Okay, I downloaded it, and here are my opinions:
1 - 65 meg for what? Not a question of the content (it was pretty boring to watch, honestly) but because the image size was larger than it needed to be to get the quality. You could have made the screen size a little smaller (not much) and it would have looked fine full screen. 30 meg would still be too much for this, I think.
2 - the camera movements are fairly annoying. If you are going to do that handheld stuff, you might want to invest in a flowpod (
http://www.creativevideo.co.uk/gimme...tem&item=vz-fp ) or similar type product. As you go to higher defiinition, camera shake is way more obvious.
3 - if you do have camera shake, use a motion tracker within your editing software and try to smooth it out. It will take some processing, but the end result is worth it.
4 - plan your camera moves a little better. When you pan to the mirror the first time, I can see you also stepping back because you went too close to the model and will appear in the mirror if you stayed in place. Do a test run first, check your angles, mark the floor or whatever you have to do, and make sure all of your shots work smoothly without issue. The camera work should never get in the way of the porn.
Good luck... you are certainly on the right track
Alex