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  • Dynamix
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    • Jan 2004
    • 2910

    #1

    Judge this design for me.

    It's going to be used for a cartoonist/illustrator friend of mine. Eventually two cartoons will be integrated into the header as it looks a bit sparse right now.

    Give me your thoughts


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  • shima
    Confirmed User
    • May 2003
    • 1753

    #2
    hot!
    whats his ICQ?

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    • UK1
      Confirmed User
      • Jun 2003
      • 289

      #3
      looks nice..i like the color scheme
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      • Dynamix
        G F Y not
        • Jan 2004
        • 2910

        #4
        Originally posted by shima
        hot!
        whats his ICQ?
        He doesn't have one yet, site will go live tonite. If you have questions you can contact my ICQ for the time being, 250 142 484.

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        • Persius
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          • Jul 2003
          • 11779

          #5
          i like the site

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          • shima
            Confirmed User
            • May 2003
            • 1753

            #6
            Originally posted by Dynamix
            He doesn't have one yet, site will go live tonite. If you have questions you can contact my ICQ for the time being, 250 142 484.
            This is great job!
            If you did it, you are serious competition!

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            • Dynamix
              G F Y not
              • Jan 2004
              • 2910

              #7
              Originally posted by shima
              This is great job!
              If you did it, you are serious competition!
              Just finishing it up My only hesitation so far was the style of the "main" subheader .. doesn't quite fit the rest of the look so I'm still playing with it.

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              • Heather Hamptons
                Confirmed User
                • Oct 2003
                • 2306

                #8
                Looks good...but reminds me of Kazaa
                SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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                • IwantU Bryan
                  Confirmed User
                  • Jan 2005
                  • 1764

                  #9
                  Looks ok to me
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                  • Jayo
                    Confirmed User
                    • Jan 2005
                    • 854

                    #10
                    NICE design, really pro!
                    SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60. Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                    • shima
                      Confirmed User
                      • May 2003
                      • 1753

                      #11
                      I would suggest 2 ways:
                      1. You can either make it all straight, like the little box on the left.
                      2. You can make it all unaligned, like the header. I mean place the text in the unaligned boxed.. Could look really cool.

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                      • thediablo
                        Confirmed User
                        • Aug 2003
                        • 630

                        #12
                        nice.

                        some suggestions.
                        Change the MAIN title text (the big green one on ure right)
                        maybe remove the stroke and make it look more smooth, and try another Typo, Futura always work

                        and i would prolly change the typo of "Most Recent Clients" to something else

                        But looks very cool!


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                        • Dynamix
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                          • Jan 2004
                          • 2910

                          #13
                          Updated version..


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                          • thediablo
                            Confirmed User
                            • Aug 2003
                            • 630

                            #14
                            yup much better :D
                            i would still tweak the "main" make the Chars more close... and prolly add a very light Gray Glow... so it looks more smooth !

                            :D

                            Looking good man!

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                            • Dynamix
                              G F Y not
                              • Jan 2004
                              • 2910

                              #15
                              one last update and I think it's time to start slicing thanks for the input everyone


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                              • Nickless
                                Confirmed User
                                • Aug 2003
                                • 1955

                                #16
                                looks awesome, you made the layout or is it a premade template?

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                                • TrumpCash_Dave
                                  Its almost time
                                  • Dec 2002
                                  • 13009

                                  #17
                                  looks good to me

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                                  • newbreed
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Nov 2003
                                    • 9898

                                    #18
                                    How come you never finished my TGP design? And further, how come none of the designs you did for that promo looked that good?

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                                    • Dynamix
                                      G F Y not
                                      • Jan 2004
                                      • 2910

                                      #19
                                      Originally posted by Nickless
                                      looks awesome, you made the layout or is it a premade template?
                                      Thanks, just made it all from scratch today

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                                      • Dynamix
                                        G F Y not
                                        • Jan 2004
                                        • 2910

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by newbreed
                                        How come you never finished my TGP design? And further, how come none of the designs you did for that promo looked that good?
                                        Hit you up on ICQ several days ago, never got a reply. None of my TGP's have ever reached this level, whether on sale or not. I excel in mainstream design, just can't ever find clients so I switched to doing TGP's and still have a lot to learn about adult design.

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                                        • newbreed
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Nov 2003
                                          • 9898

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by Dynamix
                                          Hit you up on ICQ several days ago, never got a reply. None of my TGP's have ever reached this level, whether on sale or not. I excel in mainstream design, just can't ever find clients so I switched to doing TGP's and still have a lot to learn about adult design.

                                          Fair enough. I never got any other message from you though.

                                          Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                          I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                          fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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