't own RexMag anymore.