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12-13-2010, 07:24 PM
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..I Heart Cannibal Corpse
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What is Wrong with this Tour?
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12-13-2010, 07:30 PM
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Needs more pizzaz
 If you read it its ok if you know the fetish but most wont do that you need something in the header to grab attention, the pix and stuff was pretty far down |
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12-13-2010, 07:49 PM
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This text is horrible. Redundant ideas and short choppy, incomplete sentences
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Pay someone to rewrite this ASAP. I mean this in the most constructive way possible. Please do this.
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12-13-2010, 09:44 PM
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..I Heart Cannibal Corpse
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thanks frasier. I did that for keyword purposes. guess i went a little apeshit?
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