new exgf video shot sligtly different...what do you think?

IMHO the whole POINT of the ex-gf niche is to make it look like 1) the boyfriend shot the video or 2) the girlfriend took it of herself, for her boyfriend.

The video sample looks nice though

I like this chick

every chick is someone ex gf, this slut looks busted in every which way though.

looks 2 much pro for me...

Just saying, the last shot looks a little "pro" and there isn't dialog. What are the thoughts on dialog? There is always banter in a real ama shoot, copying it isn't that hard. Does it help? The lighting is right, though, looks exactly like a hand cam in a room. Opinion.

Lighting is tooo good and its not really shaky enough. Also hearing the guy talking a little would be good.

If it were a BF shooting her she would be more talkative to him. Probably less professional and not faking it.

The shooting is fine, not every BF has a shit camera or doesn't know how to use it. And a site of this content has to have so many interpretations as it would be shot by many not a few.

But there would be more going on between the guy and girl.

Not this script but something like this to start.

Opening shot 1

Opening shot 2

Opening shot 3

Opening shot 4

Each girl must do it her way, some nervous a bit and some clearly not. It was shot for a different market and needs to be altered a bit but it gives you some ideas.

Then closing maybe something like this.

Closing shot

Again needs changing to suit the actual niche, the girls talks to her boyfriend about the fun she has doing the video for him. But the way she climaxes would be the way a GF climaxes in front of her lover if they were shooting a video. Don't ask how I know that.

Sorry don't have specific samples of how to do it and it's obvious these are for a different market, just to give you a few thought. The script needs changing but the basic idea is she's doing for her lover as a prelude to a fuck and teasing the crap out of him. Each girl will react differently to the camera, bring that out.

The camera might be shaking while he strokes his penis and the girl teases him to. Don't ask me how you achieve that one.

Most Ex GF content shot professionally IMO looks like 2 strangers in the same room.

I think that if she were shooting for her bf, she'd be much more engaged with the camera/cameraman, not looking everywhere else but. Remember, she's trying to tease a guy who is 4 feet away.

Not bad. Let the girl shoot it!

Spot on.

If it's a BF shooting his GF it's odds on it's a prequel to sex. She's going to be teasing the crap out of him. the moment she goes into "pornstar" mode he's going to think WTF.

She will probably cum for real as girls can do that and have sex right afterwards.

There will be eye, body and oral contact between them. Every scene will be different as it will be a different couple.

So there is no format it should be shot to. Once you say it should be this or that, you start to shoot it all the same. And fake it.

So ignore the above.

But remember, this is a girl being shot by a guy who has had his dick in her mouth, pussy and maybe even ass.

Not 2 strangers who met 20 minutes ago, meeting for money and will never see each other after today. IMO to get it spot on by a pro and a model is the hardest job in shooting. I should know.

looks a little too pro and needs a bit of adlib.

Good vid though

Too pro-am, simply because you need to do it in a messy bedroom, EXGF tapes that are any good are never in a well lit room and she doesn't strip on some traditional style arm chair. Stick to bedrooms and bathrooms.

yep
I wouldn't put this in the exgf niche at all..i would put this is the "porn dude shoots girl in hotelroom, niche"

thanks for the feedback!!