Hello all, can I get some feedback on this trailer for ghettohoochies.com?

**Morgan** · 02-14-2005, 01:02 PM

I like it ;)

**TDF** · 02-14-2005, 01:03 PM

ghetto is my middle name

**katdaddy** · 02-14-2005, 01:15 PM

haha i like it!

**vcity** · 02-14-2005, 01:20 PM

Awesome

Good work - effects, transitions, music, etc... Looks Great!

**Arowanna** · 02-14-2005, 01:23 PM

nice trailer

**Thumbking** · 02-14-2005, 02:04 PM

not bad...

**Playa-Deak** · 02-14-2005, 03:36 PM

Thnx all for their feedback...

**dasexi1** · 02-14-2005, 04:01 PM

wow nice job Deak!!

but um ya know i like the ones u star in better :D

**nico-t** · 02-14-2005, 04:25 PM

looking good man, nice work!

**UniversalPass Pete** · 02-14-2005, 04:25 PM

Looks good!

**Playa-Deak** · 02-14-2005, 06:11 PM

Thnx all for feedback & compliments. I'm thankful...

**CoinsCuties** · 02-14-2005, 06:55 PM

Looks HOT

**latinasojourn** · 02-14-2005, 07:23 PM

well, it's good, better than most.

but always remember the CONTENT of the trailer is king, not the visual gimmicks.

and you have a great story line, and some great little bits of interesting footage.

if you have to stay under 60 secs i think you are better off putting your logo on every frame (emboss lower right corner, rather that show a still frame leader front and back)---because you want to fill the time with hot content---if the content impresses they will come to the site---and if it does not they won't---and if the trailer is really hot, let people hotlink it like crazy (as long as your URL is on every frame)

just 2 secs of very hot image is better than a dissolve, fade, etc. for conversion purposes---that's what stays in the surfer's mind as he navigates towards your join page.

**Screaming** · 02-14-2005, 07:26 PM

looks good to me dude

**pornguy** · 02-14-2005, 07:29 PM

Looked pretty good to me.

**Spunky** · 02-14-2005, 07:35 PM

Works for me..I'm liking it

**DWB** · 02-14-2005, 08:24 PM

Geat clip man.

**brizzad** · 02-14-2005, 08:29 PM

Originally posted by Playa-Deak

My initial plan was to give it a soft beginning with a strong ending leaving the viewer wanting to see more. I wanted to play more with the outside scene at the beginning but the hissing from the wind was to much so I substituted sound with text and non-audio video. I brought the sound of the original video back towards the end to lustfully play with the viewers lustful being then a solid STOP in action... In turn, making him wanting to see more...
Now, before anything. This trailer is "unofficial. Its not approved by the guys that run the site. I haven't shown em the trailer yet. I'll like to get feedback cuz I talked to them about some editing work...

The Trailer:
www.chicagofreaks.com/ghettohoochies.wmv

that girl is fucking sexy as hell!

does master p care that you janked his shit?

**Major (Tom)** · 02-14-2005, 08:43 PM

that ttboy?

duke

**Morgan** · 02-15-2005, 07:05 PM

Originally posted by DukeSkywalker

that ttboy?

duke

Yup, that's TT. That is my http://www.ghettohoochies.com

Great work Deak!! Makes my trailers look like currrrap~!

**yellowmenace** · 02-15-2005, 07:08 PM

Love it!

**Playa-Deak** · 02-15-2005, 07:22 PM

Originally posted by Ganjasaurus

Yup, that's TT. That is my http://www.ghettohoochies.com

Great work Deak!! Makes my trailers look like currrrap~!

Thnx a milly Ganja... I'm gonna shoot you #2 either Wednesday or Thursday.

Thnx everyone for their feedback/compliments

@latinasojourn, I VERY well understand what you saying. Thats actually part of the plan.This is a rough draft. Gonna do a few more small tweaks and its a wrap for this... Thnx for the feed everyone!

Hello all, can I get some feedback on this trailer for ghettohoochies.com?

Hello all, can I get some feedback on this trailer for ghettohoochies.com?

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