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Old 03-19-2006, 05:21 AM  
Silent_Thunder
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404 text

I'm highly interested in how words, sentences and even punctuation affect visitors. As english isn't my primary language, writing even a few appealing sentences requires lots of efforts. Could you take a look at my 404 text and tell me how it could be improved? The mission of this sentence is to make visitor look bellow

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Unfortunately, the page you were trying to view doesn't exist,
but why don't you look bellow for a great offer that will satisfy all your desires 100% guaranteed!!!
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or

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I coudn't find the page you were looking for, but the good news is, that while looking for it, I found a great offer and I'm showing it only for you as I like you a lot!
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