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First .. Make up .. sorry but it's horrid .. She looks like a street walker, unless that's the look you're going for .. but according to these pics . its not ..
Second poses .. she's not posing well .. Look around on some glam sites, or photography sites .. make a collection of poses you like .. Print them out and have them on hand during a shoot .. third Location Location location .. You don't have a Location .. Posters pined up on the wall just don't work .. forth, Her head posistion .. notice how her head is always up .. Not good .. we're looking up her nostrils .. Yikes .. her chin looks awful. Most women look better At eye level And they're face should be straighter .. Non e of that Tilt crap .. Lastly .. you heard me mention EYE LEVEL , I can't stress that enough .. Pics are always better at eye level .. This is the way we see, hense the way you should shoot .. Unless it's not what you want .. I can go on for a very long time .. but I'll leave you with these thoughts .. correct these things and I guarentee you'll get better pics ....
good luck
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