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  • Silent_Thunder
    Confirmed User
    • Feb 2004
    • 5258

    #1

    If your english language skills are good, please look inside!

    Hi, could you look through this text and correct any mistakes you will notice. Grammar ( especially artciles ), logical, spelling, etc... Thank you very much, this is very important for me!

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    NOTES OF BOOKING A TICKET FOR A FLIGHT

    Step 1
    When you get a booking request you have to establish ticket record and to look if there is any vacant seat left.

    Step 2
    ? If there is no vacant seat left, add the request to waiting list and inform enquirer about the request. You are done with this request.
    ? If there is a vacant seat left, you have to check if the booking request is firm.

    Step 3
    ? If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform enquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.
    ? If the booking request isn?t firm, add it to the provisional booking requests list and ask enquirer for a confirmation for this request.

    Step 4
    ? If you get the confirmation for the booking request, add it to the firm booking requests list.
    ? If you don?t get the confirmation for the booking request, cancel this booking and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it is confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list.

    Step 5
    Inform enquirer about the firm booking request and check if there is enough credit left for the ticket.

    Step 6
    ? If the credit is good, you have to up-date cash record and then print the ticket. You are done with this request.
    ? If the credit isn?t good, you have to demand for the payment.

    Step 7
    ? If you receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, up-date cash record and then print the ticket. You are done with this request.
    ? If you don?t receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, cancel this booking request and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it?s confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Go to step 5.

    -------------END OF THE CODE--------------

    Thanks for any corrections you will make.
  • alexg
    IL4L.com
    • Aug 2003
    • 11287

    #2
    nah i don't feel like doing it

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    • Silent_Thunder
      Confirmed User
      • Feb 2004
      • 5258

      #3
      Originally posted by alexg
      nah i don't feel like doing it
      Just try, you may find it entertaining

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      • spideriux
        Registered User
        • Feb 2005
        • 17227

        #4
        my english language is only normal :/
        FreeOnes

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        • Manowar
          jellyfish  
          • Dec 2003
          • 71528

          #5
          Originally posted by alexg
          nah i don't feel like doing it

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          • Silent_Thunder
            Confirmed User
            • Feb 2004
            • 5258

            #6
            Originally posted by spideriux
            my english language is only normal :/
            Hi mate, glad to see some people from our motherland

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            • gangbangjoe
              Ronin
              • May 2004
              • 17693

              #7
              Originally posted by spideriux
              my english language is only normal :/


              im german and my english sucks

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              • bdld
                $100,000
                • Dec 2001
                • 11452

                #8
                i would if i was bored.

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                • Spunky
                  I need a beer
                  • Jun 2002
                  • 133978

                  #9
                  I dint gets no edumacations

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                  • Silent_Thunder
                    Confirmed User
                    • Feb 2004
                    • 5258

                    #10
                    Originally posted by Manowar

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                    • Silent_Thunder
                      Confirmed User
                      • Feb 2004
                      • 5258

                      #11
                      Originally posted by bdld
                      i would if i was bored.
                      I give you an opportunity to show how clever you are. Take it!

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                      • Homer
                        Confirmed User
                        • Feb 2005
                        • 6780

                        #12
                        My english is not very good, but I don't see any major mistakes

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                        • Silent_Thunder
                          Confirmed User
                          • Feb 2004
                          • 5258

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Homer
                          My english is not very good, but I don't see any major mistakes
                          Thanks

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                          • thefool
                            Confirmed User
                            • Jan 2005
                            • 1593

                            #14
                            Step 1
                            When you get a booking request you have to establish a ticket record and look to see if there are any vacant seats left.

                            Step 2
                            ? If there are no vacant seats left, add the request to the waiting list and inform the enquirer about the request. Your request is now complete.
                            ? If there is a vacant seat available, you then must check to see if the booking request is firm.

                            Step 3
                            ? If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.
                            ? If the booking request isn?t firm, add it to the provisional booking requests list and ask the enquirer for a confirmation for this request.

                            Step 4
                            ? If you get the confirmation for the booking request, add it to the firm booking requests list.
                            ? If you don?t get the confirmation for the booking request, cancel this booking and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it is confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list.

                            Step 5
                            Inform the enquirer about the firm booking request and check if there is enough credit available for the ticket.

                            Step 6
                            ? If the credit is good, you have to update the cash record and then print the ticket. This request is now complete.
                            ? If the credit isn?t available, then you must demand for the payment.

                            Step 7
                            ? If you receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, update the cash record and then print the ticket. This request is now complete.
                            ? If you don?t receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, cancel this booking request and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it?s confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Go to step 5.

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                            • Silent_Thunder
                              Confirmed User
                              • Feb 2004
                              • 5258

                              #15
                              thefool, thank you very very much!


                              I looked through all of your corrections and I liked this sentence the most:
                              "Your request is now complete."

                              Again thanks, now I feel that I will get a nice grade for this stuff

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                              • Tala
                                Fucked if I know
                                • Dec 2002
                                • 23368

                                #16
                                Step 3
                                If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.
                                Mind the spaces. A small oversight can lead to a small grade reduction.

                                Step 3
                                If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.

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                                • Silent_Thunder
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Feb 2004
                                  • 5258

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by Tala
                                  Mind the spaces. A small oversight can lead to a small grade reduction.

                                  Step 3
                                  If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.
                                  Yep, I fixed it. But still thanks!
                                  Actually I didnt expect so much help on this from GFY!

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                                  • Tala
                                    Fucked if I know
                                    • Dec 2002
                                    • 23368

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by Silent_Thunder
                                    Yep, I fixed it. But still thanks!
                                    Actually I didnt expect so much help on this from GFY!
                                    To be honest, GFY is one of those places where folks like to help each other, but there's this whole ego thing that likes to get in the way. Sift through the bullshit to find the occasional diamond.

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                                    • thefool
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Jan 2005
                                      • 1593

                                      #19
                                      I dont mind offering advice... after all when I need it, I hope someone will help me basically it sounded pretty good, just need to watch your is/are usage

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                                      • thefool
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • Jan 2005
                                        • 1593

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by Silent_Thunder
                                        thefool, thank you very very much!


                                        I looked through all of your corrections and I liked this sentence the most:
                                        "Your request is now complete."

                                        Again thanks, now I feel that I will get a nice grade for this stuff

                                        You're very welcome

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